MERI ANKHOHN SE ANSOO [Asghr]

by Asghr on February 16, 2009, 04:15:12 PM
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MERI ANKHOON SE GHR ANSOO BARSTE HAIN BARSNE DAU
TUMAIN KYA AGHR YEH MILNE KO TARSTE HAIN TARSNE DAU
MERE DIL SE TUMAIN BHAIR KYON HAI YEH TAU BATLA DAU
BLAA SE MERE ZAKHAM RISTE HAIN  RISNE DAU
ILAAJ-E-ZAKHAM-E-DIL TUM KO HEE KARNA HAI CHALE AAHO
SITUM K TEER AGHR HUM PAR BARSTE HAIN  BARSNE DAU
HAMARE HOSLAY DEKHO ASEERI MAIN B HANSTE HAIN
BICHAAO JAAL TUM APNE JO HUM PHANSTE HAIN PHANSNE DAU
WAFA SHAIVA HAMAR HAI WAFA HUM KARTE REHTE HAIN
HAMARE HAL PAR LAUG GHR HANSTE HAIN HANSNE DAU
MOHABAT KI AADALAT MAIN HAMARI PAISHI KYA HO GI
HAMARE NAAM K PARCHE GHR KAT-TE HAIN KATNE DAU
TUM KO HEE CHAA HAI SIRF TUM KO HEE CHAAYAIN GAI
JO LAUG HAMARI MOHABAT SE JALTE HAIN JALNE DAU
TERI FURQAT NE DIVANA BANA DALA HAI ASGHR KO
YEH DIN NAAG BAN KAR DASTE HAIN DASNE DAU
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: February 16, 2009, 09:13:11 PM »
Bohot Khoob Asghr Ji  Applause Applause Applause
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: February 16, 2009, 09:32:27 PM »
Quote from: Asghr on February 16, 2009, 04:15:12 PM
MERI ANKHOON SE GHR ANSOO BARSTE HAIN BARSNE DAU
TUMAIN KYA AGHR YEH MILNE KO TARSTE HAIN TARSNE DAU
MERE DIL SE TUMAIN BHAIR KYON HAI YEH TAU BATLA DAU
BLAA SE MERE ZAKHAM RISTE HAIN  RISNE DAU
ILAAJ-E-ZAKHAM-E-DIL TUM KO HEE KARNA HAI CHALE AAHO
SITUM K TEER AGHR HUM PAR BARSTE HAIN  BARSNE DAU
HAMARE HOSLAY DEKHO ASEERI MAIN B HANSTE HAIN
BICHAAO JAAL TUM APNE JO HUM PHANSTE HAIN PHANSNE DAU
WAFA SHAIVA HAMAR HAI WAFA HUM KARTE REHTE HAIN
HAMARE HAL PAR LAUG GHR HANSTE HAIN HANSNE DAU
MOHABAT KI AADALAT MAIN HAMARI PAISHI KYA HO GI
HAMARE NAAM K PARCHE GHR KAT-TE HAIN KATNE DAU
TUM KO HEE CHAA HAI SIRF TUM KO HEE CHAAYAIN GAI
JO LAUG HAMARI MOHABAT SE JALTE HAIN JALNE DAU
TERI FURQAT NE DIVANA BANA DALA HAI ASGHR KO
YEH DIN NAAG BAN KAR DASTE HAIN DASNE DAU

Asghr Ji,

Aap ke ek ek sher ka jawab dene ki koshish ki hai, pata nahin kahan tak kaamyaabi mili hai !!



Aankhon main bhala unki aansoo kaise dekhe.n hum
Tadap unki, tadap apni, tadapta kaise dekhe.n hum

Tumhara dil, humara dil, tumhara zakhm, humara zakhm,
Takleef dil pe hoti hai, rista kaise dekhe.n hum

Har sitam hum unka khud apne dil pe kha lenge,
Teer-o-nashtar chalte hain, chalta kaise dekhe.n hum

Ye dil tera, ye hum tere, aseeri main hai jaane kaun,
Tum hi ab tanz karte ho, karta kaise dekhe.n hum

Wafa teri, wafa meri, na is main khot hai koi,
Zamana hum pe hansta hai, hansta kaise dekhe.n hum

