Mere Pyar Ki Dastaan!!!:Shayri-E-Dard

khushi4pari

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Mere Pyar Ki Dastaan!!!

Zindagi yun guzar jayegi yun socha na tha
kisi humsafar ke intezaar mein samay roka na tha

Aisa nahi ki pyaar kiya nahi maine
bus usse lautaaya nahi kisi ne

Sapno ke mukadar mein pura hone ki khush nasibi nahi hoti
har ek kahani mein kabhi raja to kabhi rani nahi hoti

Har samay ek sangharsh hai jeene ka
halaaton ke aage jhukkar aage bharne ka

Woh pyaar jo pehla tha
woh yaar jo bheer mein akela tha

Kyun bhulaya nahi gaya humse
kyun juda na ho paya dil se...

Aaj mudaton baad phir unhain paaya wahan
apna dil akela tanha chor aaye the jahan

Phir dil mein ek kasak si jagi thi
phir wahi sapna ek raja jis ki ek rani thi

Phir us jagah se yun has kar chal diye
jaise safar mein do ajnabi kuch der ruk kar chal diye...

Ab zindagi mein aalag hi jahan apna hai
ek baar phir pyaara lekin naa poora hone wala ek sapna hai

zindagi ke safar ka humsafar koi nahi hai
jo chaha woh nahi ...humne paya zindagi me kuch nahi...

Zindagi yun guzar jayegi yun socha na tha
kisi humdum ke intezaar mein samay roka na tha... tearyeyed


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: Mere Pyar Ki Dastaan!!!

«Reply #1 on: October 14, 2008, 01:09:33 AM »

Sochaa n tha, sochaa n tha kehte kehte bohot kuchh soch liyaa aap ne or bohot khoob socha, ek zindah haqiqat he, achha likha he aap ne.

magar aap ne ye nazm ghalti se do baar post kar di.


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baadal102

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Re: Mere Pyar Ki Dastaan!!!

«Reply #2 on: October 14, 2008, 06:53:09 AM »

bahut hi dil se likha hai aap ne
really touching

Baadal


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: Mere Pyar Ki Dastaan!!!

«Reply #3 on: October 14, 2008, 08:10:57 AM »

Quote from: khushi4pari on October 13, 2008, 11:56:05 PM

JO LIKHA HAIN TUNE TERE LIYE BHI KOI AISA SOCHTA HOGA
TERE INTEZAR ME KOI TERA BHI RASTA DEKHTA HOGA
TUJE FURSAT NAHI APNI NAKAM MOHABBAT PE AASOO BAHANE SE
AUR KOI KAHI APNI DUA ME TUJE MANGTA HOGA

TERI TARAH KISI AUR KI BHI KAHANI HOGI
ITNI KHUDGARZ NA BAN KYA PATA TU BHI KISI KI RANI HOGI

-SG-


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Talat

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Re: Mere Pyar Ki Dastaan!!!

«Reply #4 on: October 14, 2008, 07:20:28 PM »

Quote from: khushi4pari on October 13, 2008, 11:56:05 PM

Pari, tumne mujhe rula diya tearyeyed

nahin kahungi ki bohot achcha likha hai...bas ye dua ki Allah tumhe dher saari khushian den (ameen)


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Re: Mere Pyar Ki Dastaan!!!

«Reply #5 on: October 14, 2008, 07:30:33 PM »

Quote from: khushi4pari on October 13, 2008, 11:56:05 PM

bahut bahut khoob!! aap ne jo ye poetry likhi hai, sach kahoon to yeh ek sachi kahani si lagi..bahut jazbaati aur dil ko choone wali baatein kahin hai aapne..bahut ache..


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Pooja

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Re: Mere Pyar Ki Dastaan!!!

«Reply #6 on: October 14, 2008, 07:35:04 PM »

bahoot khoob Khushi!!!


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khushi4pari

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Re: Mere Pyar Ki Dastaan!!!

«Reply #7 on: October 14, 2008, 08:37:27 PM »

Bohat bohat shukriya aap sab ka lekin main ek baat kehna chahti hu its NOT MINE....ye main kal likhna bhul gayi thi sorry sad10


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pramod_singh804

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Re: Mere Pyar Ki Dastaan!!!

«Reply #8 on: October 16, 2008, 07:24:38 AM »

Lagta hai Shayad Aapne mere Dil Ki Baat Likh Di....

1 Baar Phir se Purani Yadein Taza Ho Gai....

Bahoot Khoob....
Applause


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Talat

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Re: Mere Pyar Ki Dastaan!!!

«Reply #9 on: October 16, 2008, 08:20:44 AM »

Quote from: khushi4pari on October 14, 2008, 08:37:27 PM

Bohat bohat shukriya aap sab ka lekin main ek baat kehna chahti hu its NOT MINE....ye main kal likhna bhul gayi thi sorry sad10

Pari,

I trust you that you must have forgotten to write Not Mine....and you are right, If you had not written this, we would not have known that it is not your original creation.

An applause for your truth and yet again for your beautiful sharing


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: Mere Pyar Ki Dastaan!!!

«Reply #10 on: October 16, 2008, 08:37:11 AM »

I AGREE WITH HER.

Quote from: Celmira on October 16, 2008, 08:20:44 AM


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shika

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Re: Mere Pyar Ki Dastaan!!!

«Reply #11 on: October 16, 2008, 09:44:23 AM »

its really touchy apko salam icon_salut


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Mere Pyar Ki Dastaan!!!

«Reply #12 on: October 16, 2008, 09:58:58 AM »

Thanks for your wonderful sharing Khusi ji
Is nazm net oh dil ko hi Chhuh liya Applause


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: Mere Pyar Ki Dastaan!!!

«Reply #13 on: October 16, 2008, 08:24:46 PM »

Quote from: khushi4pari on October 14, 2008, 08:37:27 PM

Bohat bohat shukriya aap sab ka lekin main ek baat kehna chahti hu its NOT MINE....ye main kal likhna bhul gayi thi sorry sad10

Koi baat nahi pari sahiba, aap ne yaad aane par likhdiya ye badi baat he, shukriya, pehle aap ki nazm ki tarif ki thi ab aap ki pasand ki tarif karta hun. isi tarah likhte rahiye or bohot khush rahiye.


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