~~~Meri Kabar~~~

by Sammual on May 17, 2009, 02:53:25 PM
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Woh Phool Chadane Aaye Meri Kabar Par,
Tab Main So Raha Tha,
Jab Neend Khuli To dekha,
Koi Roo Raha Tha,
Usne Kaha Main Aa Gayi SAM,
Maine kaha Ab Aane Ka Kya Faida,
Tab Kahan Thi Jab Main Pyar,
Main Fanna Ho Rah Tha.

Woh Phool Chadane Aaye Meri Kabar Par,
Tab Main So Raha Tha,
Jab Ankh Khuli To Dekha ,
Ke Koi Ro Raha Tha,
Usne kaha Tum Mujhe Chod Kar Kyun Chale Gaye SAM,
Maine Kaha Marne Se Pehle Main Bhi yahi Socha,
Karta Tha.

Woh Phool Chadane Aaye Meri Kabar Par,
Tab Main So Raha Tha,
Jab Ankh Khuli To Dekha,
Ke Koi Ro Raha Tha,
Usne Kaha Mujhe Maaf Kar Dena SAM,
Maine Tab Kuch Nahi Kaha.
Kyunki Tab Main Ro Raha Tha
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«Reply #1 on: May 17, 2009, 03:47:10 PM »
Bahut achha Likha hai Sam...
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sapana
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«Reply #2 on: May 17, 2009, 06:52:54 PM »
Smmaual,
bhot accha likha hai.Keep it up. Usual Smile
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dead heart
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«Reply #3 on: May 17, 2009, 07:59:52 PM »
Sam jee well done..Applause First stanza was just toooooooooo gud...
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«Reply #4 on: May 18, 2009, 01:13:39 AM »
very nice sammual ji.too good.
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«Reply #5 on: May 18, 2009, 04:25:52 AM »
Bohat khoob Sammual
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Sammual
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«Reply #6 on: May 18, 2009, 08:13:59 AM »
Shukriya Friends.
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«Reply #7 on: May 18, 2009, 08:21:39 AM »
 tearyeyed AP ke gum me balti bhar roye aur Naha liya  happy3
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«Reply #8 on: May 18, 2009, 09:02:32 AM »
Quote from: Sammual on May 17, 2009, 02:53:25 PM
Woh Phool Chadane Aaye Meri Kabar Par,
Tab Main So Raha Tha,
Jab Neend Khuli To dekha,
Koi Roo Raha Tha,
Usne Kaha Main Aa Gayi SAM,
Maine kaha Ab Aane Ka Kya Faida,
Tab Kahan Thi Jab Main Pyar,
Main Fanna Ho Rah Tha.

Woh Phool Chadane Aaye Meri Kabar Par,
Tab Main So Raha Tha,
Jab Ankh Khuli To Dekha ,
Ke Koi Ro Raha Tha,
Usne kaha Tum Mujhe Chod Kar Kyun Chale Gaye SAM,
Maine Kaha Marne Se Pehle Main Bhi yahi Socha,
Karta Tha.

Woh Phool Chadane Aaye Meri Kabar Par,
Tab Main So Raha Tha,
Jab Ankh Khuli To Dekha,
Ke Koi Ro Raha Tha,
Usne Kaha Mujhe Maaf Kar Dena SAM,
Maine Tab Kuch Nahi Kaha.
Kyunki Tab Main Ro Raha Tha




bahaut achchey...SAM
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Sammual
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«Reply #9 on: May 18, 2009, 03:53:14 PM »
Thanx Friends.
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«Reply #10 on: May 18, 2009, 03:59:05 PM »
Mashallah Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Apne, Sammual,.
Bohat Achche,.
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«Reply #11 on: May 18, 2009, 04:17:28 PM »
Thanx Azeem Ji.
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