mera pataa.........

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«Reply #15 on: March 01, 2014, 12:04:36 AM »
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«Reply #16 on: March 01, 2014, 02:16:02 PM »
thankewww sooooooooooo much jeet ji
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मेरा  पता  मुझको  बता मेरे ख़ुदा
में  दुनियाँ  में खो गया  मेरे ख़ुदा

मिटा  रही ये आँधियाँ  मेरा वुजूद
होने  लगा  खुद से जुदा मेरे खुदा

दर्द-ए-दिल का हो कोई ईलाज़ कुछ
कुछ कर दवा कुछ दे दुआ मेरे ख़ुदा

हादसे कुछ ऐसे यहाँ सि गुज़रे हैं
ना रो सका ना हँस सका मेरे ख़ुदा

क्यूँ  नहीं  कोई  खुशी किसी बात में
कुछ कर रहम कुछ कर वफ़ा मेरे ख़ुदा

घर उदासियों ने यहाँ कैसे कर लिया
ये क्यूँ हुआ कुछ तो बता मेरे ख़ुदा

तैयार है अब जलने को रूह-ए-सरु
तू  दे  उजालों  का पता मेरे ख़ुदा
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wah wah wah wah bohut hi umda kafi nayaab alfaaz use kiye,,but kaha they itne din sir ji
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«Reply #17 on: March 01, 2014, 02:16:42 PM »
thanka a lot surindam ji
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«Reply #18 on: March 01, 2014, 02:29:52 PM »
thanks a lot hakkani ji
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Bohat Hi Khub!!! Bohat Aacha Likha Hai Aap Ne!!!

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«Reply #19 on: March 01, 2014, 03:02:21 PM »
thanks a lot sudhir ji
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wah wah wah wah bohut hi umda

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«Reply #20 on: March 02, 2014, 12:39:52 AM »
thanks a lot Bahayat ji
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nice,ma'am
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«Reply #21 on: March 02, 2014, 04:14:15 AM »
मेरा पता मुझको बता मेरे ख़ुदा
में दुनियाँ में खो गया मेरे ख़ुदा

मिटा रही ये आँधियाँ मेरा वुजूद
होने लगा खुद से जुदा मेरे खुदा

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Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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«Reply #22 on: March 02, 2014, 07:32:48 PM »
thanks a lot shihab ji
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मेरा पता मुझको बता मेरे ख़ुदा
में दुनियाँ में खो गया मेरे ख़ुदा

मिटा रही ये आँधियाँ मेरा वुजूद
होने लगा खुद से जुदा मेरे खुदा

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«Reply #23 on: March 04, 2014, 04:30:04 PM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #24 on: March 04, 2014, 04:33:03 PM »
bahut2 shukriya nandbahu ji
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