MERI AAKHON SE BEHTAA RAHAA.... SOUDAGAR

by soudagar on April 12, 2013, 04:18:24 PM
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mujhe uski hee talash rahi jo umar bhar mere dil mein rahta rahaa
hontho ko uski hee pyaas rahee jo meri aakhon se behtaa rahaa

sun-na chahta rhaa jisse main mohabbat bhare kuch meethe alfaaz
wo labon ko seel kar bas najron se hee kuch na kuch kehtaa rahaa

berukhi se mehfil chhod jaata meri gazal mein uska naam aane par
phir bhi  naadan dil mohabbat par uske naam ki gazal kehta rahaa

beqasoor hote huye bhee har ilzaam par hamara naam likh diyaa usne
main uske diye har ilzam ko mohabbat ka pyara inaam kehtaa rahaa

wo pathar dil bhi pighlega, uske dil mein bhi mohabbat hogi mere liye
meri banegi wo ek din isi ummeed par uske har sitam ko sehtaa rahaa
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Shireen Hakani
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«Reply #1 on: April 12, 2013, 05:15:40 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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F.H.SIDDIQUI
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«Reply #2 on: April 12, 2013, 05:21:33 PM »
khubsurat kalaam , soudagar ji.
bahut  mubarakbad  aur  daad.
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«Reply #3 on: April 12, 2013, 06:30:40 PM »
Quote from: soudagar on April 12, 2013, 04:18:24 PM
mujhe uski hee talash rahi jo umar bhar mere dil mein rahta rahaa
hontho ko uski hee pyaas rahee jo meri aakhon se behtaa rahaa

sun-na chahta rhaa jisse main mohabbat bhare kuch meethe alfaaz
wo labon ko seel kar bas najron se hee kuch na kuch kehtaa rahaa

berukhi se mehfil chhod jaata meri gazal mein uska naam aane par
phir bhi  naadan dil mohabbat par uske naam ki gazal kehta rahaa

beqasoor hote huye bhee har ilzaam par hamara naam likh diyaa usne
main uske diye har ilzam ko mohabbat ka pyara inaam kehtaa rahaa

wo pathar dil bhi pighlega, uske dil mein bhi mohabbat hogi mere liye
meri banegi wo ek din isi ummeed par uske har sitam ko sehtaa rahaa
waah waah bhoot khoob likha hai
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«Reply #4 on: April 12, 2013, 07:07:52 PM »
sun-na chahta rhaa jisse main mohabbat bhare kuch meethe alfaaz
wo labon ko seel kar bas najron se hee kuch na kuch kehtaa rahaa

berukhi se mehfil chhod jaata meri gazal mein uska naam aane par
phir bhi  naadan dil mohabbat par uske naam ki gazal kehta rahaa

Bahut khoob Saudagar jee
aahista aahista ..dil pe asar karte hai aapke shabda..
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«Reply #5 on: April 12, 2013, 08:06:06 PM »
boht khub kaha saudagar ji
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«Reply #6 on: April 12, 2013, 09:41:01 PM »
Quote from: soudagar on April 12, 2013, 04:18:24 PM
mujhe uski hee talash rahi jo umar bhar mere dil mein rahta rahaa
hontho ko uski hee pyaas rahee jo meri aakhon se behtaa rahaa

sun-na chahta rhaa jisse main mohabbat bhare kuch meethe alfaaz
wo labon ko seel kar bas najron se hee kuch na kuch kehtaa rahaa

berukhi se mehfil chhod jaata meri gazal mein uska naam aane par
phir bhi  naadan dil mohabbat par uske naam ki gazal kehta rahaa

beqasoor hote huye bhee har ilzaam par hamara naam likh diyaa usne
main uske diye har ilzam ko mohabbat ka pyara inaam kehtaa rahaa

wo pathar dil bhi pighlega, uske dil mein bhi mohabbat hogi mere liye
meri banegi wo ek din isi ummeed par uske har sitam ko sehtaa rahaa


bahut khoobsoorat ashaar se saja ye kalaam bahut pasand aayaa. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: April 12, 2013, 11:45:01 PM »
waah..very nice...
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«Reply #8 on: April 13, 2013, 02:19:28 AM »
nice.............
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«Reply #9 on: April 13, 2013, 04:46:47 AM »
waah khubsurat ihsas ,........bohat c daad,..........
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«Reply #10 on: April 14, 2013, 12:02:05 PM »
shukriya shireen ji
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«Reply #11 on: April 14, 2013, 04:45:44 PM »
shukriya hasan sir
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«Reply #12 on: April 15, 2013, 09:35:23 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #13 on: May 30, 2013, 11:13:12 AM »
shukriya mukesh ji
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«Reply #14 on: June 01, 2013, 07:03:11 PM »
shukriya AB bhai
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