Meri kahani le le

by thycreator on September 05, 2008, 11:55:48 PM
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thycreator
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Mere ashkon ki apne dil pe nishani le le,
Mere mehboob aaj meri bhi kahani le le..

Kai batein hai unkahi jo tumko sunani hai,
Meri majburiyon ka sabab tu jabani le le..
Mere mehboob aaj meri bhi kahani le le..

Naye lamhe bahut honge teri yadon ke aagan mein,
Aaj mujhse meri kuch yaadein purani le le...
Mere mehboob aaj meri bhi kahani le le..

Tere jawaa iradon ke nazar karun toh kya karun,
Jo pyar jee hi na saka tu uski jawani le le...
Mere mehboob aaj meri bhi kahani le le..

Mere dil ki dua hai tujhe khushi hi ho haasil,
Tere badhte kadamo mein meri sason ki rawani le le..
Mere mehboob aaj meri bhi kahani le le..
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Kanta
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«Reply #1 on: September 06, 2008, 12:20:34 AM »
(Tere jawaa iradon ke nazar karun toh kya karun,
Jo pyar jee hi na saka tu uski jawani le le...
Mere mehboob aaj meri bhi kahani le le..)

ye lines ka kiya kehna creator, very interesting to read and touching.
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thycreator
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«Reply #2 on: September 06, 2008, 04:29:12 AM »
Quote from: Kanta on September 06, 2008, 12:20:34 AM
(Tere jawaa iradon ke nazar karun toh kya karun,
Jo pyar jee hi na saka tu uski jawani le le...
Mere mehboob aaj meri bhi kahani le le..)

ye lines ka kiya kehna creator, very interesting to read and touching.



Thanks a lot Kanta ji........i am glad you liked it.
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #3 on: September 06, 2008, 05:04:29 AM »
bohut khoob likha hai aapne creator ji
aapki creativity ka jawab nahi   Usual Smile
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thycreator
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«Reply #4 on: September 06, 2008, 08:57:17 AM »
Thanks a lot Bhawna ji.....apko pasand aaya, meri mehnat safal ho gayi....Usual Smile
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baadal102
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«Reply #5 on: September 06, 2008, 09:10:35 AM »
Quote from: thycreator on September 05, 2008, 11:55:48 PM

Mere ashkon ki apne dil pe nishani le le,
Mere mehboob aaj meri bhi kahani le le..

Kai batein hai unkahi jo tumko sunani hai,
Meri majburiyon ka sabab tu jabani le le..
Mere mehboob aaj meri bhi kahani le le..

Naye lamhe bahut honge teri yadon ke aagan mein,
Aaj mujhse meri kuch yaadein purani le le...
Mere mehboob aaj meri bhi kahani le le..

Tere jawaa iradon ke nazar karun toh kya karun,
Jo pyar jee hi na saka tu uski jawani le le...
Mere mehboob aaj meri bhi kahani le le..

Mere dil ki dua hai tujhe khushi hi ho haasil,
Tere badhte kadamo mein meri sason ki rawani le le..
Mere mehboob aaj meri bhi kahani le le..


bahut khoob or bahut hi aacha likha hai creator ji




Baadal
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R-U-Sudha
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«Reply #6 on: September 06, 2008, 09:25:59 AM »
Quote from: thycreator on September 05, 2008, 11:55:48 PM

Mere ashkon ki apne dil pe nishani le le,
Mere mehboob aaj meri bhi kahani le le..

Kai batein hai unkahi jo tumko sunani hai,
Meri majburiyon ka sabab tu jabani le le..
Mere mehboob aaj meri bhi kahani le le..

Naye lamhe bahut honge teri yadon ke aagan mein,
Aaj mujhse meri kuch yaadein purani le le...
Mere mehboob aaj meri bhi kahani le le..

Tere jawaa iradon ke nazar karun toh kya karun,
Jo pyar jee hi na saka tu uski jawani le le...
Mere mehboob aaj meri bhi kahani le le..