Mohabbat ne rulaaya hai, teri aankhon main aansoo hai
Tumhi to meri hasti ho, sisakta kaise dekhe.n hum

Mohabbat pe tumhaari naaz hum ko hai, magar Jaana.n
Tumhara dil behakta hai , behakta kaise dekhe.n hum

Meri ulfat ne kar daala jo deewaano sa ab tujh ko,
Darr darr tu bhatakta hai, bhatakta kaise dekhe.n hum !!
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Asghr
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«Reply #3 on: February 16, 2009, 09:55:23 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on February 16, 2009, 09:32:27 PM
Asghr Ji,

Aap ke ek ek sher ka jawab dene ki koshish ki hai, pata nahin kahan tak kaamyaabi mili hai !!



Aankhon main bhala unki aansoo kaise dekhe.n hum
Tadap unki, tadap apni, tadapta kaise dekhe.n hum

Tumhara dil, humara dil, tumhara zakhm, humara zakhm,
Takleef dil pe hoti hai, rista kaise dekhe.n hum

Har sitam hum unka khud apne dil pe kha lenge,
Teer-o-nashtar chalte hain, chalta kaise dekhe.n hum

Ye dil tera, ye hum tere, aseeri main hai jaane kaun,
Tum hi ab tanz karte ho, karta kaise dekhe.n hum

Wafa teri, wafa meri, na is main khot hai koi,
Zamana hum pe hansta hai, hansta kaise dekhe.n hum

Mohabbat ne rulaaya hai, teri aankhon main aansoo hai
Tumhi to meri hasti ho, sisakta kaise dekhe.n hum

Mohabbat pe tumhaari naaz hum ko hai, magar Jaana.n
Tumhara dil behaktahai , behakta kaise dekhe.n hum

Meri ulfat ne kar daala jo deewaano sa ab tum ko,
Darr darr tu bhatakta hai, bhatakta kaise dekhe.n hum !!
CELMIRA JI AAP NE JO KUCH LIKHA MAIN NE BAR BAR PADA HAR BAAR PEHLE SE KHOOBSOORAT LAGTA THA KHUDA KARE AAP ISSI TARAH K GULDASTE BANATI REHAIN AUR KHUSHBOO BKHAIRTI REHAIN.ASGHR
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Asghr
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«Reply #4 on: February 16, 2009, 10:01:04 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on February 16, 2009, 09:32:27 PM
Asghr Ji,

Aap ke ek ek sher ka jawab dene ki koshish ki hai, pata nahin kahan tak kaamyaabi mili hai !!



Aankhon main bhala unki aansoo kaise dekhe.n hum
Tadap unki, tadap apni, tadapta kaise dekhe.n hum

Tumhara dil, humara dil, tumhara zakhm, humara zakhm,
Takleef dil pe hoti hai, rista kaise dekhe.n hum

Har sitam hum unka khud apne dil pe kha lenge,
Teer-o-nashtar chalte hain, chalta kaise dekhe.n hum

Ye dil tera, ye hum tere, aseeri main hai jaane kaun,
Tum hi ab tanz karte ho, karta kaise dekhe.n hum

Wafa teri, wafa meri, na is main khot hai koi,
Zamana hum pe hansta hai, hansta kaise dekhe.n hum

Mohabbat ne rulaaya hai, teri aankhon main aansoo hai
Tumhi to meri hasti ho, sisakta kaise dekhe.n hum

Mohabbat pe tumhaari naaz hum ko hai, magar Jaana.n
Tumhara dil behakta hai , behakta kaise dekhe.n hum

