meri chaukhat se utha tha ,sikandar ho gaya......rehan mubarak "tanhaa"

by haan on December 19, 2012, 04:41:34 PM
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dilo'n   me   qatre   ka   khauf ,  ghar   ho   gaya !
qatra   mila   samandar    se  ,  samandar  ho  gaya  !!


abb  wahi  de  raha  hai  khairaat,  mere  daman  ko !
meri  chaukhat  se   utha  tha ,  sikandar  ho  gaya !!


bada   naram   o   nazuk  tha  , moom   sa   ye   dil !
ye   kis  ki  nazar  lagi    ,ke   patthar   ho  gaya !!


ye    dard   ka  sarmaya   hi   ,hai   nemat  tumhari !
ye  dil   bhi   wahshato'n    ka,   ghar   ho    gaya !!


patthar   hi   achchha   tha ,  kayu'n  chhuaa  tumne !
bik    gaya   sar  e  bazar  , jo   zewar   ho   gaya !!


REHAN    MUBARAK    "TANHAA
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«Reply #1 on: December 19, 2012, 04:49:57 PM »
Bahut khoob Rehan jee
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«Reply #2 on: December 19, 2012, 05:06:52 PM »
dilo'n  me  qatre  ka  khauf  ghar  ho  gaya !
qatra  mila  samandar  se  samandar  ho  gaya  !!


abb  wahi  de  raha  hai khairaat  mere  daman  ko !
meri  chaukhat  se  utha  tha  sikandar  ho  gaya !!


bada  naram  o  nazuk  tha  moom  sa  ye  dil !
kis  ki  nazar  lagi  ke  patthar  ho  gaya !!


ye  dard  ka  sarmaya  hai  nemat  tumhari !
ye  dil  wahshato'n  ka  ghar  ho  gaya !!


patthar  hi  achchha  tha  kayu'n  chhuaa  tumne !
bik  gaya  sar  e  bazar  jo  zewar  ho  gaya !!


REHAN MUBARAK "TANHAA                                                                 
janaab  iss  kalaam  ki   islah  karne  ki  mehar baani  karen.....rehan  mubarak  tanhaa
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«Reply #3 on: December 19, 2012, 07:13:58 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob!!!

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«Reply #4 on: December 20, 2012, 03:37:14 AM »
well done
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«Reply #5 on: December 20, 2012, 03:41:48 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut khooob, bahut bahut sundar peshkas.. bahut khoob likha hai aapne Rehan ji....!!!
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«Reply #6 on: December 20, 2012, 04:01:41 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: December 20, 2012, 05:30:26 AM »
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kya baat hai rehan jee
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«Reply #8 on: December 20, 2012, 06:21:44 AM »
Quote from: haan on December 19, 2012, 04:41:34 PM
dilo'n   me   qatre   ka   khauf ,  ghar   ho   gaya !
qatra   mila   samandar    se  ,  samandar  ho  gaya  !!


abb  wahi  de  raha  hai  khairaat,  mere  daman  ko !
meri  chaukhat  se   utha  tha ,  sikandar  ho  gaya !!


bada   naram   o   nazuk  tha  , moom   sa   ye   dil !
ye   kis  ki  nazar  lagi    ,ke   patthar   ho  gaya !!


ye    dard   ka  sarmaya   hi   ,hai   nemat  tumhari !
ye  dil   bhi   wahshato'n    ka,   ghar   ho    gaya !!


patthar   hi   achchha   tha ,  kayu'n  chhuaa  tumne !
bik    gaya   sar  e  bazar  , jo   zewar   ho   gaya !!


REHAN    MUBARAK    "TANHAA

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with due respect accept one rau
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«Reply #9 on: December 20, 2012, 08:30:52 AM »
very nice
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«Reply #10 on: December 20, 2012, 09:50:57 AM »
Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on December 20, 2012, 06:21:44 AM
gr88888888888888888888888888,sir.

with due respect accept one rau
SHUKRIYA  IZZAT  AFZAI KA JANAB MARHOOM BA HAYAAT JI
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«Reply #11 on: December 20, 2012, 10:38:26 AM »
kia khoob bohat c daad ,.........
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«Reply #12 on: December 21, 2012, 03:36:25 PM »
THANXXXXXXXXX   LAAIBA JI
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