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Woh toh zindagi sa chalegaa mehndi ke raang ke tarah,
Lakin apni khushboo chod gaya inn sansoo main chandan ke tarah
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«Reply #1 on: May 18, 2005, 10:18:03 AM » |
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KHUSHBOO KI TARAH AAPKE PAAS BIKHAER JAYENGE
SUKUN BANKAR DIL MAIN UTAR JAYENGE
MEHSSOSS KARNE KI KOSHISH TO KIJIYE
DOOR HAI PHIR PAAS NAZAR AAYENGE
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #2 on: May 19, 2005, 05:06:54 AM » |
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wah wah wah.......nice.....kya baat hai......cool!!!
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sandhaya
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«Reply #3 on: May 19, 2005, 05:33:57 AM » |
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good Isha...................nice every one .............
mehndi hai khusi ka prateek haaton ko rachati hai
dil main utarti hai uski khusbu saanson ko mehkati hai
ki hum tuh takte hi rahe uske haathon ki taraf
humari needon ko bhi uski yaadein abh tadhpati hai
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #4 on: May 19, 2005, 06:19:59 AM » |
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wah wah wah.......really nice sandhaya......good work!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: May 19, 2005, 09:47:44 AM » |
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yati , isha aur sandhya ji nice work ,
ek nazar dekh ke ham jaan gaye
aap kyaa chiiz hain pehchaan gaye
phir bhii zinda hoon ajab baat ye hai
kab se vo leke merii jaan gaye
hum jo aaye the teri mehfil mein
dil gaye haath se imaan gaye
jis raah par farishte na pahuche
us jagah aaj se insaan gaye
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«Reply #6 on: May 19, 2005, 09:54:03 AM » |
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nice work alll.................keep it up..........!!!!
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sandhaya
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«Reply #7 on: May 19, 2005, 10:04:23 AM » |
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sukhriya Isha ji and CHiraag ji ......and nice work chiraag.
kya pehchana hai usse ye bataiye
chup na rahiye kuch tuh farmaiye
kaise li hai usne aapki jaan bina kanjar
ye kissa katal-e-chiraag hume bhi sunaiye
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chiraaaaaaaaag
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«Reply #8 on: May 19, 2005, 11:41:03 AM » |
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aapke sawal bade kahatarnak hote hain sandhya ji ..... subkuch jannachahte ho bas ik sawal mein ......
'mahood duranni sahab' ki kuch lines likh raha hoon gaur farmain
saare badan ka Khuun pasiine mein jal gaya
itna chale ke jism hamara pighal gaya
chalthe ki gin rahe the musibat ke raat din
dam lene ham jo baith gaye dam nikal gaya
achha hua jo rah mein thokar lagi hame
ham gir pade to sara zamana sambhal gaya
vehshat mein koi saath hamara na de saka
daaman ki fikr ki to girebaa' nikal gaya
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«Reply #9 on: May 19, 2005, 01:31:14 PM » |
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nice work by all.
wah chirag ji,aap sach me bohat hi khoobsurat likhte hain,keep writing.
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«Reply #10 on: May 19, 2005, 03:45:52 PM » |
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arre bohot acha likha sab ne!!! isha bohot hi achi shuruwat hai!!!!!!!!! keep it up kuddiye!
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #11 on: May 20, 2005, 05:17:54 AM » |
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Thanks all for appreciating and meena ji tusi ta funny bhi ho ji.......thanks tho for appreciating
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sandhaya
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«Reply #12 on: May 20, 2005, 10:33:11 AM » |
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ji hum tuh bas aise hi aapko khich rahe the ......chirrag ji ........
Teri hasti ko pehchan ne ki kosish ki thi ek
tumhe acha na laga tuh hume maaf kaijiye
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«Reply #13 on: May 25, 2005, 06:33:37 AM » |
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zindagi jab bhi teri bajam mein laati hai hamen
ye zamin chand se behatar nazar aati hai hamen
surkh phulon se mahak uthati hain dil ki rahen
din dhale yun teri aawaz bulaati hai hamen
yaad teri kabhi dastak kabhi saragoshi se
raat ke pichhale prahar roz jagaati hai hamen .
har mulaqat ka anjaam judai kyun hai
ab to har vaqt yahi baat satati hai hamen (NM)
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«Reply #14 on: May 25, 2005, 06:43:54 AM » |
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"har mulaqat ka anjaam judai kyun hai
ab to har vaqt yahi baat satati hai hamen " wah tauhid these last two lines r wonderful
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