~*~mere dard ki koi dawaa do yaaron~*~

by kaushikbhawna008 on May 13, 2009, 05:29:18 AM
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mere dard ki koi dawaa do yaaron
mit na jaau kahi duaa do yaaro

aaj luut raha hai wajood talak mera
ho sakei aakar mujhe bachaa lo yaaro

ban rahei hai mere apne khud mere vyapari
ho sake koi boli tum hi lagaa do yaaro

ho rahi hai taiyari mujhe doli mei bithane ki
mujhe mera ab koi arth to bataa do yaaro

apne hi ghar mei mere apne bane hain dushman
jal rahi hu mein bas khaak hone se bachaa lo yaaro

zindgi ko mei ab tak samajh na paayi hu
ho sake to ab meri maut ka hi bojh tum uthaa lo yaaro

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honeyrose
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«Reply #1 on: May 13, 2009, 06:05:06 AM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Very nice bhawna ji ...
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salma786
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«Reply #2 on: May 13, 2009, 06:09:09 AM »
Very nice Bhawna ji !
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #3 on: May 13, 2009, 06:22:00 AM »
bohut bohut shukriya honey ji notworthy
aapka bhi bohut bohut shukriya salma ji  notworthy
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Talat
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«Reply #4 on: May 13, 2009, 09:53:40 AM »
Bohot Khoob Bhawna....bohot din baad aayin aap !
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #5 on: May 13, 2009, 03:20:06 PM »
Bhawna.. Really A Great Creation.. Behad Khubsoorat Likha Hai aapne.. Dard Ko Lafzon Me Dhaalna, Yeh Waaqau Kaabil-e-Taareef Hai..!! Bahut Bahut Khooooooooooob.. Applause Applause


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poppoetry
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«Reply #6 on: May 13, 2009, 03:34:41 PM »
Bahut bahut khoob bhawna ji.... Applause Applause
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Roja
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«Reply #7 on: May 13, 2009, 03:39:42 PM »
mere dard ki koi dawaa do yaaron
mit na jaau kahi duaa do yaaro

aaj luut raha hai wajood talak mera
ho sakei aakar mujhe bachaa lo yaaro

ban rahei hai mere apne khud mere vyapari
ho sake koi boli tum hi lagaa do yaaro

ho rahi hai taiyari mujhe doli mei bithane ki
mujhe mera ab koi arth to bataa do yaaro

apne hi ghar mei mere apne bane hain dushman
jal rahi hu mein bas khaak hone se bachaa lo yaaro

zindgi ko mei ab tak samajh na paayi hu
ho sake to ab meri maut ka hi bojh tum uthaa lo yaaro



Bahut khoob Bhawna ji Applause Applause
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #8 on: May 15, 2009, 06:58:37 AM »
thank you everyone notworthy
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