Mehsoos Hoti Hai

by sapnaa on October 02, 2007, 11:54:15 AM
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Adhuri si zindagi mehsoos hoti hai
mujhe teri kami si mehsoos hoti hai

tujhe dekhu,tujhe chahu.tujhe paau,
tu roothe to main manau
yaad kar ke un lamho ko bahut roi hai yeh aankhein
ab to aalam yeh hai ke in aankhon ko
ashko ki kami si mehsoos hoti hai

hamesha saath rahenge,
yeh kasam khai thi humne,
mujhe yaad hai,shayad tum bhool chuke ho
wo kasmo ki kasak abhi is dil ko mehsoos hoti hai

do jism par ek jaan hai hum
yeh haqeeqat hai ya mera brahm..
jo bhi hai..par is dil ko teri har baat..
 haqeeqat si mehsoos hoti hai

tum saath nahi ho to bhi roshan yeh jahan hoga
jashn-e-mehfil honge...
par tere saath har haal  mein bhi muskura leti main.....
tere har gham ko apna muqaddar samaj ke sajaa leti main...

tere bin in sitaro se chamakti  mehfilo mein bhi
aankhon mein
nami si mehsoos hoti hai...
har jagah teri kami si mehsoos hoti hai.. :cry:  :cry:  :-#
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faiiz_76
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«Reply #1 on: October 02, 2007, 12:08:15 PM »
bohat acha takhyul hai .app dil se kehti hain issiliye acha ha bohat acha
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SHONA
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«Reply #2 on: October 02, 2007, 03:25:16 PM »
"yaad kar ke un lamho ko bahut roi hai yeh aankhein
ab to aalam yeh hai ke in aankhon ko
ashko ki kami si mehsoos hoti hai"

"par tere saath har haal  mein bhi muskura leti main.....
tere har gham ko apna muqaddar samaj ke sajaa leti main..."

Very nice lines..lots of dept & meanings to it..you write really good =D>
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«Reply #3 on: October 02, 2007, 03:29:01 PM »
bahoot khoob sapnaa nice reply Shona....
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«Reply #4 on: October 02, 2007, 05:42:09 PM »
BAHUT ACHE SAPNAA...KHOOB KAHA.. =D>  =D>
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«Reply #5 on: October 04, 2007, 06:05:03 AM »
Thanx a lot for replying..khwaish,pooja,shona,faiiz...
faiiz sahi kaha aapne jo shabd dil se nikalte hai,usse padne mein alag hi sukoon milta hai...shukriya
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«Reply #6 on: October 04, 2007, 10:25:15 AM »
naturally Good one Sapana
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