mere yaar ki doli

by jassi_deewana on August 27, 2004, 10:00:22 AM
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phoolon se woh saaji thi,
phoolon se main bhi saaja tha.
hum dono ke peecha ek husum (crowd) sa laga tha.
us ki bhi thi vidaai,vida mein bhi ho raha tha.
humare liye har insaan roo raha tha.
dard e dil liye har insaan ja raha tha,
woh duniya basane dil ki main samshan ja raha tha.

ajnabi baahon main woh machal rahi thi.
aur ider tanhaai main meri chita jal rahi thi.
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Tosha
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«Reply #1 on: August 27, 2004, 03:25:19 PM »
arz... hai

Mauth se larti rahi
lakin hai zinda aaj bhi
jaane kitna hausla tha
Zindgi haari nahi..|
Shocked
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Tosha
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«Reply #2 on: January 10, 2005, 03:34:45 AM »
bahut khoob jassi!!!
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Meena
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«Reply #3 on: January 10, 2005, 07:55:50 PM »
nice u both!!!!!!!

 :D
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Pooja
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«Reply #4 on: January 10, 2005, 08:20:31 PM »
Nice!!!
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Tosha
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«Reply #5 on: January 10, 2005, 09:04:26 PM »
tnx buddies
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #6 on: January 11, 2005, 06:49:05 AM »
Good by everyone. N good going Jassi.

Aap gerron ki baat karti hain..
Humne apne bhi aazmaiyein hain..
Aap kaanton se bachkar nikalte hain..
Humne phoolon se zakhm khaye hain... (nm)
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«Reply #7 on: January 11, 2005, 06:55:19 AM »
bohat khoob jassi,bohat hi accha likha hai.

nice JHL
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«Reply #8 on: January 11, 2005, 07:10:56 AM »
Thnx Nidhiji.

 SO CHA THA UNKI BAHOO ME DAM NIKLE ..
BEWAFA WO NAHI BADE NASEEB HUM NIKLEE ...
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«Reply #9 on: January 11, 2005, 07:19:39 AM »
Again very nice........
 
"Mohabbat ka nateeja hamne duniya me aisa dekha hai,
 Jinhe daawa thha wafa ka...unhe bewafa hote dekha hai."

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«Reply #10 on: January 11, 2005, 07:23:43 AM »
Wahhhh..... yours too is cool. Thnx once again.
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«Reply #11 on: January 11, 2005, 07:28:40 AM »
Thanx,u r welcome.
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«Reply #12 on: January 12, 2005, 07:55:36 AM »
Jo aansu dil me girte hai who aankho me nahi rehte
Bahut se harf aise hai jo lafzo me nahi rehte
Kitabon me likhe jate hai dunya bhar ke afsane
Magar jin me haqeeqat ho kitabon me nahi rehte.
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«Reply #13 on: January 12, 2005, 04:08:55 PM »
Nice JHL.Bohat acche.......

"Haqeeqat dil ki bayan kar paya hai kaun,
 kiska afsana samajh paya hai kaun......."
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«Reply #14 on: January 12, 2005, 04:25:39 PM »
wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh JHL and nidhi, esp ur last sher is super JHL ji!

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