!!!...meri aankhon mein...!!!

by Just_Hate_Love on January 04, 2010, 12:28:49 PM
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...meri aankhon mein ek sapna roya tha,
par woh sapna na jaane kiska tha,
mere naseeb mein yeh aansu aane hi the,
shayad yeh unki mohabbat ka hissa tha,
samet liya hota agar usne bhigoya daaman apna,
ki un aansuo mein sunaya humne apna kissa tha...
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«Reply #1 on: January 04, 2010, 01:00:34 PM »
Waah Kya baat hai. Chand lino mea Pura Kissa bayaan kar diya... Bahoot Khoob JHL ji ( still dont knows ur real name )
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«Reply #2 on: January 04, 2010, 01:08:43 PM »
very nicley presented good 1
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«Reply #3 on: January 04, 2010, 01:21:53 PM »
Good creation
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«Reply #4 on: January 04, 2010, 01:29:18 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:waah ji waah
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«Reply #5 on: January 04, 2010, 01:45:38 PM »
KYA BAAT HAI   JUST_ HATE_ LOVE  JI....

MERI AANKHON MEIN MERE HI SAPNO NE MUJHKO RULAYA
PAR YEH DARD USKO SAMAJHME NAHIN AAYA
ROKAR SUNAYA  JO MAENE USKA KISSA THA
SAMAJH NA PAYE USIKE PYAAR KA TOH HISSA THA.
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«Reply #6 on: January 04, 2010, 02:07:29 PM »
Quote from: Just_Hate_Love on January 04, 2010, 12:28:49 PM
...meri aankhon mein ek sapna roya tha,
par woh sapna na jaane kiska tha,
mere naseeb mein yeh aansu aane hi the,
shayad yeh unki mohabbat ka hissa tha,
samet liya hota agar usne bhigoya daaman apna,
ki un aansuo mein sunaya humne apna kissa tha...

Wah wah wah bohat khooob bohat dard hai aap ke kisse me...very nice.. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: January 04, 2010, 02:09:40 PM »
Quote from: cara on January 04, 2010, 01:45:38 PM
KYA BAAT HAI   JUST_ HATE_ LOVE  JI....

MERI AANKHON MEIN MERE HI SAPNO NE MUJHKO RULAYA
PAR YEH DARD USKO SAMAJHME NAHIN AAYA
ROKAR SUNAYA  JO MAENE USKO KISSA THA
SAMAJH NA PAYE USIKE PYAAR KA TOH HISSA THA.



Bohat umda likha hai aap ne bhi bohat khoooob Applause Applause Applause Applause
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poppoetry
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«Reply #8 on: January 04, 2010, 05:13:31 PM »
bahut accha kha JHL ji.......

Aansuo ko tere paani samjha hoga usne
Aankhon ko teri kabhi na padha hoga usne
Ek bund ashq bhi tera na girne dete jameen par wo
Jo dil se dil ka rishta joda hota usne
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khushi4pari
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«Reply #9 on: January 04, 2010, 09:35:34 PM »
Very nice nikhar ji bohat ache Applause Applause Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #10 on: January 05, 2010, 04:08:44 AM »
Quote from: Just_Hate_Love on January 04, 2010, 12:28:49 PM
...meri aankhon mein ek sapna roya tha,
par woh sapna na jaane kiska tha,
mere naseeb mein yeh aansu aane hi the,
shayad yeh unki mohabbat ka hissa tha,
samet liya hota agar usne bhigoya daaman apna,
ki un aansuo mein sunaya humne apna kissa tha...

Good one JHL Ji
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #11 on: January 05, 2010, 08:45:26 AM »
Quote from: Sophi on January 04, 2010, 01:00:34 PM
Waah Kya baat hai. Chand lino mea Pura Kissa bayaan kar diya... Bahoot Khoob JHL ji ( still dont knows ur real name )

...thanks a lot Sophi for the appreciation...ma real name is Zainulabedin...
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #12 on: January 05, 2010, 08:47:25 AM »
...thanks a lot Anjaan, Riyaz, Khamosh Aawaz, Cara, Pari, Nikhaar n Rajesh for appreciating ma post...m glad that u guys like it...
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #13 on: January 05, 2010, 08:53:17 AM »
...n very nice Cara n Nikhaar...loved to see u guys...
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #14 on: January 05, 2010, 09:04:44 AM »
Very touching and lovely creation JHL ji.bahut bahut khoob,great lines by Cara ji n Nikhaar ji. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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