Mera Janaaza Tou Dekhiye

by Alam Qazi on January 12, 2009, 03:42:04 AM
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Alam Qazi
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Barbaad-E-Zindagi ka Tamaasha tou dekhiye,
Uthne ko hai mera, Janaaza tou dekhiye,

Kharidi maine Maut, Hayaat ko bechkar
Jeee Na sakaa mai, Meri Gurbat tou dekhiye,

Ro Rokar maine Kho  dee, Aankho'n ki Roshni
Pathar si khamosh, Meri Nazro'n ko dekhiye,

Ruk gayee saanse'n meri, Lahoo bhi tham gyaa
Phir bhi Aankho'n se girtaa, Ashk dekhiye,

Ro Rokar Jeeta rahaa, Aur Tadap ke mar gyaa
Aagaaz "ALAM" ka, Aur Anjaam  dekhiye ...
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Shikha12
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«Reply #1 on: January 12, 2009, 05:44:34 AM »
Very Very Nicely Expressed... Applause Applause
Beautiful Creation.. Alam Ji..
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abdulqadeer
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«Reply #2 on: January 12, 2009, 05:59:22 AM »
Quote from: Alam Qazi on January 12, 2009, 03:42:04 AM
Barbaad-E-Zindagi ka Tamaasha tou dekhiye,
Uthne ko hai mera, Janaaza tou dekhiye,

Kharidi maine Maut, Hayaat ko bechkar
Jeee Na sakaa mai, Meri Gurbat tou dekhiye,

Ro Rokar maine Kho  dee, Aankho'n ki Roshni
Pathar si khamosh, Meri Nazro'n ko dekhiye,

Ruk gayee saanse'n meri, Lahoo bhi tham gyaa
Phir bhi Aankho'n se girtaa, Ashk dekhiye,

Ro Rokar Jeeta rahaa, Aur Tadap ke mar gyaa
Aagaaz "ALAM" ka, Aur Anjaam  dekhiye ...

 tearyeyed tearyeyed

Kya Likha Yaar Alam bhai Mano Jaisa jaan Nikal ke Qatil ke Qadmoo rakh di tumne aur dil nikal ke mahefil me rakh diya yaar wah wah subhan allah !! Allah apke kalam ko miyari izzath bakshe bhai !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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cara
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«Reply #3 on: January 12, 2009, 06:21:19 AM »
kya baat hai....alam qaziji....

barbaad zindagi thi meri ,tab toh kisne na dekha mujhe,
aaj mar gaya hun mein,meri barbaad mout ko toh dekhiye.
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Alam Qazi
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«Reply #4 on: January 12, 2009, 07:59:41 AM »
Thanks to all friends for appreciation..
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salil2002
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«Reply #5 on: January 12, 2009, 08:16:55 AM »
bahut achche alam
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #6 on: January 12, 2009, 08:28:47 AM »
Wah ustad wah kya kehne Maza aa gaya iman se bohat khoob piroya hain tumne Kalam ko aur makhta to superrrrrrrr tha too good  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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HumTum
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«Reply #7 on: January 12, 2009, 03:01:08 PM »
Bahut Acche Alam.

Sun ke teri dastaan, kuch apna fasana yaad aaya
Jha hui thi dafan muhobat, woh tikana yaad aaya
kal shab Lga jo parinde par ik shikari ka nashtar
haye! uss sitamgar ka mujhko satana yaad aaya !!

HumTum
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Roja
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«Reply #8 on: January 12, 2009, 03:16:18 PM »
Quote from: Alam Qazi on January 12, 2009, 03:42:04 AM
Barbaad-E-Zindagi ka Tamaasha tou dekhiye,
Uthne ko hai mera, Janaaza tou dekhiye,

Kharidi maine Maut, Hayaat ko bechkar
Jeee Na sakaa mai, Meri Gurbat tou dekhiye,

Ro Rokar maine Kho  dee, Aankho'n ki Roshni
Pathar si khamosh, Meri Nazro'n ko dekhiye,

[/b]Ruk gayee saanse'n meri, Lahoo bhi tham gyaa
Phir bhi Aankho'n se girtaa, Ashk dekhiye,

Ro Rokar Jeeta rahaa, Aur Tadap ke mar gyaa
Aagaaz "ALAM" ka, Aur Anjaam  dekhiye ...[/size][/color]

 tearyeyed tearyeyed

Bahut khoob Alam Qazi ji...
Good Creative and touchy lines... Keep up. Thumbs UP
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Roja
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«Reply #9 on: January 12, 2009, 03:20:17 PM »
Quote from: HumTum on January 12, 2009, 03:01:08 PM
Bahut Acche Alam.

Sun ke teri dastaan, kuch apna fasana yaad aaya
Jha hui thi dafan muhobat, woh tikana yaad aaya
kal shab Lga jo parinde par ik shikari ka nashtar
haye! uss sitamgar ka mujhko satana yaad aaya !!

HumTum


Wah
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salma786
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«Reply #10 on: January 12, 2009, 03:31:08 PM »
Bahoot khoob likha hai apne alam ji Applause Applause
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #11 on: January 12, 2009, 09:01:39 PM »
Quote from: Alam Qazi on January 12, 2009, 03:42:04 AM
Barbaad-E-Zindagi ka Tamaasha tou dekhiye,
Uthne ko hai mera, Janaaza tou dekhiye,

Kharidi maine Maut, Hayaat ko bechkar
Jeee Na sakaa mai, Meri Gurbat tou dekhiye,

Ro Rokar maine Kho  dee, Aankho'n ki Roshni
Pathar si khamosh, Meri Nazro'n ko dekhiye,

Ruk gayee saanse'n meri, Lahoo bhi tham gyaa
Phir bhi Aankho'n se girtaa, Ashk dekhiye,

Ro Rokar Jeeta rahaa, Aur Tadap ke mar gyaa
Aagaaz "ALAM" ka, Aur Anjaam  dekhiye ...

 tearyeyed tearyeyed


wah ALAM kya khoob likha hai ...

PADD KAR WOH KAISEY KHUDD KOH ROK PAYENGEY
SEEDHEY BHAAG KEY AAP KEY GALEY LAG JAYENGEY

ITNA PYAR KAHA UNHEY NASEEB HOGA
AKELEY HI TANHAYI WOH BHI MARR JAYENGEY
SEEDHEY BHAAG KEY AAP KEY GALEY LAG JAYENGEY


JASBIR SINGH
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: January 12, 2009, 09:06:17 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahoot khoob Alam ji!!! ek ek shabd, ek ek line, kamaal ki likhi hai!!!
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Alam Qazi
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«Reply #13 on: January 13, 2009, 03:57:23 AM »
shukriyaa Dosto.. ki aap logo ko mera likha pasand aaayaa...
once again thanks....
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