Mere shahar ka mausam udaas hai...!!

by Talat on January 30, 2009, 10:55:36 AM
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«Reply #30 on: February 01, 2009, 07:06:49 PM »
Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 31, 2009, 11:24:35 AM
Shukriya Janab IS Haqeeq shayar ko Apne izzath bakshi !! Allah apke har kalam ko miyari izzath ata farma-a-Ameen !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Shukriya Qadeer Ji
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«Reply #31 on: February 01, 2009, 07:07:46 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 31, 2009, 11:25:47 AM
Tere Shehar Ka Mausam Bohat Udaas Hai,.
Tabhi To Har Shaks Ke Dil Mein Pyaas Hai,.

Har Ek Ki Nigaah Mein Maine Bebasi Dekhi,.
Har Ki Zindagi Mein Bechaini Paayi,.
 Ye Shehar Bohat Ghamzaada Hai,.
Aur Is Baat Ka Mujhe Bhi Ehsaas Hai,.

_____________________-Jaanasheen-




Nice Janasheen Ji
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«Reply #32 on: February 01, 2009, 07:10:43 PM »
Quote from: honeyrose on January 31, 2009, 11:29:21 AM


 Applause Applause Applause

Wonderfull work Celmira sis bohat khoob likha hai aapne ... Thumbs UP

Thanks a lot Honey sis
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«Reply #33 on: February 01, 2009, 07:11:28 PM »
Quote from: Roja on January 31, 2009, 12:36:14 PM
Bahut dino ke baad behtareen kalam aapka padne mila.
Well designed image.. Good work Talat sis  Applause Accha laga padkar..
No no... BAHUT ACCHA LAGA PADKAR..  Usual Smile

Thanks a lot for your lovely apreciation Roja
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«Reply #34 on: February 01, 2009, 07:21:13 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on January 31, 2009, 06:32:23 PM
Talat,Aap jaisa to nahi likh paunga,phir bhi ek choti si koshish kar raha hoon..

Lab Khamosh Hai,Aankhein Nam Hai,
Dil Mein Mehfoos Ab Bhi Koi Raaz Hai...


Apni-Apni Uljhano Mein Uljha Hai Har Shaks Iss Shehar Ka,
Phir Bhi Chehre Par Muskaan Hai!!
Kya Khoob,Yahan Jeene Ka Andaaz Hai...


Apne Dil Ko Tasalli De Raha Hoon Main,
Zindagi Ke Har Mod Par,
Haar naa Maan "KHWAISH",
Dekh Manzil Kahin Aas-Paas Hai....


Majbooriyon Ke Pinjre Mein Qaid Hai Woh Bebas sa Parinda,
Ek Din Chuega Woh Bhi Aasman,
Bahut Unchi Uski Parwaaz Hai....

Parwaaz: Udaan



Bohot hi khoob Khwaish....Bohot khoobsurat koshish hai aapki...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

..aur ye lines to bohot hi khoob hain:

"Majbooriyon Ke Pinjre Mein Qaid Hai Woh Bebas sa Parinda,
Ek Din Chuega Woh Bhi Aasman,
Bahut Unchi Uski Parwaaz Hai"

Two lines from me:

Oonchaiyon se aasmaan ki bhala kab wo dara karte hain
Manzil paa lete hain parinde, jab par unke khula karte hain
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«Reply #35 on: February 01, 2009, 07:40:41 PM »
Udaasi Ka Nakhaab Tere Chehre Se Hataane Aaya Hoon,.
Tere Shehar Mein Main Khushiyaan Lutaane Aaya Hoon,.

Dekhaa Nahi Jaata, Kisi Ke Bhi Dilka Dard "Mujhse,.
Main Tujhe Bhi Khushiyon Se Dosti Karwaane Aaya Hoon,.

Tere Chehre Pe, Udaasi Mujhe Achchi Nahi Lagti,.
Tere Haq Ki Hai Jo Khuhshiyaan, Tujhe Pahoonchaane Aaya Hoon,.

_____________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #36 on: February 02, 2009, 05:22:40 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on January 30, 2009, 10:55:36 AM

Yea! All this is what we call life! The entire creation, based on lovely poetic images communicates a lot! The pangs of a pining heart are sketched and delivered beautifully! It's a lovely piece of poetry! Well done Talat! Applause Clapping Smiley
                 - abd bundeli
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«Reply #37 on: February 02, 2009, 10:10:51 AM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 01, 2009, 07:40:41 PM
Udaasi Ka Nakhaab Tere Chehre Se Hataane Aaya Hoon,.
Tere Shehar Mein Main Khushiyaan Lutaane Aaya Hoon,.

Dekhaa Nahi Jaata, Kisi Ke Bhi Dilka Dard "Mujhse,.
Main Tujhe Bhi Khushiyon Se Dosti Karwaane Aaya Hoon,.

Tere Chehre Pe, Udaasi Mujhe Achchi Nahi Lagti,.
Tere Haq Ki Hai Jo Khuhshiyaan, Tujhe Pahoonchaane Aaya Hoon,.

_____________________________-Jaanasheen-




Bohot Khoob Janasheen Ji, bohot achcha likha hai aapne.
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«Reply #38 on: February 02, 2009, 10:12:01 AM »
Shukriya Didi,.
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«Reply #39 on: February 02, 2009, 10:20:38 AM »
Quote from: abdbundeli on February 02, 2009, 05:22:40 AM
Yea! All this is what we call life! The entire creation, based on lovely poetic images communicates a lot! The pangs of a pining heart are sketched and delivered beautifully! It's a lovely piece of poetry! Well done Talat! Applause Clapping Smiley
                 - abd bundeli

Thank You so much Abd Ji for reading my work. An appreciation from you means so much for me. Thank you for always encouraging, otherwise just an ordinary piece of work.  Usual Smile
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«Reply #40 on: February 02, 2009, 12:25:45 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on February 02, 2009, 10:20:38 AM
Thank You so much Abd Ji for reading my work. An appreciation from you means so much for me. Thank you for always encouraging, otherwise just an ordinary piece of work.  Usual Smile

Dr. Talat! No body can deny the virtue that stands behind the  poem! Your humility is also a part of that virtue! Any way, you're always welcome!
                      - abd bundeli
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«Reply #41 on: February 02, 2009, 07:25:49 PM »
Thank You for your sweet words Abd Ji
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«Reply #42 on: February 03, 2009, 03:56:22 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on February 02, 2009, 07:25:49 PM
Thank You for your sweet words Abd Ji
Your worth is much much more than those words could have expressed! May HE keep you fit & happy, along with all your loved ones!
             - abd bundeli
                   
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«Reply #43 on: February 03, 2009, 05:39:15 PM »
Thank You for your blessings.
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«Reply #44 on: February 03, 2009, 06:33:41 PM »
Tere Shehar Mein Aaya Tha, Bebas Tha, Lachaar Tha Main,.
Is Daur Mein Paagal Banaa Hoon, Us Daur Me Kisi Ka Pyaar Tha Main,.
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