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«Reply #15 on: September 15, 2010, 03:15:17 PM » |
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<>*Mere Khuda*<>
Mere Khuda ye kya sitam kiya tune dil pe mere
Tere kahe ko pura kiya fir saza kyun ye pai maine
Jisko apna sab kuch maana use bhi na khush rakh saki
Tu hi bata aisi bhi kya khata ki hai maine
Kyun ye dard ye judaai ye taklif sahe har pal wo
Kyun iss tarah ki zindagi de di use maine
Na pyaar na wafaa na hi khushi ka ek bhi pal
Jab diya sirf dard hi diya hai use maine
Aaj sharm saar hun khudse hi main ee Khuda
Tabhi apni maut k badle uski zindagi mangi maine
Na kar ye sitam k ghut k reh jaun main yun
Apni naadani me ye kya gunaah kar diya maine
Ek hasti khelti bharpur zindagi dede khuda ab use
Barsa de khuda noor apna us par bas yehi manga hai maine
Kya Khoob Ashaar bayaan kiye hai ....KasaK ji ... bahut umda rahi aapki yeh peshkash...dil se daad...aise hi likhti rahen aage bhi... khush rahen... duaaon ke saath... |
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«Reply #16 on: September 15, 2010, 07:22:15 PM » |
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Ab Kasak Jee kuch aage kahe to baat aage badhe.........kahi anjaane me koi gustakhi to nahi ho gayee humse.
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«Reply #17 on: September 15, 2010, 07:29:05 PM » |
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Jo bhavra banu, bano phool tum
Jo khata main karu, bano bhool tum
Jo kaata banu, bano chubhan tum
Jo badal banu, bano Gagan tum
Jo Kasak banu, bano sanam tum
Jo Ghayel banu, bano marham tum...
waahhhhh sajid ji kya khubb kaha hai aapne.......
mast style hai ye aapke likhne ka.....
par mujhe abhi to kuch sujh hi nahin raha kasak aur ghayael se....
ok try karti hun...
tut jate hain mahobbat me dil deewanon k
ho jaati hain ruuh tak tab Ghayel unki
bhulne ki koshish me apne dilbar jani ko
KasaK dil ki ban k reh jati hai mahobbat unki |
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«Reply #18 on: September 15, 2010, 07:41:17 PM » |
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waahhhhh sajid ji kya khubb kaha hai aapne.......
mast style hai ye aapke likhne ka.....
par mujhe abhi to kuch sujh hi nahin raha kasak aur ghayael se....
ok try karti hun...
tut jate hain mahobbat me dil deewanon k
ho jaati hain ruuh tak tab Ghayel unki
bhulne ki koshish me apne dilbar jani ko
KasaK dil ki ban k reh jati hai mahobbat unki Kya baat hai kya baat hai hum to ek ek run lete hai aap to seedhe chakka maar deti ho........hahahahaha. Waise aap Ghayel aur Kasak me na uljhe jo bhi man me aaye likhe jo mere likhe ke jawab sa ho........waise aap ke sath likhna sahi me aasaan nahi hai..... Ek Kasak si dil me uthi hai
Maut kisi Ghayel ki hui hai
Gam iska nahi ke woh nahi raha
Hai afsos q pass apne zindagi hai....
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«Reply #19 on: September 15, 2010, 07:53:37 PM » |
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shukriya ji tareef ka..waise bhi mujhe apni tareef sunna aur karna pasand hai ji..jitno chahiye karo bindaasssss....
hai pas zindgi baithi tere
fir bhi kyun maut ka dar hai
jante hain hum ye baat dost
zindagi hai bewafa aur
maut hi sachchi humdard hai |
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«Reply #20 on: September 15, 2010, 08:03:11 PM » |
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Kya kehne aapki shayri ke bas thodaaaaaa saaaaa aur rhythm me aa jao, bohat zamane baat Ghayel kisi ke sath itna likh raha hai Yoindia par......Bas itni si zindagi de maula
Jitni haskar guzar ho jaye
Unki godh me ho sar mera
Aur khatm Ghayel ka safar ho jaye....
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«Reply #21 on: September 15, 2010, 08:13:05 PM » |
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwww
mastammmmmmmm'
yehi tamanna to ab meri bhi hai
teri baahon me mujhe panaah mil jaye
sir ho mera tere seene pe aur
aankh hamesha k liye band ho jaye |
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«Reply #22 on: September 15, 2010, 08:25:58 PM » |
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Aa apni baho me chupa lu tujhko
Tere gamo se chura lu tujhko
Hai meri bandagi ka bas yeh shauk
Umr sari main Dua du tujhko.. |
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«Reply #23 on: September 15, 2010, 08:27:31 PM » |
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meri duaon me tum ho shamil
aaj ye main bata dun tujhko
tujhe hi manga hai humdum maine
aaja ruuh me basa lum tujhko |
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«Reply #24 on: September 15, 2010, 08:33:13 PM » |
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«Reply #25 on: September 15, 2010, 08:39:37 PM » |
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Tujhko apni saso me basaya hai
Mujhme wajood tera samaya hai
Kitna gareeb tha main aaj se pehle
Tujhko paya mano jaha paya hai..... |
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«Reply #26 on: September 15, 2010, 08:43:58 PM » |
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shukriya bhai.....pasand karne k liye....bas dil k dard ko zubaan mil jati hai likhne se to likh lete hain..warna to aap sab itna achcha likhte hain k khud ka kahin naam bhi nazar nahin aata......
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«Reply #27 on: September 15, 2010, 08:46:58 PM » |
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mere diye dard se to tu anjana hai
abhi to tune sirf mera pyaar paya hai
kuch waqt gazar jane de fir kahega
tujhe paa k maine apna sukun ganwaya hai |
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«Reply #28 on: September 15, 2010, 08:49:07 PM » |
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Kya Khoob Ashaar bayaan kiye hai ....KasaK ji ... bahut umda rahi aapki yeh peshkash...dil se daad...aise hi likhti rahen aage bhi... khush rahen...
duaaon ke saath...
shukriya naresh ji....aur main koshish karungi k main achch alikhti rahu k sabko pasand aaye.... |
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«Reply #29 on: September 15, 2010, 08:58:08 PM » |
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Na ho jo gham khushi ki ehmiyat kya hai
Na ho jo mushkiley manzil ki haisiyat kya hai
Mukammal nahi yaha koi insaa.N
Na ho takraar jisme woh mohabbat kya hai... |
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