Mera Dil Tord Do,.

by Jaanasheen on December 19, 2007, 03:23:08 PM
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     mera dil bhi shauk say todo ek tajurba aur sahee
     lakh khilonay tod chukay ho ek khilona aur sahee

     raat hai gham ki aaj bhuja do jalta hua har ek chirag
     dil mein andhera ho hi chuka hai ghar mein andhera aur sahee

     dam hai niklta ik aashiq ka bheed hai aa kar dekh to lo
     lakh tamashay dekhay hongay ek nazaara aur sahee

     khanjar ley kar saunchtay kya ho qatl `Murad' bhi kar daalo
     daag hain sau daaman pe tumharay ek izaafa aur sahee

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prmchawla
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«Reply #1 on: December 20, 2007, 03:28:52 AM »
bahut khub maaliko aapne to kamal kar diya.
let me try.
maar daaale aapne apni nigaho se kahi, ek aashik or sahi,
ab ek moka to mughe bhi do, pata dali bahut larhkiya, ek saheli aapki bhi sahi.
prem

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«Reply #2 on: December 20, 2007, 05:48:00 AM »
Hi Janasheen,

Kamaal kar diyaa aapne to..

pehli line hi itni bhaari likhi hai...ye poem to 10 baar pad li maine......

Tere dar par har roz aaye,aaj ek baar aur sahi...
Akkhri khaawish thi meri,Teri izazzat kuch aur sahi.....

Nuts
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«Reply #3 on: December 20, 2007, 11:52:41 AM »
Shukriya Chawla and Nuits ji,.
ke aapko Acchi Lagi,.
Thank U,.
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