Mere Ulfat ke nasheman mein koi bat nahi:Shayri-E-Dard

thycreator

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Mere ulfat ke nasheman mein koi bat nahi,
Juban khamosh hai in aakhon mein barsat nahi.

Dil ye veerana hua hai mera toh sadiyon se,
Bas ek tanhai hai ismein koi jajjbat nahi.

Kaise samjhaye usko wo jo mera ho na saka,
Kuch bhi ab kehne ke sun.ne ke haalat nahi.

Badi shokhi se dil ye toda usne hanste hue,
Pyar mein mujhko mili isse badi saugat nahi.

Dua hi dena chahta hu phir bhi main usko,
Kyu ibadat mein phir uthte mere hath nahi.

Ab toh jeene ki har ummeed jhoothi lagti hai,
Bhari dunia mein ek ajnabee ka bhi sath nahi.

Aye khuda kar mujhe azaad iss ruswai se,
Kuch bhi mangu main tujhse ab meri aukat nahi.


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Pooja

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Mere Ulfat ke nasheman mein koi bat nahi

«Reply #1 on: June 10, 2007, 05:14:35 PM »

superbbbb.... beautifull......................... very touching....

Creator ji apki shayri ko maan gaye!! bahoot hi acha likhte hai app.... dard ko itne simple words mai bayan kiya hai.... dil se daad kabool kijiye!!

Zazbaat uthe aor khayal bante chale gaye
khayal uthe aor khawab bante chale gaye
khawabo ne jab haqiqat se ki ankhein char
hajaro gum aor jakham, dil per sajte chale gaye


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thycreator

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Mere Ulfat ke nasheman mein koi bat nahi

«Reply #2 on: June 10, 2007, 05:59:47 PM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

Thanks a lot pooja ji.......u wrote back a gud one too..... Usual Smile

Kabhi aankhon se piya karte the hum jaam-e-muhabbat,
Unhi aakhon ko bahane ka waqt aagaya hai ab.
Badi muddat hui dunia ki asal tasveer na dekhi,
Sabhi parde hatane ka waqt aagaya hai ab.
Sach ko saaf dekh le, galatfehmiyan mita de sab,
Ansoon se nigahen dhulane ka waqt aa gaya hai ab...


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Ricky

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Mere Ulfat ke nasheman mein koi bat nahi

«Reply #3 on: June 10, 2007, 08:32:05 PM »

Thy..
Very good..
Seems that your comeback is a blast.. reading almost all your poetry and everyone is having its own charm !


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Pooja

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Mere Ulfat ke nasheman mein koi bat nahi

«Reply #4 on: June 11, 2007, 05:21:10 AM »

wah kaya baat hai.... bahoot hi acha likha hai apne...

Jinki bahon mai khud ko samjhate rahe mehfuj (safe)
Unhi bahon se ab humko dar lagta hai
Ankh band kar karte rahe jis per vishwaas
Ajj ussi se apni jaan ka khatra hume lagta hai
Such samjhe kaise hum is badalti duniya main
Ab to her ek apne se humko dar lagta hai


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deepika_divya

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Mere Ulfat ke nasheman mein koi bat nahi

«Reply #5 on: June 11, 2007, 07:39:10 AM »

bhoot khoob creator ji.. behed khubsurat hai aapki yea peshkash

pooja Di .. wonderful reply by u...

Divya


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thycreator

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Mere Ulfat ke nasheman mein koi bat nahi

«Reply #6 on: June 11, 2007, 08:58:02 AM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

Thanks a lot Pooja n deepika ji, Kya kamal hai pooja...apne "dar lagta hai" use kiya apne lines mein....meri next poem ka naam bhi yahi hai, aaj sham ko padh lijiyega......... Winking

Ricky ji, thanks for your words, miss kiya hai bahut yoindia ko itne dino, uski kasar nikal raha hu..... Usual Smile

Hai dua yahi ki ab ye dil patthar ka ho jaye,
Na ho jajjbat koi, apni hi dhun mein ye kho jaye.
Nahi haasil isse dunia mein koi ek khushi yu bhi,
Chalo accha ho dunia se ye bhi begana ho jaye...


