Mere Ulfat ke nasheman mein koi bat nahi

by thycreator on June 10, 2007, 12:06:57 PM
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«Reply #15 on: June 17, 2007, 07:10:54 AM »
Kuch dur tak hi sahi, koi toh mere sath chale,
Bahut tanha raha hu mai, koi toh thame hath chale.
Badi kamoshi se main seh raha hu julm-o-sitam yahan,
Kabhi toh mausam ye badle, koi toh nayi baat chale.
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«Reply #16 on: June 17, 2007, 05:26:02 PM »
WOnderful..
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Pooja
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«Reply #17 on: June 20, 2007, 04:13:51 AM »
shukaria paani ji..

bahooot khoob Amit!!

Kon chalta hai kaha kisi ke sath
Apne sath sirf tanhaai chalati hai
Ate hai jaate hai log zindagi main
Zindagi unhi tanha chalati hai
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«Reply #18 on: June 20, 2007, 08:57:33 AM »
Bohot achhe Amit :D , lovely words.. Pooja ji bohot hi acha likha hai apne bhi..

kyon udaas hota hai dil yeh mera
jab hoti hai mulaqaat nahi
kyon har pal teri yaad sataati hai
jab tu mere saath nahi
kyon challka gaya tu aansu aankho mein
jaise mere koi jazbaat nahi
jaa o harjaai, teri deewani hoon main
tu kuch bhi karle, koi baat nahi..
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«Reply #19 on: June 20, 2007, 09:48:32 AM »
Amit, Pooja, Sani

Too good !

Sani aaj kal tumhe kya hua hai Puzzled ! :wink: :D
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«Reply #20 on: June 20, 2007, 05:12:23 PM »
thanku boss kuch khas nahi hua jo hua hai ache ke liye hua hai :D
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«Reply #21 on: June 20, 2007, 08:01:15 PM »
GREAT ONE AMIT & POOJAJI...SIMPLY SUPERB...EK HAMARE TARAF SE BI

HAR EK KE MANN MEIN
EK KHWAAB HOTA HAI
SACH HO JAAYE
YEH CHAAH HOTA HAI
MAINE TO  DIL DE
MAANGA THA UNKO
MAGAR BHOOL GAYA KI
 KHWAAB TO KHWAAB HI HOTA HAI
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«Reply #22 on: June 20, 2007, 08:46:11 PM »
khwaish ji c chand simple lines mai app gahra likh jaate hai..

bahoot ach alikha hai apne!!
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«Reply #23 on: June 20, 2007, 08:59:11 PM »
THANK U POOJA JI...ZINDAGI NE BAHUT KUCH SIKHAYA HAI

KISI KE DIL MEIN
BAS JAANA BURA TO NAHI
KISI KE DIL MEIN
BAS JAANA KOI
KHATA TO NAHI
GUNAAH HAI AGAR
ZAMAANE KI NAZAR MEIN
TO KYA HUA
ZAMAANE WAALE BI TO
AAKHIR INSAAN HAI
KOI KHUDA TO NAHI
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«Reply #24 on: June 20, 2007, 09:03:34 PM »
wah kaya baat hai....bilkul sahi kaha khwaish ji...

Bas jaate hai jo dil mai
Wo khud ke dil mai bsate nahi
Khudgarji ke hai rishte
Jinhe hum samjh paate nahi….
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«Reply #25 on: June 21, 2007, 07:15:46 PM »
SHUKRIYA POOJA JI...


YAADON MEIN HAMARI
WOH BI KABHI KHOYE HONGE
KHULI AANKHON SE
WOH BI KABHI SOYE HONGE
MAANA KI..HASNA BI HAI ADAA
GHAM CUPAANE KI
PAR HASTE HASTE
WOH BHI TO KABHI ROYE HONGE
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«Reply #26 on: June 23, 2007, 10:05:05 AM »
Thanks all aur aap sabne hi bahut accha likha hai yahan....khwaish ji.....the last one is brilliant.....

Kyu nahi kehta koi bedard hame iss jamane mein,
Kitne zakhm khaye hai humne iss fasane mein,
Phir bhi jee rahe hai hath mein ghayal dil liye,
Kuch toh baat hai iss naacheez deewane mein.....Usual Smile
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«Reply #27 on: June 23, 2007, 10:35:09 AM »
nice creator,

Tera daman bhigo deta main gr aakhri mulakaat hoti
Be-sabr sa rota main bhi gr be-sabr se barsaat hoti
NA tu hi lauti, na hi badalon ka PAANI lauta..
Suku.. milta meri hasraton ko bhi, gr tuze bhi besabr pyaas hoti.!!!


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«Reply #28 on: June 23, 2007, 10:39:13 AM »
Wah wah Paani ji.............bahut khoob....

Sawan ka ye mahina dil mein aag lagakar gaya,
Soye hui jaane kitne armaano ko jagakar gaya,
Badi muddat se thama tha jinhe apni aankhon mein,
PAANI ke unn katron ko apne sath bahakar gaya...
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«Reply #29 on: June 29, 2007, 06:23:41 PM »
Ab toh ehsaas ke kissi ehsaas se dar lagta hai,
Registan se jeewan mein bhi pyas se dar lagta hai,
Na jane kaun se bhesh mein phir koi sitamgar nikale,
Pyar ke kissi halke se aabhaas se dar lagta hai,
Ab toh tanha hi ye safar jeewan ka guzar de,
Kisi sathi ke bewafa ho jane ke andaz se dar lagta hai..
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