Mera Bacha

by mistufer on September 03, 2009, 07:17:16 PM
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mera bacha
Is kavita ke madhayam se maine ek maa ke ehsaaso bandha hai, jo kam umr maa nahi ban,na chati ya haalat usse apne bache ko janam lene se pahle hi maar (abortion)deti hai.
par vo dard kaise use umr bhar tiss ki tarha chubta rahta haih. please main kisi ka dil nahi dukha rahi hoon phir bhi kisi ko bura lagae toh maaf kar dena. shukriya.

Ek sawal mere dil mein aaj bhi uth raha hai
Kitna komal tumhare chera raha hoga
Tum mere liye ek vardan the rab ke ghar se
Main hi kabeel maa naa ban saki

Tumhe nani ki tarha ki pyaar
Karne wali maa milni chaiye thi
Jo tumhe pyaar karti tumhari hifazat karti
Shayad tum khush rahte unke sang
Mamata tumhe khub milti

Tum nahi jante muje apne karni par
Kitna afsoos hai,
Kash vo waqt main lauta pati
Nahi janti kya kar rahi thi
UsS waqt main khud bhi bachi thi

Kitni be-bas aur majboor mein thi
Galani se ghootan hoti hai aaj bhi
Tumhe bhulna bahut mushkil hai
Khud ko samabhlana mushkil hai
Teri yaad mein hoon tadapti

Tum muj mein kya kar rahe the
Jab tumne apni akhri dadkan chori thi
Tum toh mujpar hi nirbhar the
Aor maine miittadi tumhari hasti
Meri soch us waqt stambh thi

Kash main tum se jagah badal sakti
Ek pal mein vo kar leti beta
Par tum kismat wale ho
Tum rab ki chaye mein ho
Apne gunaah ko aise samjhati

Aise koi din nahi jayega bina yaad kiye
Aor dil mein galani rahegi har waqt
Par bhitar hi bhitar muje pata hai
Hum kabhi alag nahi honge.
Sapno mein tumse baat karti

Khash waqt ne muje rasta dikhaya hota
Aisa din kabhi naa aaya hota
Mera chand aaj mere saath hota
Meri ghar bhi khushaal hota
Zindgi meri yun naa meeth.ti

Nira
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: September 03, 2009, 07:43:18 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahoot khoob.. ek maa ke dil ke dard ko apne bakhubi shabo main utara hai...

Kuch lines jo man mai aa rahi hai Likhne ja rahi hu..

Ajj hote sung to yah umar ho gai hoti tumari
ladka tha ya ladki, iss soch main rahti hai umarbhar naari

kuch waqat ka tha sath, jo tha bas sirf humara
na chala pata kisi ko, janam se pahle he kaise gaya koi maara

khoon tha apne he khoon ka, samjh sakega na jise sansar
bin dekhein jise maar diya, uska chehra banaye dil main baar baar



Kuch lines man mai sirf un betio ke liye aa rahi hai.. jinhe sirf is liye maar diya jaata hai kyun ki logo ko Beta chahiye hota hai... aor unka kasoor sirf itna hota hai ki wo beti hoti hai..

Kash beta ban kar mere zisam mai aai hoti
na is tarah qatal-aam teri karai hoti

Na dekha chehra tera, na hi teri masoomiyat samne aai
bas itani si galati teri, beti ban kar, garbh mai aai



likhne ke baad aise lag raha hai ki wo nahi likha gaya jo man mai kahin ander daba hua hai... Wapis aa kar ek baar phir se likhne ki koshish hogi!!
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #2 on: September 04, 2009, 12:03:23 AM »
Wah wah bahut khoob Nira ji and Pooja ji,bahut dard bara kavita likhi aap dono ne aur sachai bhi hai,mindblowing creation.excellent Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
 
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«Reply #3 on: September 04, 2009, 04:22:20 AM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on September 04, 2009, 12:03:23 AM
Wah wah bahut khoob Nira ji and Pooja ji,bahut dard bara kavita likhi aap dono ne aur sachai bhi hai,mindblowing creation.excellent Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
 

Shukaria Madhu ji... yah to Nira ji ne is kadar acha likha ki pta bhi nahi chala meri kalam kaya kaya likh gai...
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mistufer
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«Reply #4 on: September 04, 2009, 04:36:14 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on September 03, 2009, 07:43:18 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahoot khoob.. ek maa ke dil ke dard ko apne bakhubi shabo main utara hai...

Kuch lines jo man mai aa rahi hai Likhne ja rahi hu..

Ajj hote sung to yah umar ho gai hoti tumari
ladka tha ya ladki, iss soch main rahti hai umarbhar naari

kuch waqat ka tha sath, jo tha bas sirf humara
na chala pata kisi ko, janam se pahle he kaise gaya koi maara

khoon tha apne he khoon ka, samjh sakega na jise sansar
bin dekhein jise maar diya, uska chehra banaye dil main baar baar



Kuch lines man mai sirf un betio ke liye aa rahi hai.. jinhe sirf is liye maar diya jaata hai kyun ki logo ko Beta chahiye hota hai... aor unka kasoor sirf itna hota hai ki wo beti hoti hai..

