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soudagar
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Abhi suraj nahi dooba zara si shaam hone do
Main khud hi loat jaonga mujhe nakaam hone do
Mujhe badnaam kerne k bahane dhundte ho Q?
Main khud ho jaonga badnaam pehle nam hone do
Abhi mujko nahi karna hai matam haar jaane ka
Main sab taslim ker longa yeh charcha aam hone do
Meri hasti nahi anmol phir bhi bik nahi sakta
Wafayen bech lena per zara neelam hone do
Abhi aghaaz men hosla Q tor baithe ho?
Tumhara jeetna tay hai zara anjaam hone do
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«Reply #1 on: April 11, 2012, 04:08:33 AM » |
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behtreen behtreen aur bahut hee behtreen khudaa aapko salaamat rakkhe
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«Reply #2 on: April 11, 2012, 04:22:12 AM » |
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«Reply #3 on: April 11, 2012, 07:27:34 AM » |
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Bahut khoob Saudagar Ji behatareen ghazal pesh ki hai.
Ek badi sundar ghazal padhne ko mili, mann khush hua.
Wah wah WELDONE.
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #4 on: April 11, 2012, 07:47:19 AM » |
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«Reply #5 on: April 11, 2012, 08:03:46 AM » |
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«Reply #6 on: April 11, 2012, 09:57:52 AM » |
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Waah waah waah waah waah.
Very shaandar poetry h ji.
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«Reply #8 on: April 11, 2012, 11:04:59 AM » |
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«Reply #9 on: April 11, 2012, 12:03:35 PM » |
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quite diffrnt and good expressions....bahut khoob
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«Reply #12 on: April 11, 2012, 06:22:01 PM » |
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aapne jo likha hai ussko daad dene ke liye mere pass alfaaz nhi hain....
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«Reply #14 on: April 12, 2012, 05:25:21 AM » |
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Bahut hi khuburat ghazal hai , Sudagar saheb .Hazaaron daad hazir hain . Guzaarish hai ki post mein naam bhi de diya karein warna aksar achhe kalaam se mahroomi ho jaati hai.Khuda aapke qalam mein aur zor ataa kare.
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