Mere Hisse Ki Dhoop,.

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Ye Mere Hisse Ki Dhoop Hai, Mujhe Jalne De,.
Kaanton Ki Raahein Ye Meri Hain, Inpe Chalne De,.

Thokarein Mukaddar Ban Baithi Hain Ab To Mere,.
Thokaron Ke Sahaare Hi To Mujhe Sambhalne De,.

Manzoor Nahi Kisi Ko Ke Mujhe Chamakta Dekhein,.
Mujhe Gaur Se Na Dekh, Tu Bhi Mujhe Dhalne De,.

Mere Baad Hogi Kadar Zamaane Ko Meri, "Azeem,.
Ye Waqt Mera Nahi, Mujhe Is Daur Se Nikalne De,.

Jo Na Royoon To Duniya Kahegi Patthar Mujhe,.
Aaj Is Patthar Ko Je Bharke Pighalne De,.

Ye Mere Hisse Ki Dhoop Hai, Mujhe Jalne De,.

-Azeem-


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«Reply #1 on: April 26, 2010, 07:52:38 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Azeem Bhai..

bahut Hi Khoobsurat Peshkash!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: April 26, 2010, 08:56:13 AM »
bahut khub Azeem jee
khuda Aapko kushiyn hi kushiyn de.Aamen
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«Reply #3 on: April 26, 2010, 10:15:59 AM »
Sunder kalaam hai aapka Azeem-bhai..... Applause Applause Applause.

Attalikaaon se ghiraa ek Jhonpda poochhta raha
Batao Mere Hisse ki Dhoop ko kyu koi khaa raha
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«Reply #4 on: April 26, 2010, 11:14:29 AM »
Wah wah Azeem bahi bahot achha likha hai. Dard ko bahot khoobsurat dhang se numaya kiya hai. Bahot khoob.
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«Reply #5 on: April 26, 2010, 01:33:19 PM »
bahut ki khoob likha hai aapne Azeem ji... bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: April 27, 2010, 06:44:37 AM »
Bahut Khoob Chote Bhai
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«Reply #7 on: April 27, 2010, 09:19:08 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Azeem Bhai..

bahut Hi Khoobsurat Peshkash!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shukriya Hausla Afzaai Ka Khwaish Bhai, Rab Khair Kare,.

Shukriya
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«Reply #8 on: April 28, 2010, 12:49:31 PM »
mujhe ghuar sey naa dekh.....bahut khoob  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: April 29, 2010, 01:02:11 PM »
bahut khub Azeem jee
khuda Aapko kushiyn hi kushiyn de.Aamen

Aameeen,

Shukriya Taheer Bhai,.

Bahut Khub Azeem Bhai

ALLAH Pak Aapko Har Ranj o Gham Se Mehfuz Rakhe Ameen


Khush Rahiye...


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Aameen Ya Rabbul Aalameen, Shukriya Mere Bhai,.
Allah Khair Kare,.
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«Reply #10 on: May 04, 2010, 12:03:38 PM »
bahut dard bhari nazm hai.kya baat hai. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: May 20, 2010, 09:10:55 AM »
Sunder kalaam hai aapka Azeem-bhai..... Applause Applause Applause.

Attalikaaon se ghiraa ek Jhonpda poochhta raha
Batao Mere Hisse ki Dhoop ko kyu koi khaa raha


Shukriya KOyal Ji,.

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Wah wah Azeem bahi bahot achha likha hai. Dard ko bahot khoobsurat dhang se numaya kiya hai. Bahot khoob.

Shukriya Riyaz Bhai, bas Ek Koshish Ki, Khushi Hui Ke Aapne Ise Saraaha
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«Reply #12 on: May 20, 2010, 09:15:01 AM »
bahut ki khoob likha hai aapne Azeem ji... bahut khoob...!!!

Shukriya Hausla Afzaai Ka,.
Klaskar Ji

Bahut Khoob Chote Bhai

Shukriya Rajesh Bhai,.
mujhe ghuar sey naa dekh.....bahut khoob  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Khamosh Awaaz Ji,.
bahut dard bhari nazm hai.kya baat hai. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shukriya Suresh Ji
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«Reply #13 on: May 20, 2010, 09:21:10 AM »
Wah wah Azeem bhai,bahut gaherai,sachai aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.really touched.great work,beautiful lines by Koyal sis,excellent Hats off to you! Hats off to you! icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: May 20, 2010, 09:58:03 AM »
Thanks Azeem bahi....

Shukriya KOyal Ji,.

And Nice Lines,.
Shukriya Riyaz Bhai, bas Ek Koshish Ki, Khushi Hui Ke Aapne Ise Saraaha
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