MERE HATHON MEIN JAAM DE GAYA KOI

by rajrishi on May 18, 2009, 02:11:27 PM

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rajrishi

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Mere hathon mein jaam de gaya koi,
Nashe main doobi huyi shaam de gaya koi.

Aisi bhi kya khata ho gayi mujse,
Kabhi na milne ka paigam de gaya koi.

Ik kagaz ik kalam aur likhun uspe gazal,
Jaate jaate mere dil ko kaam de gaya koi.

Log kehte hain mujko deewana kisi ka,
Aaj mujhko naya naam de gaya koi.........

Friends Plz comment on this where is my mistakes


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Re: MERE HATHON MEIN JAAM DE GAYA KOI

«Reply #1 on: May 18, 2009, 06:00:43 PM »

Bohat khoob Raj.. ek khoobsurat peshkash...dad kabool ho.


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Re: MERE HATHON MEIN JAAM DE GAYA KOI

«Reply #2 on: May 18, 2009, 06:12:16 PM »

Nice One Raj Rishi Ji,.


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Re: MERE HATHON MEIN JAAM DE GAYA KOI

«Reply #3 on: May 18, 2009, 06:13:03 PM »

Quote from: rajrishi on May 18, 2009, 02:11:27 PM

VERIII NAAAICE.....R.R


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Re: MERE HATHON MEIN JAAM DE GAYA KOI

«Reply #4 on: May 18, 2009, 06:20:50 PM »

Bahut khoob RR ji.

PAYAR MERA CHOD KAR
YAADEN KAI DE GAYA KOI

SAATH MERACHOD KAR
TANHAI DE GAYA KOI.


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rajrishi

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Re: MERE HATHON MEIN JAAM DE GAYA KOI

«Reply #5 on: May 20, 2009, 04:20:24 AM »

shurkiya dosto jo aapko koshish pasand aayi, and bhoot khoob vikas ji.

Usne di tanhayi mujh par reham kiya,
Kho jata aks mera bhi bheed mein ek din.............