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viraana hai yahan jahan kabhi mehfile sajti thi
haan kehte thay kii har shaam yahan ruk k gujarti thi
ab to yahan saaye bhi nazar nahin aate mujhko
mujhse log kehte hai kii yahan mere yaar kii basti thi
mujhe yakeen nahin hota yahan ka dekhkar manjar
lagta hai jaise ek tufaan sa aa ke gujar gaya
nahin baki tha khandharo ka bhi namo nishaan
jaise koi saari yaahon ko le k ho kho gaya
kohre mein dekhta raha main har taraf
talaasha maine yaar mere har taraf
na nazar aaya tu na nazar aana tha tujhko
jaise saanson kii garmi se pighal gayi ho baraf
achanak thokar lagi to maine jhuk k dekha
teri tasveer thi woh surkh jode main
lat aa kar maathe par thehar jaati thi
kitni haseen dikhti thi oos jode main
phir main bad gaya lekar teri yaad apne dil main
teri woh bholi surat tera pyaar apne dil main
haan main sach kehta tha kii tu pariyon si dikhti thi
haan yeh bhi sach tha kii tu mohabbat bhi karti thi
hamara mukaddar hi daga de gaya humein e-dost
main to thehra hi raha jahan mere yaar kii basti thi
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«Reply #1 on: January 12, 2009, 05:49:54 AM » |
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Too Good.. Salil Ji..  You have nicely binded your emotions with great thoughts... |
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«Reply #2 on: January 12, 2009, 05:54:14 AM » |
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 Bahut Khoob Salil, 2Good freind, wht a come back, Shally.
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«Reply #3 on: January 12, 2009, 06:03:49 AM » |
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viraana hai yahan jahan kabhi mehfile sajti thi
haan kehte thay kii har shaam yahan ruk k gujarti thi
ab to yahan saaye bhi nazar nahin aate mujhko
mujhse log kehte hai kii yahan mere yaar kii basti thi
mujhe yakeen nahin hota yahan ka dekhkar manjar
lagta hai jaise ek tufaan sa aa ke gujar gaya
nahin baki tha khandharo ka bhi namo nishaan
jaise koi saari yaahon ko le k ho kho gaya
kohre mein dekhta raha main har taraf
talaasha maine yaar mere har taraf
na nazar aaya tu na nazar aana tha tujhko
jaise saanson kii garmi se pighal gayi ho baraf
achanak thokar lagi to maine jhuk k dekha
teri tasveer thi woh surkh jode main
lat aa kar maathe par thehar jaati thi
kitni haseen dikhti thi oos jode main
phir main bad gaya lekar teri yaad apne dil main
teri woh bholi surat tera pyaar apne dil main
haan main sach kehta tha kii tu pariyon si dikhti thi
haan yeh bhi sach tha kii tu mohabbat bhi karti thi
hamara mukaddar hi daga de gaya humein e-dost
main to thehra hi raha jahan mere yaar kii basti thi
Wah Wah Jawab Nahi IS andaze bayan kya salil bhai !! ab kya tarif karen is kalam ki alfaz hi nahi hai !! ye la jawab hai mere bhai !! Qadeer toopchi |
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salil2002
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«Reply #4 on: January 12, 2009, 06:04:51 AM » |
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Too Good.. Salil Ji.. You have nicely binded your emotions with great thoughts... thnks mahiya jo aa ke gujar gaya main woh tufaan dhoondta hoon
har jarre main tera nishaan main dhoondta hoon
main khamosh hoon tu mujhe galat mat samajhna
main apni khamoshi main teri awaaz dhoonta hoon |
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salil2002
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«Reply #5 on: January 12, 2009, 06:09:54 AM » |
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Bahut Khoob Salil, 2Good freind, wht a come back, Shally. thanks shally dear hows uncle now..............
woh laut aaye meri taraf main yeh nahin chahta
main oose toote huye dekhna nahin chahta
oose bata kyun nahin dete kii main fana ho chuka hoon
woh mit haaye meri yaad main yeh main nahin chahta |
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salil2002
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«Reply #6 on: January 12, 2009, 06:13:11 AM » |
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Wah Wah Jawab Nahi IS andaze bayan kya salil bhai !! ab kya tarif karen is kalam ki alfaz hi nahi hai !! ye la jawab hai mere bhai !!
Qadeer toopchi
thanka bhai jaan
koi muskura oothta hai dekh kar dard mera
toh main khafa nahin hota yaaron
mujhe yakeen hai kii dil uska bhi toota hoga
lekin yeh toh dard chhupaane kii ada hai yaaron |
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«Reply #7 on: January 12, 2009, 06:20:03 AM » |
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thanks shally dear hows uncle now..............
woh laut aaye meri taraf main yeh nahin chahta
main oose toote huye dekhna nahin chahta
oose bata kyun nahin dete kii main fana ho chuka hoon
woh mit haaye meri yaad main yeh main nahin chahta
Ur welcome Freind, & Papa is now fine... Shally. |
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salil2002
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«Reply #9 on: January 12, 2009, 06:33:20 AM » |
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«Reply #10 on: January 12, 2009, 06:43:21 AM » |
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kaise ho sis ............thanks for sharing a nice one
bharte hai zakhm nasoor ka ilaaz nahin hota
is duniya main har har chehra benaqaab nahin hota
dil main kuch chehre par kucch dekhlaate hain
gale lag kar peeth main khanjar ghonp jaate hain
Shukriya salil bro zindagi chal rahi hai...
Zakhm dene wale muskura kar chale gaye
Mere aarmano ka qatl karke chale gaye
Mat poocho ke kitna tadpe hai inn dino
Woh mere dil mein zakhmon ke nishaan chod gaye
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«Reply #11 on: January 12, 2009, 06:55:20 AM » |
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Shukriya salil bro zindagi chal rahi hai...
Zakhm dene wale muskura kar chale gaye
Mere aarmano ka qatl karke chale gaye
Mat poocho ke kitna tadpe hai inn dino
Woh mere dil mein zakhmon ke nishaan chod gaye
______________HR________ kya baat hai di
log kehte hai kii yahan kabra hai kissii aashiq kii
aur wahi log oose raund kar chalte hain |
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«Reply #12 on: January 12, 2009, 07:00:54 AM » |
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kya baat hai di
log kehte hai kii yahan kabra hai kissii aashiq kii
aur wahi log oose raund kar chalte hain
Wah wah bro dear.. 
Mere shaadi pe doli sajane woh aaye the
Mere janaze tak toh phool barsana to aa jaate...
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«Reply #13 on: January 12, 2009, 07:23:29 AM » |
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Wah wah bro dear..
Mere shaadi pe doli sajane woh aaye the
Mere janaze tak toh phool barsana to aa jaate...
__________HR_______- saza kar teri doli hum na laute kabhi log kehte hai kii mitti oothi thi meri |
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«Reply #14 on: January 12, 2009, 07:33:07 AM » |
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saza kar teri doli hum na laute kabhi
log kehte hai kii motti oothi thi meri
Humne bhi chahat mein loota diya saara jahan
Aapne armano ko dafna kar ban gaye be-jaan.. |
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