Mere dil ki dua hai tujhe khushi hi ho haasil,
Tere badhte kadamo mein meri sason ki rawani le le..
Mere mehboob aaj meri bhi kahani le le..


thycreator ji, yun to har pankti se aah nikalti hai, parantu lal rang wali pankti ne to hamari atma ko jhanjhod ke rakh diya.
Bas yun samjhe ki mera is pankti se koi gehra rishta hai.  tearyeyed
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R-U-Sudha
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«Reply #7 on: September 06, 2008, 09:34:30 AM »
bas kuch dil ki baat keh dun aur kya karun.

aa ki ek bar meri dil ki dharkan de de,
suni hai har disha mujhe ek mulaqaat de de,
meri bhool ek nahin sou hain kshama de de,
mar gaya agar to chita ko to hi aag de de.
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thycreator
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«Reply #8 on: September 06, 2008, 09:45:38 AM »
Quote from: baadal102 on September 06, 2008, 09:10:35 AM
bahut khoob or bahut hi aacha likha hai creator ji




Baadal

Thanks a lot Baadal ji.....mujhe ummend hai ki aap bhi kuch likhenge...Usual Smile
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thycreator
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«Reply #9 on: September 06, 2008, 09:52:24 AM »
Quote from: R-U-Sudha on September 06, 2008, 09:25:59 AM
thycreator ji, yun to har pankti se aah nikalti hai, parantu lal rang wali pankti ne to hamari atma ko jhanjhod ke rakh diya.
Bas yun samjhe ki mera is pankti se koi gehra rishta hai.  tearyeyed

Thanks a lot Sudha ji.....thank you very much....

Kayi yaddein purani hai, jo iss dil ko tadpayen,
Tere pehlu mein bitaye har lamhe hi yaad aayen,
Kabhi toh aake dekh le apne deewane ki tu haalat,
Ab toh har saans bhi apne aane ka ehsaan jatayen...
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Talat
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«Reply #10 on: September 06, 2008, 10:25:59 AM »
Quote from: thycreator on September 05, 2008, 11:55:48 PM

Mere ashkon ki apne dil pe nishani le le,
Mere mehboob aaj meri bhi kahani le le..

Kai batein hai unkahi jo tumko sunani hai,
Meri majburiyon ka sabab tu jabani le le..
Mere mehboob aaj meri bhi kahani le le..

Naye lamhe bahut honge teri yadon ke aagan mein,
Aaj mujhse meri kuch yaadein purani le le...
Mere mehboob aaj meri bhi kahani le le..

Tere jawaa iradon ke nazar karun toh kya karun,
Jo pyar jee hi na saka tu uski jawani le le...
Mere mehboob aaj meri bhi kahani le le..

Mere dil ki dua hai tujhe khushi hi ho haasil,
Tere badhte kadamo mein meri sason ki rawani le le..
Mere mehboob aaj meri bhi kahani le le..


So you made re-entry with a bang !! Bohot khoob Applause Applause Applause
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baadal102
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«Reply #11 on: September 06, 2008, 10:40:51 AM »
creator ji aap ne jo kaha hum us ka
dhayan rakhenge or koshish karenge
ki jald hi aap ki baat hum poori ker de



Baadal
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thycreator
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«Reply #12 on: September 06, 2008, 08:12:33 PM »
Thanks a lot Talat ji.......wapasi karne ki koshish hai...har bar ki tarah...

Baadal ji, aap kuch likhenge toh hi toh silsila aage badhega.
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Rajbir
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«Reply #13 on: September 06, 2008, 09:05:43 PM »
Amit

Very touching and very beautiful Applause

Keep going Thumbs UP
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honeyrose
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«Reply #14 on: September 07, 2008, 08:56:22 AM »
Amit ji

bohat khoob likha hai aapne great lines... Applause
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