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Rajbir

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Mere Ulfat ke nasheman mein koi bat nahi

«Reply #7 on: June 11, 2007, 11:09:30 AM »

Amit, Pooja

Very good !

Sach mein bahut he acha lag raha hai aap dono ka likha padhna.

Amit waiting for your new dhamaka in the evening :D


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Shikha12

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Mere Ulfat ke nasheman mein koi bat nahi

«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2007, 01:11:26 PM »

Lovely.... Usual Smile

Ab to Tareef karna bhi nahin aa raha... tongue3

Sach mein ek se badh kar ek likha hai Amit and Pooja di...
Waiting for next one now... Usual Smile


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thycreator

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Mere Ulfat ke nasheman mein koi bat nahi

«Reply #9 on: June 11, 2007, 05:44:02 PM »

Quote from: "Rajbir"

Amit, Pooja

Very good !

Sach mein bahut he acha lag raha hai aap dono ka likha padhna.

Amit waiting for your new dhamaka in the evening :D

Hey thanks man......but how do u know i come only in eve....actually yoindia is blocked in my institute till 9 pm.... sad5


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thycreator

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Mere Ulfat ke nasheman mein koi bat nahi

«Reply #10 on: June 11, 2007, 06:02:45 PM »

Quote from: "Shikha12"

Lovely.... Usual Smile

Ab to Tareef karna bhi nahin aa raha... tongue3

Sach mein ek se badh kar ek likha hai Amit and Pooja di...
Waiting for next one now... Usual Smile

Thanks a lot dear........apko pasand aaya matlab ki likhna safal ho gaya... Usual Smile

Kyu nahi aankh meri uske yaad pe bhar aati hai,
Uss se dur reh kar bhi meri jaan nahi jaati hai,
Mana wo bewafa hai phir bhi toh hai sanam mera,
Meri wafa mein kahin kasar toh nahi baki hai??


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Pooja

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Mere Ulfat ke nasheman mein koi bat nahi

«Reply #11 on: June 11, 2007, 07:26:30 PM »

bahoot bahoot shukaria Creator ji, Veer ji and shikha ji!!

Wafa apni per hi ab to aitbaar nahi
Na jaane kyun unko humse payaar nahi

Payaar ka arth shayad unke liye hai kuch aor
Ya mujhko hi payaar ki pehchan nahi


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paani

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Mere Ulfat ke nasheman mein koi bat nahi

«Reply #12 on: June 12, 2007, 04:35:32 AM »

uuuuuuuuffffffffffffffffffffffffff dard wo bhi itna... u r luckiest one creator .. bahut hi umda shayar hai aap..


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thycreator

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Mere Ulfat ke nasheman mein koi bat nahi

«Reply #13 on: June 12, 2007, 05:08:09 PM »

Thanks a lot Paani ji.....likh lete hai hum kabhi kabhi.... apko pasand aaya....matlab meri koshish safal hui.. Usual Smile

Thanks Pooja.....n nice lines from you....

Pyar hi pyar kiya humne, bas wafa nibhayi hai,
Phir bhi jane kyu dushman meri sari khudai hai,
Jahan bhi banaya aashiyan humne sapno ka,
Kismat ne ussi jagah pe sada bijli girayi hai.... sad5


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thycreator

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Mere Ulfat ke nasheman mein koi bat nahi

«Reply #14 on: June 14, 2007, 05:25:34 PM »

Nahi humdum koi mera, na koi sahara,
Iss raah-e-jindagi mein na koi hamara,
Har rishta jhootha lagta hai jane kyu humko,
Tanhaiyon ke saath hum kar lenge guzara... sad5


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