Kash beta ban kar mere zisam mai aai hoti
na is tarah qatal-aam teri karai hoti

Na dekha chehra tera, na hi teri masoomiyat samne aai
bas itani si galati teri, beti ban kar, garbh mai aai



likhne ke baad aise lag raha hai ki wo nahi likha gaya jo man mai kahin ander daba hua hai... Wapis aa kar ek baar phir se likhne ki koshish hogi!!

pooja ji
aapki shukrguzaar hoon aapne meri rachna ko saraya.
itni achi panktiyon likhkar aapne is rachna ke arth ko aage badhaya, muje bahut acha laga.
ek baar phir dhanyawaad deti hoon

take care
nira
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mistufer
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«Reply #5 on: September 04, 2009, 04:37:48 AM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on September 04, 2009, 12:03:23 AM
Wah wah bahut khoob Nira ji and Pooja ji,bahut dard bara kavita likhi aap dono ne aur sachai bhi hai,mindblowing creation.excellent Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
 

madhu ji
aapka shen yunhi milta rahe yeh hi guzarish karti hoon

bahut bahut shukriya
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poppoetry
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«Reply #6 on: September 04, 2009, 09:26:29 AM »
Bahut hi khub Nira ji......dil ko chune waale alfaaz likhe hai aapne....
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«Reply #7 on: September 04, 2009, 09:32:51 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on September 03, 2009, 07:43:18 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahoot khoob.. ek maa ke dil ke dard ko apne bakhubi shabo main utara hai...

Kuch lines jo man mai aa rahi hai Likhne ja rahi hu..

Ajj hote sung to yah umar ho gai hoti tumari
ladka tha ya ladki, iss soch main rahti hai umarbhar naari

kuch waqat ka tha sath, jo tha bas sirf humara
na chala pata kisi ko, janam se pahle he kaise gaya koi maara

khoon tha apne he khoon ka, samjh sakega na jise sansar
bin dekhein jise maar diya, uska chehra banaye dil main baar baar



Kuch lines man mai sirf un betio ke liye aa rahi hai.. jinhe sirf is liye maar diya jaata hai kyun ki logo ko Beta chahiye hota hai... aor unka kasoor sirf itna hota hai ki wo beti hoti hai..

Kash beta ban kar mere zisam mai aai hoti
na is tarah qatal-aam teri karai hoti

Na dekha chehra tera, na hi teri masoomiyat samne aai
bas itani si galati teri, beti ban kar, garbh mai aai



likhne ke baad aise lag raha hai ki wo nahi likha gaya jo man mai kahin ander daba hua hai... Wapis aa kar ek baar phir se likhne ki koshish hogi!!
Bahut hi khub Pooja ji...

"Khun tha apne hi khun ka" iss pankti ko parr kr laga jaise sara dard issi
ek pankti mein simat kar reh gya ho.....bahut khub

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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: September 04, 2009, 04:47:30 PM »
Quote from: Nira on September 04, 2009, 04:36:14 AM
pooja ji
aapki shukrguzaar hoon aapne meri rachna ko saraya.
itni achi panktiyon likhkar aapne is rachna ke arth ko aage badhaya, muje bahut acha laga.
ek baar phir dhanyawaad deti hoon

take care
nira

Shukaria NIRA JI!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: September 04, 2009, 04:47:54 PM »
Quote from: Nikhaar on September 04, 2009, 09:32:51 AM
Bahut hi khub Pooja ji...

"Khun tha apne hi khun ka" iss pankti ko parr kr laga jaise sara dard issi
ek pankti mein simat kar reh gya ho.....bahut khub

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Shukaria Nikhaar ji!!!
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #10 on: September 04, 2009, 05:12:17 PM »
Quote from: Nira on September 03, 2009, 07:17:16 PM
mera bacha
Is kavita ke madhayam se maine ek maa ke ehsaaso bandha hai, jo kam umr maa nahi ban,na chati ya haalat usse apne bache ko janam lene se pahle hi maar (abortion)deti hai.
par vo dard kaise use umr bhar tiss ki tarha chubta rahta haih. please main kisi ka dil nahi dukha rahi hoon phir bhi kisi ko bura lagae toh maaf kar dena. shukriya.

