Meri Ghazlen Itni Bhi Qaabil Nahin (Shihab)

by majid on April 15, 2011, 08:57:20 PM
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                      Jiske  Bina ,  Mera  Ek  Pal  Bhi  Kaamil Nahin
                      Ussi  Ki  Zindagi  Mein  ,  Main  Dakhil Nahin.


                      Kuch Waqt Khel Ke , Bas Chhorh Deta Hai Wo
                      Apni  Zarurat Se Zyaada , Karta Shamil Nahin


                      Jab Bhi Puchhta Hoon Na Milne Ka Sabab, To
                      Bade  Pyaar Se Kehta Hai , Aajkal Tatil Nahin.
                      

                      Ab Karun Bhi To Aakhir  Kya Gila Main Ussey
                      Bas Mujhe Hi Dil Jitne Ka Hunar ,Hasil Nahin.


                      Kash Wo Kabhi Gungunata Akele Mein Mujhe
                      Shihab , Meri Ghazalein Itni Bhi Qaabil Nahin.


  
          
                                             ~Shihab~
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«Reply #1 on: April 15, 2011, 10:32:37 PM »
Shihab bhaijan,
Oiii hoye..
Dil dil ki gehrayion se daad iss shandaar nazm kay liye..
Akhri line sach nahin hai mere bhai..Apki ghazlein, kitni
kabil hai yeh hum parrne walon se puchon..
Aur iss kalam kay har ashaar par wah wahi kar raha tha main..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #2 on: April 16, 2011, 03:01:27 AM »
                       Jiske  Bina ,  Mera  Ek  Pal  Bhi  Kaamil Nahin
                      Ussi  Ki  Zindagi  Mein  ,  Main  Dakhil Nahin.


                      Kuch Waqt Khel Ke , Bas Chhorh Deta Hai Wo
                      Apni  Jarurat Se Jyaada ,  Karta Shamil Nahin


                      Jab Bhi Puchhta Hoon Na Milne Ka Sabab, To
                      Bade  Pyaar Se Kehta Hai , Aajkal Tatil Nahin.
                     

                      Ab Karun Bhi To Aakhir  Kya Gila Main Ussey
                      Bas Mujhe Hi Dil Jitne Ka Hunar ,Hasil Nahin.


                      Kash Wo Kabhi Gungunata Akele Mein Mujhe
                      Shihab , Meri Ghazalein Itni Bhi Kaabil Nahin.


   
           
                                             ~Shihab~


Har Sher Qaabile Taareef Likha Hai Aapne ... Shihab Ji ! Main Rahim Sahab Ki Baat Se Puri Tarha Sehamat Hoon ... Aapki Ghazal Humeshaa Itnee Khoobsurat hoti hai ... Next kaa intezaar hardam banaa rehta hai ... yeh ghazal bhi usse achhutii nahi hai ... ek ek ashaar zabardast likha hai ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ..qubuul farmaayeN ... yuhi likhte rahen aage bhi .. khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #3 on: April 16, 2011, 04:45:01 AM »
wah wah shihabji.... bahut bahut khub... dil tk...

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«Reply #4 on: April 16, 2011, 07:09:43 AM »
kya baat kya baat………
……
                  tu hi to hai har duaon me shamil, shihab
                 usey jara bhi, ye ilm hasil nahi
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daad dil se daad
khus rahiye
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«Reply #5 on: April 16, 2011, 07:34:28 AM »
                       Jiske  Bina ,  Mera  Ek  Pal  Bhi  Kaamil Nahin
                      Ussi  Ki  Zindagi  Mein  ,  Main  Dakhil Nahin.


                      Kuch Waqt Khel Ke , Bas Chhorh Deta Hai Wo
                      Apni  Jarurat Se Jyaada ,  Karta Shamil Nahin


                      Jab Bhi Puchhta Hoon Na Milne Ka Sabab, To
                      Bade  Pyaar Se Kehta Hai , Aajkal Tatil Nahin.
                     

                      Ab Karun Bhi To Aakhir  Kya Gila Main Ussey
                      Bas Mujhe Hi Dil Jitne Ka Hunar ,Hasil Nahin.


                      Kash Wo Kabhi Gungunata Akele Mein Mujhe
                      Shihab , Meri Ghazalein Itni Bhi Kaabil Nahin.


   
           
                                             ~Shihab~


bahut khoob shihab sahab , zarurat aur zyada hota hai 'j' ki z likhein shayed ghalti se j likh diya hoga.
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«Reply #6 on: April 16, 2011, 11:37:49 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khooob Majid Bhai..

Humesha Ki tarah Lajawaab peshkash!!!

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«Reply #7 on: April 16, 2011, 12:29:10 PM »
Bahut umda shihab ji..
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«Reply #8 on: April 16, 2011, 12:30:43 PM »
bht hi umda peshkash shihab ji....
sply 2nd one...
tatil ka meaning batayiyega...
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«Reply #9 on: April 16, 2011, 06:08:20 PM »
wow…
its nice
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«Reply #10 on: April 16, 2011, 06:34:45 PM »
aap acha likhte hain…
aur mai achi nagmo ki talash me hi aata hu…
likte rahiye…
thanx
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«Reply #11 on: April 17, 2011, 08:05:49 AM »
Bahut Khub Shihab Bhai
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«Reply #12 on: April 17, 2011, 02:22:59 PM »
shihab ji daad kubool kijiye
bahut khoobsurat ghazal hai.
dil khush hua padhkar.
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«Reply #13 on: April 17, 2011, 02:39:02 PM »
Phir Bhi Bhai Ek Shaksh Har Kisi Ki Zindagi Mein Aisa Hota Hai
Jisse Aapko Sabse Jyaada Umeeden Hoti Hain...Uski Har Nazar Aapke
Liye Kuch Khash Hoti Hai...Aur Phir Jab Wohi Qadar Na Kare To
Bura To Lagta Hi Hai Na? Khair...
~Shihab~
Bahaut bahaut sahi kaha mere bhai..
Woh ek shaks jis'se umeedein hoti hai aur wohi
ek shaks jo saath nahin deta..
Dekh aur mehsoos kiya hai maine uss ek shaks ko bhi..

Jab ati hai mausam main tabdili,
Kisi ek shaks ka badal jana yaad ata hai..
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«Reply #14 on: April 17, 2011, 06:07:37 PM »
SHIHAB.....LATE AANA HUA TUMHARI POST PAR AUR SAHI ME AFSOS HUA K ITNA LATE KYUN HO GAI MAIN....
KYA MASTAM LIKHA HAI TUMNE...DIL ME JAISE KAI SAWAAL FIR KHADE HO GAYE.....KUCH LIKHNE KO TADAP GAYA DIL......
EXCELLENT CREATION BHAI...YUNHI LIKHTE RAHO...HAMESHA KHUSH RAHO...
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