Mere dukh......!!!

by Talat on February 10, 2007, 11:42:58 PM
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Talat
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Khushi ki chaah main saza mujhe milti kyun hai
Ummeedon ki shama jal kar phir bujhti kyun hai

Taqdeer ka ye khel na jaane kab tak rulaayega
Jalte hue askhon main har shab dhalti kyun hai

Ye tadap, ye bechaini, na jaane kaisi hai uljhan
Jitna suljhaayen ise, ye utna hi ulajhti kyun hai

Kashmakash main ghiri ye meri zindagi har pal
Honge nahin poore, wo khwaab bunti kyun hai

Kaun samjhega mere dukh, zubaan hai khamosh
Ye khamoshi lamha lamha mujhe dasti kyun hai
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Bharat
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«Reply #1 on: February 10, 2007, 11:53:01 PM »
Talat,

very nice !!!
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Bharat
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«Reply #2 on: February 11, 2007, 04:39:15 AM »
ek arsa bit gaya, aap ke karwanh ko guzre huye
to ab bhi hamare aangan mein, gubaar kyun hai

halki si ummeed bhi baaqi nahin aap se milne ki
to hamari aankhon mein, aap ka intejaar kyun hai!
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: February 11, 2007, 05:09:46 AM »
BAHOOT KHOOB TALAT. Very Touching....

Apne dukho ko khud hi saja rakha hai
seene apne se her pal laga rakha hai

sogaat hai uski, ya uske sath rahne ka bahana
apni zindagi ab in dukho ko hi bana rakha hai!!!
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salil2002
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«Reply #4 on: February 11, 2007, 09:41:33 AM »

hai roshni par chhayi hai badli kii tasveer
sukhon par jaise dukhon ka saaya ho
kyun rota hai tu dukh main
jab tu sukh main hi na muskuraya ho
hansi ab deti nahi hai dastak mere labon par
sannaate ne jaise yahan yahan basera banaya ho
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Rajbir
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«Reply #5 on: February 11, 2007, 11:34:02 AM »
Tallu, Bharat, Pooja, Salil

Very nice by all of you !
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Talat
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«Reply #6 on: February 11, 2007, 05:24:48 PM »
Bharat, Pooja, Salil, and Rajbir - Aapka bohot bohot shukriya !

Very nice Bharat, Pooja and Salil Usual Smile
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Shikha12
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«Reply #7 on: February 14, 2007, 05:42:43 AM »
It's really So Touching.... Very Beautifully written... Talat... =D>

Bharat, Pooja di, Salil... All have done a great Job... =D>
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ranjana
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«Reply #8 on: February 14, 2007, 11:32:35 AM »
bahut khoob Talat ....bharat .pooja ..salil ..very nice ...
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Talat
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«Reply #9 on: February 15, 2007, 10:02:59 PM »
Thanks a lot Ranju Usual Smile
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pyarikudi1983
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«Reply #10 on: February 16, 2007, 04:40:17 AM »
Wah!! Tallu badhiya likha hai very senti 1 sad5  sad5  sad5  sad5  =D>  =D>

And All of U 2 Mindblowing Shocked  :yawinkle:
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Bharat
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«Reply #11 on: March 03, 2007, 02:41:10 AM »
Rajbeer, Talat, Shikha, Ranjana, Deepshikha

Thank you all !!!

Salil.

very good !!!
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Talat
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«Reply #12 on: March 18, 2007, 02:03:04 AM »
Thank you Deepu :D...mujhe ye thread nazar hi nai aaya itne din se :oops:
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Talat
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«Reply #13 on: January 30, 2008, 02:03:10 PM »
Quote from: Shikha12 on February 14, 2007, 05:42:43 AM
It's really So Touching.... Very Beautifully written... Talat... =D>

Thanks a lot Shikha ! Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #14 on: September 22, 2008, 07:31:40 PM »
Thankyou ! Yoindia
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