>>>>> Mere Aansoo <<<<

by waheed_rose2004 on April 08, 2006, 01:42:08 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 18, 2006, 03:24:23 AM »
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Waheed,
Bohot hi achcha likha hai.....   very nice   !!!
nice writing all.............



yeh kamzor aansoo hi hai, salakhein to nahin
behte huye in ashkon se musafir rukte nahin

rulate hi rehte hai wo, yaadon mein aa aa kar
har pal hoti gili aankhon se ashk sukhte nahin

lakh koshish karta hai dil, dukh dard ko peene ki
chehre pe chhaye ghum ke badal chhupte nahin

zilmilate hai khubsurat tare, andheri raato mein
tuutate hai jo sitare ek baar to fir dikhte nahin

kehte hai samay bhar deta hai bada sa ghav
kuch zakham aise hai jo kabhi bharte nahin !
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«Reply #16 on: April 18, 2006, 03:32:07 AM »
Bharat

Bahut achche !

Rajbir
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«Reply #17 on: April 18, 2006, 03:35:03 AM »
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Bharat

Bahut achche !

Rajbir


Rajbir,

Thanks.
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«Reply #18 on: April 18, 2006, 11:19:14 AM »
good work all

sirf aansu hi jawab-e-ghum-e-dora to nahi
ek tabassum se bhi ye ferz ada hota hai

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«Reply #19 on: April 18, 2006, 11:37:34 AM »
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Waheed,
Bohot hi achcha likha hai.....   very nice   !!!
nice writing all.............



yeh kamzor aansoo hi hai, salakhein to nahin
behte huye in ashkon se musafir rukte nahin

rulate hi rehte hai wo, yaadon mein aa aa kar
har pal hoti gili aankhon se ashk sukhte nahin

lakh koshish karta hai dil, dukh dard ko peene ki
chehre pe chhaye ghum ke badal chhupte nahin

zilmilate hai khubsurat tare, andheri raato mein
tuutate hai jo sitare ek baar to fir dikhte nahin

kehte hai samay bhar deta hai bada sa ghav
kuch zakham aise hai jo kabhi bharte nahin !


bahot  Khoob   .....Bharat Bhai...........Samnoj......... maza aa  gaya...  bahot........khoob.....

Yeh  Aansoo  ab  to  meri aankhon ki  kamjori  ban  gaya
meri  jindagi  ke  har lamho  ka  saathi   saathi  ban gaya
yeh  be  jubaan  hokar  bhi  sab kuch  mujhse  kahta hai
ek lafz uska meri aankhon mein jindagi bhar ke liye dard de gaya......
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«Reply #20 on: April 18, 2006, 11:43:58 AM »
bahut ache

tu pagal hai deewane apne per kyun rota hai
na ker ghum samnoj ishk me aisa hi hota hai
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«Reply #21 on: April 18, 2006, 11:59:08 AM »
Sam, Waheed

Good going !

Rajbir
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«Reply #22 on: April 18, 2006, 12:02:58 PM »
thanx rajbir

ek hook si dil me uthti hai ek derd jiger me hota hai
main raato ko uth uth rota hu jab sara aalam sota hai

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«Reply #23 on: April 18, 2006, 12:14:11 PM »
bahot  khoob  Sam........... Thanxxxxxxx  Rajbir  Bhayya......Sam.........

Hum muhabbat ka bharam kuch is tarha se rakhtay hain
aankh main gar ansoo aaye tab bhi hanstay rehtay hain......nm
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«Reply #24 on: April 18, 2006, 12:18:10 PM »
bahut ache

umand ke aankho se yekbaar bah chale aansu
hani hansi me jo zikr-e-wida-e-yaar hua
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«Reply #25 on: April 18, 2006, 01:22:38 PM »
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Very Beutiful .... Waheed ..... Usual Smile

Na roko inhe kahi toofa.n na ban jaaye .......
Yeh aansu hai kahi zeher ke pyale na ban jaaye ....


Shukriya   Saba  ji.....   bahot   khoob  reply diya....  

Mujhe darr hai ki mere ansoo kahin is  shaher ko  na dubode
isi  shaher  mein   mera  mehboob  bhi  rahta  hai


Dubo ke usey nadamat ke samandar me ~Waheed~
Ab aur kyu usey jeene ki dua dete ho
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«Reply #26 on: April 28, 2006, 07:54:16 PM »
Sab ne bahut acha likha hai..
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«Reply #27 on: April 28, 2006, 07:55:21 PM »
Mere aansuon ki aag ko bujhane ki koshish na kar
kahi isi kashmakash me tera daaman na jal jaaye
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«Reply #28 on: April 02, 2013, 01:43:47 AM »
So nice.
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