Mere shahar ka mausam udaas hai...!!

by Talat on January 30, 2009, 10:55:36 AM
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«Reply #1 on: January 30, 2009, 11:06:46 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on January 30, 2009, 10:55:36 AM


Bahut Bahut Bahut Khooob Talat..

Laakh zarar seh kar bhi yunhi dhadakta hai
Bahut Pukhta iss Imarat ka asaas hai... Kya Baat Kahin aapne Talat..bahut ache.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: January 30, 2009, 12:08:49 PM »
celmira ji.......
 mera mann bahut hi udaas hai,
dil mein lagi uski aas hai.
har taklif uski,khushi se sahungi,
ki dil mein lagi, usiki pyaas hai.
lakh dard de is dil ko,yeh tume kuj nahin kahega,
bahut majboot hai dil mera,yun hi dhadakta rahega.
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«Reply #3 on: January 30, 2009, 12:31:26 PM »
nice one Celmira Ji and Cara ji

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«Reply #4 on: January 30, 2009, 06:52:00 PM »
Bohat khoob Talat its always a pleasure to read you  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Dil me bhoj uske kaise na hota Ghayel
Uske dil me um_meed bohat hain bohat aas hain

                -SG-
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«Reply #5 on: January 30, 2009, 07:34:12 PM »
very very nice ghayal
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«Reply #6 on: January 31, 2009, 01:46:37 AM »
Good one Celmira Ji.
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«Reply #7 on: January 31, 2009, 04:46:44 AM »
Wah Wah Subhan Subhan Allah kya kahene is kalaam janab har ashar kadwi-sacha-e-pe mabni hai janab dil se dad qubool karen Talat ji,

is ashar ne to sans ruk di khuch der ke liye !!

Is Tabassum me chupe dard ko kya janega !!
Zamana ye itna na gham Shinaas hai !!

.............Talat Jabeen ............

Teri Ghazal ko de sakon aisi koi misaal  to-de !!
tarif karne ka waqath hai ajj koi alfaaz to-de!!

.............Qadeer Toopchi..................


Subhan allah Is kalaam ke agge likne ki taqalth nahi nachiz me aur gustaqi maaf janab itni achi ghazal ke Maqte me shayara ki maujodgi hoti to bahoth umda hota   !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #8 on: January 31, 2009, 05:22:02 AM »
bahut acche lines hai celmira ji....good.. Applause
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«Reply #9 on: January 31, 2009, 06:12:48 AM »
 Applause  Applause  Applause
Bahut khoob likha hai Celmira sis,

Shally.
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«Reply #10 on: January 31, 2009, 11:07:26 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on January 30, 2009, 11:06:46 AM
Bahut Bahut Bahut Khooob Talat..

Laakh zarar seh kar bhi yunhi dhadakta hai
Bahut Pukhta iss Imarat ka asaas hai... Kya Baat Kahin aapne Talat..bahut ache.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Khwaish aapko ye ashaar pasand aaye...bohot bohot shukriya dost.
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«Reply #11 on: January 31, 2009, 11:08:57 AM »
Quote from: cara on January 30, 2009, 12:08:49 PM
celmira ji.......
 mera mann bahut hi udaas hai,
dil mein lagi uski aas hai.
har taklif uski,khushi se sahungi,
ki dil mein lagi, usiki pyaas hai.
lakh dard de is dil ko,yeh tume kuj nahin kahega,
bahut majboot hai dil mera,yun hi dhadakta rahega.

Very nice reply Cara Ji Thank You for writing these beautiful lines.
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«Reply #12 on: January 31, 2009, 11:10:46 AM »
Quote from: King_Khan on January 30, 2009, 12:31:26 PM
nice one Celmira Ji and Cara ji

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Thanks Khan Ji
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«Reply #13 on: January 31, 2009, 11:12:26 AM »
Bohat Hi Badhiya Hai, Nice One Talat Behna, Yunhi Likhte Raho,.
And NIce One Abdul Qadeer Bhai,.
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«Reply #14 on: January 31, 2009, 11:12:55 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 30, 2009, 06:52:00 PM
Bohat khoob Talat its always a pleasure to read you  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Dil me bhoj uske kaise na hota Ghayel
Uske dil me um_meed bohat hain bohat aas hain

                -SG-

....and its always a pleasure to have your comments in my thread, Sajid Ji

Bohot khoob likha hai aapne Sajid Ji..tah-e-dil se shukriya.
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