Mere Pyar Mein The Kuch Kami

by nishi gahlaut on August 30, 2012, 04:49:08 PM
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Jaane kyun wo mere pyar ko kabhi samjh he nahi pate,
Jitna mai jati paas unke utni hi dur wo mujhse ho jate,
Meri fekr ko wo har bar dekhawa he samjhte rahte,
Ham apnaa pyaar kabhee unko jataa naheeN paate.
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«Reply #1 on: August 30, 2012, 04:54:02 PM »
nice
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nishi gahlaut
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«Reply #2 on: August 30, 2012, 04:55:38 PM »
thank u mkv ji....
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«Reply #3 on: August 30, 2012, 06:07:06 PM »
Quote from: nishi gahlaut on August 30, 2012, 04:49:08 PM
Jaane kyun wo mere pyar ko kabhi samjh he nahi pate,
Jitna mai jati paas unke utni hi dur wo mujhse ho jate,
Meri fekr ko wo har bar dekhawa he samjhte rahte,
Mere pyar mein the kuch kami jo unko kabhi jata he nhi pati.


               merii mohabbat  pey bahaar bhii marr mitey  hai!
               usey khabar nahin,jis pe meraa dil-o-jaan mitey hai.!! Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: August 31, 2012, 12:40:31 AM »
bahut khoob nishi ji

Aise mushkil ghari mein sahas mat khoiye
Apna pyar yun hi jatate rahiye

Pyar mein vo takat hai, ek din jaroor ayega
Jab sanam aapke kadmo mein jhuka hoga
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«Reply #5 on: August 31, 2012, 03:19:21 AM »
Good.
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«Reply #6 on: August 31, 2012, 03:58:57 AM »
ACHA HAI NISHI JI
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«Reply #7 on: August 31, 2012, 04:15:06 AM »
 Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: August 31, 2012, 04:36:06 AM »
Bahut bahut shukriya aap sab ka ji..

Bahut khoob likha apne nandbahu ji and khamosh ji..
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«Reply #9 on: August 31, 2012, 08:36:08 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Nishi ji...!!

wo naa samjhe naa sahi, tum ghum naa karo
apni mohabbat ko tum kabhi kam naa karo
mausam ke saath unka mizaaz bhi badkegaa
aaj unhe pyaar nahi is baat ka ghum naa karo
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«Reply #10 on: August 31, 2012, 10:52:43 AM »
Quote from: nishi gahlaut on August 30, 2012, 04:49:08 PM
Jaane kyun wo mere pyar ko kabhi samjh he nahi pate,
Jitna mai jati paas unke utni hi dur wo mujhse ho jate,
Meri fekr ko wo har bar dekhawa he samjhte rahte,
Ham apnaa pyaar kabhee unko jataa naheeN paate.

Bahut bahut khoob nisi ji keep writing .......Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: August 31, 2012, 02:30:48 PM »
bahut achhe nishi ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: September 04, 2012, 11:26:11 AM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 31, 2012, 08:36:08 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Nishi ji...!!

wo naa samjhe naa sahi, tum ghum naa karo
apni mohabbat ko tum kabhi kam naa karo
mausam ke saath unka mizaaz bhi badkegaa
aaj unhe pyaar nahi is baat ka ghum naa karo
Thanks Hriday ji...
Bahut khoob kaha apne.. Applause
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«Reply #13 on: September 04, 2012, 11:27:54 AM »
Quote from: pankajwfs on August 31, 2012, 10:52:43 AM
Bahut bahut khoob nisi ji keep writing .......Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Thanks pankaj ji...
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«Reply #14 on: September 04, 2012, 11:29:39 AM »
Thanks Touhid ji...
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