....Mera Dil Alwida Alwida Kahta Ja Raha hai......

by waheed_rose2004 on July 04, 2005, 06:27:13 PM
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Apni  jindagi ke   aakhri  lamhon  mein  ek shaks  doobta  ja raha hai
Har  toote  hue  khwaab  samet  kar  le  ja raha hai

Beete  hue  lamhon  ko  sonch  sonch  kar   rota  ja raha hai
Uski   yaadon ko  seene  mein  chupakar  leta  ja  raha ha


Yeh sonch  raha hai ki hai  ki kash  jaldi  se  qayamat aa jaaye
Apne  hi askon  se  apna  daaman  bhigota  ja raha hai

Yeh  ghum nahi  mujhe   kyon  raas  nahi  aayee  “Waheed”
Phir bhi honthon  per  hansi  aur  saath mein kafan  liye  ja raha hai………..

Meri  yaad  aaye  to  ghum  na  karna  ai  jamaane  waalon
Aaj   meri  aakhri  shaam  hai  mera dil tumhein Alwida  Alwida kahta  ja raha hai
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«Reply #1 on: July 04, 2005, 06:29:15 PM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Apni  jindagi ke   aakhri  lamhon  mein  ek shaks  doobta  ja raha hai
Har  toote  hue  khwaab  samet  kar  le  ja raha hai

Beete  hue  lamhon  ko  sonch  sonch  kar   rota  ja raha hai
Uski   yaadon ko  seene  mein  chupakar  leta  ja  raha ha


Yeh sonch  raha hai ki hai  ki kash  jaldi  se  qayamat aa jaaye
Apne  hi askon  se  apna  daaman  bhigota  ja raha hai

Yeh  ghum nahi  mujhe   kyon  raas  nahi  aayee  “Waheed”
Phir bhi honthon  per  hansi  aur  saath mein kafan  liye  ja raha hai………..

Meri  yaad  aaye  to  ghum  na  karna  ai  jamaane  waalon
Aaj   meri  aakhri  shaam  hai  mera dil tumhein Alwida  Alwida kahta  ja raha hai



Bahut acche waheed sahab
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«Reply #2 on: July 04, 2005, 06:30:23 PM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Apni  jindagi ke   aakhri  lamhon  mein  ek shaks  doobta  ja raha hai
Har  toote  hue  khwaab  samet  kar  le  ja raha hai

Beete  hue  lamhon  ko  sonch  sonch  kar   rota  ja raha hai
Uski   yaadon ko  seene  mein  chupakar  leta  ja  raha ha


Yeh sonch  raha hai ki hai  ki kash  jaldi  se  qayamat aa jaaye
Apne  hi askon  se  apna  daaman  bhigota  ja raha hai

Yeh  ghum nahi  mujhe   kyon  raas  nahi  aayee  “Waheed”
Phir bhi honthon  per  hansi  aur  saath mein kafan  liye  ja raha hai………..

Meri  yaad  aaye  to  ghum  na  karna  ai  jamaane  waalon
Aaj   meri  aakhri  shaam  hai  mera dil tumhein Alwida  Alwida kahta  ja raha hai


wah waheed,last two lines to bohat hi acchi hain Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: July 04, 2005, 06:34:52 PM »
Kya baat hai Waheed.....itna dard........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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rohit30002
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«Reply #4 on: July 04, 2005, 06:49:16 PM »
Apne ghav bharte hi mere dil ne sabse pahle ye kaha..........
Meri fitrat hai yahi mujhe karne do tum pyar..........
Jindgi hai ye bahut hi badi............
Kya pata marne se pahle khatma ho jaaye ye Intjaar..............
Unhe tumne mujh se chhin ke ek baaji to jeet li..........
par iska ehsaas yahi hai unke haathon meri ye haar..............
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«Reply #5 on: July 04, 2005, 06:54:42 PM »
very nice waheed!!

meri khamoshi ki zuban samjhoge to ek pukar sunayi degi,
jeena hogaya tushwar, yeh meri rooh bhi gawayi degi!!
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«Reply #6 on: July 04, 2005, 06:56:23 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
very nice waheed!!

meri khamoshi ki zuban samjhoge to ek pukar sunayi degi,
jeena hogaya tushwar, yeh meri rooh bhi gawayi degi!!