Meri ulfat ne kar daala jo deewaano sa ab tujh ko,
Darr darr tu bhatakta hai, bhatakta kaise dekhe.n hum !!
KAMYABI KYA CELMIRA JI MAIN HAR GYA AAP JEET GAI YEH MAIN AAP KO KHUSH KARNE LIYE NAHIKEH RAH DAIKHNA JO KOI ISSE PADE GA WO AAP KO VOTE DE GA.ASGHR
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Asghr
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«Reply #5 on: February 17, 2009, 08:03:36 PM »
Quote from: Asghr on February 16, 2009, 04:15:12 PM
MERI ANKHOON SE GHR ANSOO BARSTE HAIN BARSNE DAU
TUMAIN KYA AGHR YEH MILNE KO TARSTE HAIN TARSNE DAU
MERE DIL SE TUMAIN BHAIR KYON HAI YEH TAU BATLA DAU
BLAA SE MERE ZAKHAM RISTE HAIN  RISNE DAU
ILAAJ-E-ZAKHAM-E-DIL TUM KO HEE KARNA HAI CHALE AAHO
SITUM K TEER AGHR HUM PAR BARSTE HAIN  BARSNE DAU
HAMARE HOSLAY DEKHO ASEERI MAIN B HANSTE HAIN
BICHAAO JAAL TUM APNE JO HUM PHANSTE HAIN PHANSNE DAU
WAFA SHAIVA HAMAR HAI WAFA HUM KARTE REHTE HAIN
HAMARE HAL PAR LAUG GHR HANSTE HAIN HANSNE DAU
MOHABAT KI AADALAT MAIN HAMARI PAISHI KYA HO GI
HAMARE NAAM K PARCHE GHR KAT-TE HAIN KATNE DAU
TUM KO HEE CHAA HAI SIRF TUM KO HEE CHAAYAIN GAI
JO LAUG HAMARI MOHABAT SE JALTE HAIN JALNE DAU
TERI FURQAT NE DIVANA BANA DALA HAI ASGHR KO
YEH DIN NAAG BAN KAR DASTE HAIN DASNE DAU
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: February 17, 2009, 08:07:15 PM »
Asghr ji,,, jab apki yah kavita padni shuru ki to pahli 6 lines ke baad mujhse parra nahi gaya...ab phir se himmat ki hai parrne ki ... bahoot dard hai... aor kaya likhu shabd nahi hai mere pass


Celmira bahoot acha likha hai apne...bahoot ache se sath diya hai Asghr ji ki kavita ka... Good work
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Asghr
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«Reply #7 on: February 17, 2009, 08:17:51 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on February 17, 2009, 08:07:15 PM
Asghr ji,,, jab apki yah kavita padni shuru ki to pahli 6 lines ke baad mujhse parra nahi gaya...ab phir se himmat ki hai parrne ki ... bahoot dard hai... aor kaya likhu shabd nahi hai mere pass


Celmira bahoot acha likha hai apne...bahoot ache se sath diya hai Asghr ji ki kavita ka... Good work
KISI KI YAAD MAIN KHO KAR JANAAB LIKHTA HOOHN
       MAIN NAHIN JANTA ACHA YA KHRAB LIKHTA HOOHN
SHKRIYA POOJA JI,AUR CELMIRA NE JO LIKHA ITS OUT OTHIS WORLD.ASGHR
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Talat
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«Reply #8 on: February 17, 2009, 08:54:33 PM »
Bohot bohot shukriya Asghr Ji...aapne is qadar izzat di....itna pasand kiya....magar aap ki shayari behtareen hai...bas yunhi likha karen yahan.......

Thanks a lot Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: February 18, 2009, 03:37:17 PM »
Waah Ashgr Bhaiya Kya Khoob Likha Hia, Ek Ek Line Kamaal Ki Hai,.

Aur Shayad ye Maine Pehli Baad Itni Lines waala Aapka poem Parda Hai,.

Nice One Bhai,.

Aur Talat Behna Aapka Bhi Jawaab Nahi, Har Line Mashallah Bohat Achchi Hai,.
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salma786
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«Reply #10 on: February 18, 2009, 04:03:45 PM »
Very nice asghr ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: February 18, 2009, 04:07:19 PM »
Apne bhi bahoot hi acha likha hai Talat sis Usual Smile
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: February 18, 2009, 07:11:27 PM »
JAANASHEEN BHAI KHUDA AAP KO KHUSH RAKHAY JO HOSLA AFZAKAR DAITE HAIN.ASGHR
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«Reply #13 on: February 18, 2009, 07:13:15 PM »
SALMA JI SDAA KHUSH REHAIN JO MUJH JAISE INSAN KI HOSLA AFZAI KAR DAITE HAIN.ASGHR
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