Meri jan bolo kyon hai itni udasi

by prashad on November 29, 2012, 01:56:21 AM
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Annkho mein pani aur chehre pe udasi
Meri jaan bolo kyon hai itni mayusi

Jee na paye tujh bin, tujhe hai pata
Khta kya huyee mujhko jara tu bata

Kyon nayano ka kajal hai phaila phaila
Kyon bikhree julphe lage tarsi hai ghata

Baharo ke mausam mein aaya kyon patjhar
Khanakti nahi hai kyon pairo ki jhanjhar

Tumhari udasi tarpa rahi hai humko
Jan niklegi humari tab bataogi kisko
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«Reply #1 on: November 29, 2012, 02:37:14 AM »
bohut khoob prasad jee , daaad qubool kareN
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«Reply #2 on: November 29, 2012, 02:37:19 AM »
very nice
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«Reply #3 on: November 29, 2012, 05:31:21 AM »
waah waah
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«Reply #4 on: November 29, 2012, 07:27:00 AM »
Quote from: Aarish on November 29, 2012, 02:37:14 AM
bohut khoob prasad jee , daaad qubool kareN
thanx aarish ji
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«Reply #5 on: November 29, 2012, 07:28:05 AM »
Quote from: nandbahu on November 29, 2012, 02:37:19 AM
very nice
thanx
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«Reply #6 on: November 29, 2012, 07:28:36 AM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on November 29, 2012, 05:31:21 AM
waah waah
thanx saini ji
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«Reply #7 on: November 29, 2012, 09:27:02 AM »
very very nice
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«Reply #8 on: November 29, 2012, 12:36:04 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: December 03, 2012, 05:34:14 AM »
Quote from: aqsh on November 29, 2012, 09:27:02 AM
very very nice
thanx aqsh ji
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«Reply #10 on: December 03, 2012, 05:34:43 AM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on November 29, 2012, 12:36:04 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
thanx hriday ji
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