Very nice meena
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«Reply #7 on: July 05, 2005, 05:59:02 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
Apni  jindagi ke   aakhri  lamhon  mein  ek shaks  doobta  ja raha hai
Har  toote  hue  khwaab  samet  kar  le  ja raha hai

Beete  hue  lamhon  ko  sonch  sonch  kar   rota  ja raha hai
Uski   yaadon ko  seene  mein  chupakar  leta  ja  raha ha


Yeh sonch  raha hai ki hai  ki kash  jaldi  se  qayamat aa jaaye
Apne  hi askon  se  apna  daaman  bhigota  ja raha hai

Yeh  ghum nahi  mujhe   kyon  raas  nahi  aayee  “Waheed”
Phir bhi honthon  per  hansi  aur  saath mein kafan  liye  ja raha hai………..

Meri  yaad  aaye  to  ghum  na  karna  ai  jamaane  waalon
Aaj   meri  aakhri  shaam  hai  mera dil tumhein Alwida  Alwida kahta  ja raha hai


wah waheed,last two lines to bohat hi acchi hain Usual Smile


thanxxxxxxxx  Alot.............  Nidhi.............  Talat.........Rohit.........Meena.....also    very  nice  reply.............meena  very  touching  words..........Rohit..........
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«Reply #8 on: July 05, 2005, 12:13:02 PM »
bahut hi ache waheeeeed

meri kismat me tera saath ahi, lekin tujhe yaad to kar sakta hu
dost tujh se milne ke liye khuda se faryaad to kar sakta hu
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«Reply #9 on: July 05, 2005, 12:15:30 PM »
Quote from: "samnoj"
bahut hi ache waheeeeed

meri kismat me tera saath ahi, lekin tujhe yaad to kar sakta hu
dost tujh se milne ke liye khuda se faryaad to kar sakta hu



Yahan aa ke dekh, tere naam par pee rahe hain..............
fariyad meri kabool hogi isi asha mein jee rahe hain..........
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«Reply #10 on: July 05, 2005, 12:21:03 PM »
faasla mit jata jo tune chaha hota
milan ho jata jo tune chaha hota
pyar kiya tumne mager nibhaya na gaya
kaash meri trah kabhi jo tumne chaha hota
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«Reply #11 on: July 05, 2005, 01:21:48 PM »
Quote from: "rohit30002"
Quote from: "samnoj"
bahut hi ache waheeeeed

meri kismat me tera saath ahi, lekin tujhe yaad to kar sakta hu
dost tujh se milne ke liye khuda se faryaad to kar sakta hu



Yahan aa ke dekh, tere naam par pee rahe hain..............
fariyad meri kabool hogi isi asha mein jee rahe hain..........


wonderfullllllllll  sam........rohit.................... kya  jabardast likha aap  dono  ne......main  bhi  tohda  try  karta  hoon........

ai  dost   tujhe  main  har  pal  yaad  karta  hoon
tujhse  milne ke  liye  main  bhi khuda se fariyaad  karta hoon
mere  bus mein  nahi ki khiza  ki bahaar  main tere naam kar doon
lekin  aaj  main  ek  dua  aur  apni  har khusi  tere  naam karta hoon.....
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«Reply #12 on: July 05, 2005, 05:48:49 PM »
waheed yaar, itna darda kiske liye............. kyon itna tadapte ho.............. kya baat hai...........
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«Reply #13 on: July 05, 2005, 05:52:52 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
very nice waheed!!

meri khamoshi ki zuban samjhoge to ek pukar sunayi degi,
jeena hogaya tushwar, yeh meri rooh bhi gawayi degi!!


wah meena ji!!!! bahoot khoob!!!!!

Meri Khamosh juban per na kar vishwaas, yah dhoka degi

wo phir se sochegy kuch aor, unhe chale jaane ka phir moka degi!!!!
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«Reply #14 on: July 05, 2005, 05:59:36 PM »
Wah Wah.........yahan toh dard hi dard hai...........waheed bhai, sabko gumgeen kar diya..........nice everyone...

Darr hai humko wo ek din laut aayenge,
Kaise dekhenge unko,kaise dil mein basayenge,
Ek muddat se unke intezaar mein hum baithe,
Wo jo pas aa gaye toh hum mar hi jayenge...
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