Mera Hain...

by Ravi_Dave on May 06, 2007, 09:45:26 PM
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Likhaaye jaane kis ki, par likha mera hain,
Har ek dard-e-hasrat, qissa mera hain,

Koi bataa de naam mujhe us badnaam kucche ka,
Jis kucche se bad-saal, toota pada rishta mera hain,

Azmaane ka mauka to ek mille zaalim,
Kya uske dil-e-darbaar ka, aaj bhi kya koi hissa mera hain,

Naa do mujhe sazaa tadpaane ki tumhe,
Kya sirf jazbaa-e-dard ka silsilla mera hain,

Ishq-e-junoon ki kabhi aadat naa kijiye,
Mujhse poochye dard, ranjish se purana ristha mera hain!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #1 on: May 07, 2007, 02:53:09 AM »
Nice One Ravi...
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Ravi_Dave
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«Reply #2 on: May 07, 2007, 10:03:06 PM »
Shukriya AryaanJi!

Mera hain woh bhi tum lelo,
Dil hi kya jaan bhi lelo,

Nahi mujhe khushi ki khwaish,
Meri hansi ka khaan bhi lelo,

Dair-o-haram se be-hosh ko kya,
Chahe to mera imaan bhi lelo,

Nahi padi ek cheekh jo korde (whip) bhi lage to,
Akele mein kya tum sar-e-aam hi imtihaan lelo,

Shaan-e-sohrat ki fiqr nahi, be-abroo hogaye hain,
Zindagi jo be-faizool ho to 'Ravi' ka maan-samaan lelo,

Mera hain woh hi tum lelo,
Tadpa kar maut meri kidmat mein paish karna chahte ho,
Dheere Dheere kar ke, meri jaan lelo!
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«Reply #3 on: May 08, 2007, 06:55:36 PM »
Wonderful..

first one is real nice.. 8/10
and ..
Second one is good also. Usual Smile !
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Ravi_Dave
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«Reply #4 on: September 17, 2007, 12:48:47 PM »
Shukriya Ricky!
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: September 17, 2007, 12:59:12 PM »
Very good Ravi =D>
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