Meri Iss Dua MeN Tum Apne Haath Bhi Uthaate Jaao "Khwahish"

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Khwaab Bhi Shayad Sheehse Se Bhi Zyada Kamzor Hote HaiN
Har Roz Toot Jaate Hai Faqat Ek Aankh Ke Khulne Se...!!!!



Inn Aankhon Ko  Apni Tasveer Dikhaate Jaao
Alwida kehna Hai kehdo Par Muskuraate Jaao

Main Kehta Hoon Dil meN Basaa Lo Mujhe..!!
Naa-Mumkin Hai Par Khwaab Koi Jagaate Jaao

Kaash Iss Zindagi MeN Main Yeh Manzar Bhi Dekhta
Jo Waade Kiye The Tumne,UnheN Bhi Nibhaate Jaao

Tumne Dekha Hai Kabhi Gham MeN Muskuraata Chehra
Meri Taraf Dekho,Yeh Tajurbaa Bhi Ab Kamaate Jaao

Baad Muddat Ke Main Yaad Aau To Itna Khayal Rakhna
Mere Kuch NagmoN Ko Apni Awaaz MeN Guungunaate Jaao

Kuch HaadasoN Ne Zindagi MeN Baanti HaiN Dooriyaan
Ho Sake To Kabhi Inn Dooriyon Ko Bhi Mitaate Jaao

Muskurate Khwab,Phulon Ka Chaman,Tumhe Sab Naseeb Ho
Meri Iss Dua MeN, Tum Apne Haath Bhi Uthaate Jaao


              ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: January 10, 2013, 08:53:56 AM »
Khawahish Jee Aadaab!



bahut khoob janab bahut khoob.. bade hi gehre aur khoob ahsaas
o khayaaloN ko bayaaN kiya hai aapne... Usual Smile


Khoob kalaam rahi... Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe...

Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: January 10, 2013, 08:57:07 AM »
Bohat Khoob Khwaish Bhai,.

Bohat Khoob,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahe,.
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«Reply #3 on: January 10, 2013, 09:00:09 AM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: January 10, 2013, 09:05:00 AM »
Very nice. Janab is tarha ki gazal kam hi padhne ko  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause milti hai. Aapki gazal bahut hi pyari hai. Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: January 10, 2013, 10:41:58 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on January 10, 2013, 08:38:12 AM
Kaanch Bhi Shayad Sheehse Se Bhi Zyada Kamzor Hote HaiN
Har Roz Toot Jaate Hai Faqat Ek Aankh Ke Khulne Se...!!!!



Inn Aankhon Ko  Apni Tasveer Dikhaate Jaao
Alwida kehna Hai kehdo Par Muskuraate Jaao

Main Kehta Hoon Dil meN Basaa Lo Mujhe..!!
Naa-Mumkin Hai Par Khwaab Koi Jagaate Jaao

Kaash Iss Zindagi MeN Main Yeh Manzar Bhi Dekhta
Jo Waade Kiye The Tumne,UnheN Bhi Nibhaate Jaao

Tumne Dekha Hai Kabhi Gham MeN Muskuraata Chehra
Meri Taraf Dekho,Yeh Tajurbaa Bhi Ab Kamaate Jaao

Baad Muddat Ke Main Yaad Aau To Itna Khayal Rakhna
Mere Kuch NagmoN Ko Apni Awaaz MeN Guungunaate Jaao

Kuch HaadasoN Ne Zindagi MeN Baanti HaiN Dooriyaan
Ho Sake To Kabhi Inn Dooriyon Ko Bhi Mitaate Jaao

Muskurate Khwab,Phulon Ka Chaman,Tumhe Sab Naseeb Ho
Meri Iss Dua MeN, Tum Apne Haath Bhi Uthaate Jaao


              ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~


Bohat Khub Khwaish Jee!!! Gehre Ehsaason se bhari aap ki ghazal rahi. Sabhi ashaar bohat hi khub rahe!!!

But Maqta is outstanding!!! Keep Writing!!!


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: January 10, 2013, 10:55:25 AM »
Bahut khoob Khwaahish sb, ehsaas ke motiyon se khoob nikhaaraa hai husn is ghazal ka aapne...dheron daad-o-mubaarakbaad qubool kijiye !
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«Reply #7 on: January 10, 2013, 10:59:52 AM »
wah wah bahut bahut khoob likha hai khwaish jee
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«Reply #8 on: January 10, 2013, 12:35:50 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waaaaaaaah! khwaish jee ehsason se bhari ek khoobsurat gazhal behad umda kalam.dili mubarakbad qubool kare
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«Reply #9 on: January 10, 2013, 12:52:27 PM »
very very nice.....Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: January 10, 2013, 02:20:50 PM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 10, 2013, 08:53:56 AM
Khawahish Jee Aadaab!



bahut khoob janab bahut khoob.. bade hi gehre aur khoob ahsaas
o khayaaloN ko bayaaN kiya hai aapne... Usual Smile


Khoob kalaam rahi... Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe...

Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Parwaaz Ji icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #11 on: January 10, 2013, 02:30:49 PM »
Muskurate Khwab,Phulon Ka Chaman,Tumhe Sab Naseeb Ho
Meri Iss Dua MeN, Tum Apne Haath Bhi Uthaate Jaao
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: January 10, 2013, 03:16:57 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause 
bahut bahut khoob Khwaish ji.. kyaa kehne.. waah ... bahut bahut khoob....!!!
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«Reply #13 on: January 10, 2013, 04:38:32 PM »
Nice creation khwaish ji but I think kaanch and sheesa are same things and has no difference. These words are not fulfilling the meaning of 2nd line. In first line if khwaab instead of kaanch is used it will be appropriate. Waise aapki marzi.
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«Reply #14 on: January 10, 2013, 06:43:01 PM »
Quote from: Saraab on January 10, 2013, 04:38:32 PM
Nice creation khwaish ji but I think kaanch and sheesa are same things and has no difference. These words are not fulfilling the meaning of 2nd line. In first line if khwaab instead of kaanch is used it will be appropriate. Waise aapki marzi.


Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Saraab Ji, Main Naa Jaane Kaise Khwaab ke Jageh Par Kaanch Likh Gaya...Likhna Mujhe Khwaab Hi Tha..Thankyou So Much For Your Time..Main Abhi Usse Theek Kar Deta Hoon.. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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