mere haal par........soudagar

by soudagar on July 25, 2012, 02:48:30 AM
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mujhe yun mere haal par chhod kar na jaa..
dil mein rehne wali dil  tod kar naa jaa

mizaj to waqt ke sath badalte bhi hai...
itni si baat par mooh mod kar naa jaa

kaise rahunga tujh bin jeena nahi aata...
dil ko yun mere tanha chhod kar naa jaa.

"Tanha jeete hai deewane tum bhi jee lena"
muskarakar aise alafaz bol kar naa jaa..

apna deewana banakar, pyar ka jaam pilakar
zindgani mein judai ka zehar ghol kar na jaa..
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«Reply #1 on: July 25, 2012, 03:59:31 AM »
waah waah mazaa aa gayaa bahut sunder peshkash dheron daad
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«Reply #2 on: July 25, 2012, 04:50:52 AM »
bohut khoob saudagar jee bohut achchi peshkash hai daaad qubool kijiye
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«Reply #3 on: July 25, 2012, 04:53:22 AM »
Quote from: soudagar on July 25, 2012, 02:48:30 AM
mujhe yun mere haal par chhod kar na jaa..
dil mein rehne wali dil  tod kar naa jaa

mizaj to waqt ke sath badalte bhi hai...
itni si baat par mooh mod kar naa jaa

kaise rahunga tujh bin jeena nahi aata...
dil ko yun mere tanha chhod kar naa jaa.

"Tanha jeete hai deewane tum bhi jee lena"
muskarakar aise alafaz bol kar naa jaa..

apna deewana banakar, pyar ka jaam pilakar
zindgani mein judai ka zehar ghol kar na jaa..
Bahut bahut umda Gazal Soudagar ji dheron daad qabool kijiye...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: July 25, 2012, 09:38:48 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  massttt zabardassttt kamaal ka likha hai aapne Soudagar ji... bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 25, 2012, 09:43:26 AM »
Quote from: soudagar on July 25, 2012, 02:48:30 AM
mujhe yun mere haal par chhod kar na jaa..
dil mein rehne wali dil  tod kar naa jaa

mizaj to waqt ke sath badalte bhi hai...
itni si baat par mooh mod kar naa jaa

kaise rahunga tujh bin jeena nahi aata...
dil ko yun mere tanha chhod kar naa jaa.

"Tanha jeete hai deewane tum bhi jee lena"
muskarakar aise alafaz bol kar naa jaa..

apna deewana banakar, pyar ka jaam pilakar
zindgani mein judai ka zehar ghol kar na jaa..

        veriiiiiiiiii gudsssssssssss
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«Reply #6 on: July 26, 2012, 12:05:22 AM »
bahut khub soudagar bhai. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: July 26, 2012, 02:11:32 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya saini sir...
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«Reply #8 on: July 26, 2012, 02:33:42 AM »
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"Tanha jeete hai deewane tum bhi jee lena"
muskarakar aise alafaz bol kar naa jaa..

bahut bahut khoob  Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: July 26, 2012, 11:28:47 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khooob Saudagar ji..

Umda Peshkash Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: July 26, 2012, 04:44:44 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya aarish bhai
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«Reply #11 on: July 26, 2012, 04:50:02 PM »
bahut khoob... Usual Smile
Applause
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«Reply #12 on: July 27, 2012, 06:24:37 AM »
very nice  Applause
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«Reply #13 on: July 27, 2012, 05:06:38 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya pankaj ji..
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«Reply #14 on: July 28, 2012, 04:08:05 AM »
Bahut bahut shukriya hriday ji
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