Meri har khushi ki kaaran thi tum

by klaskar on March 22, 2010, 10:10:41 PM
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khwaab me aati thi mere,kehne bas itni si baat,
ab nahi hoon main tumhaari,maan lo bas tum ye baat,
socha karta tum ho jhooti, khwaab lagte the jhoot,
aankh jab khuli meri, jab khwaab wo gaya tha toot,
tumhaari is khwaab pe muskuraaye the hum,
q ki meri har khushi ki kaaran thi tum...

roz apne sapno ka mahal khada karte the hum,
apne paon se kuchalke chal deti thi tum,
main tumhaari jeet ko apni jeet samajhta,
aur meri haar pe muskuraati thi tum,
tumhaari is muskaan pe muskuraaye the hum,
q ki meri har khushi ki kaaran thi tum...

hum the tumhaare saamne khule kitaab ki tarah,
tumne jo chaha uspe likh diya,
humne chaha tha uspe apni zindagi likhna,
tumne hamare maut ka farmaan likh diya,
tumhaari is farmaan pe muskuraaye the hum,
q ki meri har khushi ki kaaran thi tum...

hum to samajh rahe the ki tumse pyaar kar rahe the hum,
sach ye tha ki apne maut ka saamaan jama kar rahe the hum,
tumhaari yaadon ko seene se lagake khush ho rahe the hum,
samajh na paaye ki jeete ji be maut mar rahe the hum,
tumhaare is katle aam pe muskuraaye the hum,
q ki meri har khushi ki kaaran thi tum...
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«Reply #1 on: March 23, 2010, 06:05:41 AM »
Bahut achhi poem likhi hai Kapil ji. Wonderful and mind blowing creation. Keep writing.
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«Reply #2 on: March 23, 2010, 02:23:20 PM »
Very TOuchy
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«Reply #3 on: March 23, 2010, 02:28:44 PM »
Thanx for appreciation Ashued...!!!

Quote from: ashued on March 23, 2010, 02:23:20 PM
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«Reply #4 on: March 23, 2010, 02:33:13 PM »
Shukriyaa Riyaz ji...aapne hamari kavita ko pasand kiya...
My intensions are not to blow the mind of anyone but to share feelings in words... if I have readers like u , i'll love to write...!!!

Quote from: riyaz106 on March 23, 2010, 06:05:41 AM
Bahut achhi poem likhi hai Kapil ji. Wonderful and mind blowing creation. Keep writing.
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«Reply #5 on: March 25, 2010, 11:55:30 AM »
klaShkar jee:

namaste!

seedhe saral lafzoN meiN umdaah aNdaaz-e-bayaaN...! liKhate raheN aise hi aage bhee! daad!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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«Reply #6 on: March 25, 2010, 01:49:02 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya aapka Dhaval ji... hume achcha laga jaanke ki aapko hamari kavita pasand aayi... bahut bahut shukriya ...!!!

Quote from: Dhaval on March 25, 2010, 11:55:30 AM
klaShkar jee:

namaste!

seedhe saral lafzoN meiN umdaah aNdaaz-e-bayaaN...! liKhate raheN aise hi aage bhee! daad!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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«Reply #7 on: March 28, 2010, 12:31:14 PM »
bahut khoob klaskar ji, icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #8 on: March 29, 2010, 12:25:55 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya Suresh Ji...!!!
Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on March 28, 2010, 12:31:14 PM
bahut khoob klaskar ji, icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #9 on: March 29, 2010, 12:52:26 PM »
Bahut hi khoob likha hai apne kapil ji...

Kuch log bewafai badi sadgi se karte hai,
apne sukoon ko dusro k ansuo se bharte hai,
ishq pe fanaa hone wale masum diwane..
mhbt k kaatilo k hatho aese hi bemaut marte hai......
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«Reply #10 on: March 29, 2010, 12:54:11 PM »
Bahut Ache..

Bahut Khoob!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: March 29, 2010, 06:06:46 PM »
Aapka tahe dil se shukriya Geet ji...!!!
Aapne bhi bahut achcha likha hai... bahut aasaan shabdon me bahut khoobsurti se likha hai....!!!

Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 29, 2010, 12:52:26 PM
Bahut hi khoob likha hai apne kapil ji...

Kuch log bewafai badi sadgi se karte hai,
apne sukoon ko dusro k ansuo se bharte hai,
ishq pe fanaa hone wale masum diwane..
mhbt k kaatilo k hatho aese hi bemaut marte hai......
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«Reply #12 on: March 29, 2010, 06:08:11 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya Khwaish ji...!!!

Quote from: khwaish on March 29, 2010, 12:54:11 PM
Bahut Ache..

Bahut Khoob!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: March 29, 2010, 07:43:38 PM »
Quote from: klaskar on March 29, 2010, 06:06:46 PM
Aapka tahe dil se shukriya Geet ji...!!!
Aapne bhi bahut achcha likha hai... bahut aasaan shabdon me bahut khoobsurti se likha hai....!!!


shukriya kapil ji...
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«Reply #14 on: March 29, 2010, 08:45:50 PM »
Welcome hai ji...!!!
Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 29, 2010, 07:43:38 PM
shukriya kapil ji...
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