Ek sawal mere dil mein aaj bhi uth raha hai
Kitna komal tumhare chera raha hoga
Tum mere liye ek vardan the rab ke ghar se
Main hi kabeel maa naa ban saki

Tumhe nani ki tarha ki pyaar
Karne wali maa milni chaiye thi
Jo tumhe pyaar karti tumhari hifazat karti
Shayad tum khush rahte unke sang
Mamata tumhe khub milti

Tum nahi jante muje apne karni par
Kitna afsoos hai,
Kash vo waqt main lauta pati
Nahi janti kya kar rahi thi
UsS waqt main khud bhi bachi thi

Kitni be-bas aur majboor mein thi
Galani se ghootan hoti hai aaj bhi
Tumhe bhulna bahut mushkil hai
Khud ko samabhlana mushkil hai
Teri yaad mein hoon tadapti

Tum muj mein kya kar rahe the
Jab tumne apni akhri dadkan chori thi
Tum toh mujpar hi nirbhar the
Aor maine miittadi tumhari hasti
Meri soch us waqt stambh thi

Kash main tum se jagah badal sakti
Ek pal mein vo kar leti beta
Par tum kismat wale ho
Tum rab ki chaye mein ho
Apne gunaah ko aise samjhati

Aise koi din nahi jayega bina yaad kiye
Aor dil mein galani rahegi har waqt
Par bhitar hi bhitar muje pata hai
Hum kabhi alag nahi honge.
Sapno mein tumse baat karti

Khash waqt ne muje rasta dikhaya hota
Aisa din kabhi naa aaya hota
Mera chand aaj mere saath hota
Meri ghar bhi khushaal hota
Zindgi meri yun naa meeth.ti

Nira

Wah Nira Didi.. Humesha Ki Tarah A1 Likha hai aapne.. Ek Maa Ki Peedha Ko Lafzon Ke dhaal Kar Behad Hi Khubsoorati se Pesh Kiya Hai aapne.. Bahut Dard Bhari Hai Aapki Yeh Rachna.. Jazzbaaton aur Ek Maa Ke Dard Ke sath aapne Is Rachna Me Poora Nyaaye Kiya hai.. Bahut Bahut Hi Umda Peshkash. Applause Applause

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**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #11 on: September 04, 2009, 05:14:41 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on September 03, 2009, 07:43:18 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahoot khoob.. ek maa ke dil ke dard ko apne bakhubi shabo main utara hai...

Kuch lines jo man mai aa rahi hai Likhne ja rahi hu..

Ajj hote sung to yah umar ho gai hoti tumari
ladka tha ya ladki, iss soch main rahti hai umarbhar naari

kuch waqat ka tha sath, jo tha bas sirf humara
na chala pata kisi ko, janam se pahle he kaise gaya koi maara

khoon tha apne he khoon ka, samjh sakega na jise sansar
bin dekhein jise maar diya, uska chehra banaye dil main baar baar



Kuch lines man mai sirf un betio ke liye aa rahi hai.. jinhe sirf is liye maar diya jaata hai kyun ki logo ko Beta chahiye hota hai... aor unka kasoor sirf itna hota hai ki wo beti hoti hai..

Kash beta ban kar mere zisam mai aai hoti
na is tarah qatal-aam teri karai hoti

Na dekha chehra tera, na hi teri masoomiyat samne aai
bas itani si galati teri, beti ban kar, garbh mai aai



likhne ke baad aise lag raha hai ki wo nahi likha gaya jo man mai kahin ander daba hua hai... Wapis aa kar ek baar phir se likhne ki koshish hogi!!

Pooja Jiiiiiiiii.... Kya Kahun Main aapki In Lines Ke Bare Me.. Dil Ko Jhanjodh Ke Rakh diya aapki In Lajawab Lafaazon ne.. Har ek Sher Apni Hi Kahaani Kaha raha hai... Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooooooob.. Applause Applause

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**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #12 on: September 04, 2009, 05:19:24 PM »
Quote from: Mann on September 04, 2009, 05:14:41 PM
Pooja Jiiiiiiiii.... Kya Kahun Main aapki In Lines Ke Bare Me.. Dil Ko Jhanjodh Ke Rakh diya aapki In Lajawab Lafaazon ne.. Har ek Sher Apni Hi Kahaani Kaha raha hai... Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooooooob.. Applause Applause

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**~** Mann **~**

bahoot bahoot shukaria Mann ji!!!
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mistufer
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«Reply #13 on: September 04, 2009, 05:33:27 PM »
Quote from: Nikhaar on September 04, 2009, 09:26:29 AM
Bahut hi khub Nira ji......dil ko chune waale alfaaz likhe hai aapne....
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nikhaar ji

aapka bahut bahut shukriya
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mistufer
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«Reply #14 on: September 04, 2009, 05:35:42 PM »
Quote from: Mann on September 04, 2009, 05:12:17 PM
Wah Nira Didi.. Humesha Ki Tarah A1 Likha hai aapne.. Ek Maa Ki Peedha Ko Lafzon Ke dhaal Kar Behad Hi Khubsoorati se Pesh Kiya Hai aapne.. Bahut Dard Bhari Hai Aapki Yeh Rachna.. Jazzbaaton aur Ek Maa Ke Dard Ke sath aapne Is Rachna Me Poora Nyaaye Kiya hai.. Bahut Bahut Hi Umda Peshkash. Applause Applause

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**

vickyyyyyyy
koi gham kabhi nahi chhoot.te, vo dil mein lahoo bankar reeste rahte hain
meri rachna ko saharne ka bahut bahut shukriya
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