Mere dil dhadkane ka aalam na poocho

by Deepati on December 08, 2008, 05:22:08 AM
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«Reply #75 on: December 30, 2008, 02:27:12 AM »
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 30, 2008, 02:06:01 AM
Nice sharing Deepa

Thanks, Rajesh Ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #76 on: December 30, 2008, 10:02:10 PM »
Yun Kisi Aur Ko Dukh Dard Sunaun Apne,
Apni Aankhonse Bhi Main ZakhM Chhupaun Apne,

Main To QaeM Hoon Tere GaM Ki Badaulat Warna,
Yun Bikhar Jaun Ke Khud Haath Na Aaun Apne,

Sochta Hoon Ke Bujha Dun Main Ye KaMre Ka Diya,
Apne Saaye Ko Bhi Kyon Sath Jagaun Apne,

Uski Talwar Ne Wo Chal Chali Hai Aisi,
Paanv Kattein Hai Agar Haath Bachaun Apne...

Nm
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«Reply #77 on: December 30, 2008, 10:03:06 PM »
nice sharing lil bro
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«Reply #78 on: December 31, 2008, 12:34:34 PM »
wah bahut khoob, very nice sharing jahanasheen

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«Reply #79 on: January 01, 2009, 05:17:48 PM »
Shukriya Didijaan,.
And Jasbir Bhai,.
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«Reply #80 on: January 02, 2009, 02:45:32 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 30, 2008, 10:02:10 PM
Yun Kisi Aur Ko Dukh Dard Sunaun Apne,
Apni Aankhonse Bhi Main ZakhM Chhupaun Apne,

Main To QaeM Hoon Tere GaM Ki Badaulat Warna,
Yun Bikhar Jaun Ke Khud Haath Na Aaun Apne,

Sochta Hoon Ke Bujha Dun Main Ye KaMre Ka Diya,
Apne Saaye Ko Bhi Kyon Sath Jagaun Apne,

Uski Talwar Ne Wo Chal Chali Hai Aisi,
Paanv Kattein Hai Agar Haath Bachaun Apne...

Nm

Very nice sharing, Jaanashaan Ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #81 on: January 02, 2009, 03:21:05 AM »
Dard ki baarish sahi madham zara ahista chal
dil ki mitti hai abhi tak namm zara ahista chal

tere milne ke aur bichhad jaane ke beech
faasla rusvayi ka hai kuch kam zara ahista chal

apne dil hii mein nahin hai us ki mahruumi ki yaad
uski aankhon mein bhi hai shabnam zara ahista chal

koi bhi ho hamsafar "Rashid" na ho khush is kadar
ab ke logon mein wafa hai kam zara ahista chal


"Mumtaz Rashid"
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«Reply #82 on: January 02, 2009, 07:24:47 AM »
Wao Deepati, u reminded me of this very beautiful ghazal, i presume, sung by Pankaj Udhas .... Thanks for Sharing this.


DOOR NIGAOH KEY SAHI, PAAS TUM REHTEY HO
SAPNEY JA JAYE BIKHAR, JARA AAHISTA CHAL
DIL KI MITTI HAI ABHI TAK NAM, JARA AAHISTA CHAL


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«Reply #83 on: January 02, 2009, 09:22:08 AM »
Quote from: jasbirsingh on January 02, 2009, 07:24:47 AM
Wao Deepati, u reminded me of this very beautiful ghazal, i presume, sung by Pankaj Udhas .... Thanks for Sharing this.


DOOR NIGAOH KEY SAHI, PAAS TUM REHTEY HO
SAPNEY JA JAYE BIKHAR, JARA AAHISTA CHAL
DIL KI MITTI HAI ABHI TAK NAM, JARA AAHISTA CHAL


JASBIR SINGH

Shukriya, Jasbir Ji

Aapka andaaza bilkul sahi hai - This ghazal is sung by "Pankaj Udhas"

Very nice lines by you too.
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«Reply #84 on: January 02, 2009, 09:26:59 AM »
Quote from: Deepati on January 02, 2009, 09:22:08 AM
Shukriya, Jasbir Ji

Aapka andaaza bilkul sahi hai - This ghazal is sung by "Pankaj Udhas"

Very nice lines by you too.

Thanks Deepati ... it indeed is a very beautifully sung Ghazal

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #85 on: January 02, 2009, 09:48:32 AM »
Kamaal ki Sharing Hai, Deepati Partner,.
Aur Jasbir Bhaiya, Nice One Yaara,.
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«Reply #86 on: January 03, 2009, 09:10:31 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 02, 2009, 09:48:32 AM
Kamaal ki Sharing Hai, Deepati Partner,.
Aur Jasbir Bhaiya, Nice One Yaara,.

Shukriya, Jaanasheen Partner Usual Smile
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«Reply #87 on: January 03, 2009, 03:47:19 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 02, 2009, 09:48:32 AM
Kamaal ki Sharing Hai, Deepati Partner,.
Aur Jasbir Bhaiya, Nice One Yaara,.

oh thanks Dildara, jahanasheen, tusi vi bahut kamaaal yaara


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«Reply #88 on: January 03, 2009, 03:49:20 PM »
Quote from: Deepati on January 03, 2009, 09:10:31 AM
Shukriya, Jaanasheen Partner Usual Smile


OH hellooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo helllooooooooooooooo

sher humsey sajatey ho
partner jahnasheen koh banatey ho
bada khooob rishta nibhatey ho
hamey partner ku nahi banatey ho  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard


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«Reply #89 on: January 04, 2009, 08:06:14 AM »
Quote from: jasbirsingh on January 03, 2009, 03:49:20 PM

OH hellooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo helllooooooooooooooo

sher humsey sajatey ho
partner jahnasheen koh banatey ho
bada khooob rishta nibhatey ho
hamey partner ku nahi banatey ho  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard


jasbir singh

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Main khayal hoon kisi aur ka, mujhe sochtaa koi aur hai
sar-e-ayina mera aks hai, pas-e-ayina koi aur hai

main kisi ke dast-e-talab mein hoon, main kisi ke harf-e-dua mein hoon
main naseeb hoon kisi aur kaa, mujhe maangtaa koi aur hai

kabhi laut aaye tou naa poochhna, sirf dekhna bade gaur se
jinhe raaste mein khawar hui ki yeh raasta koi aur hai

ajab aitbaar-ba-aitbaari ke darmiyan hai zindagi
main qareeb hoon kisi aur ke, mujhe jaanta koi aur hai

wahi munsifon ki rivaayatein, wahi faislon ki ibaaratyein
mera jurm tou koi aur thaa par meri sazaa koi aur hai

teri roshni merii khaddo-khaal se mukhtalif tou nahin magar
tuu qareeb aa tujhe dekh loon, tuu wahi hai yaan koi aur hai



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