Meri kahani le le

by thycreator on September 05, 2008, 11:55:48 PM
Pages: 1 [2]  All
Print
Author  (Read 4284 times)
thycreator
Guest
«Reply #15 on: September 07, 2008, 04:29:13 PM »
Thanks a lot Rajbir ji aur honeyrose ji.....mujhe khushi hui ki apko meri likhi kavita pasand aayi...Usual Smile
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
meri kismat ki kahani by gum in Shayri-E-Dard
Meri Kahani.. Meri Zubani by Aashique in Shayri-E-Dard
Na Poocho Meri Mohabbat Ki Kahani,.. by Azeem Azaad in Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai « 1 2  All »
meri kahani by Singh is king in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
MERI KAHANI MERI JUBAANI by amarhellboy in Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai
Pooja
Guest
«Reply #16 on: September 07, 2008, 04:40:58 PM »

Mere ashkon ki apne dil pe nishani le le,
Mere mehboob aaj meri bhi kahani le le..

Kai batein hai unkahi jo tumko sunani hai,
Meri majburiyon ka sabab tu jabani le le..
Mere mehboob aaj meri bhi kahani le le..

Naye lamhe bahut honge teri yadon ke aagan mein,
Aaj mujhse meri kuch yaadein purani le le...
Mere mehboob aaj meri bhi kahani le le..

Tere jawaa iradon ke nazar karun toh kya karun,
Jo pyar jee hi na saka tu uski jawani le le...
Mere mehboob aaj meri bhi kahani le le..

Mere dil ki dua hai tujhe khushi hi ho haasil,
Tere badhte kadamo mein meri sason ki rawani le le..
Mere mehboob aaj meri bhi kahani le le..


wah wah wah kaya baat hai Amit ji!! bahoot khoob!!
Logged
thycreator
Guest
«Reply #17 on: September 07, 2008, 06:35:46 PM »
Thanks a lot Pooja ji.....i am glad you liked it.
Logged
baadal102
Guest
«Reply #18 on: September 08, 2008, 07:34:30 AM »
Baadal ji, aap kuch likhenge toh hi toh silsila aage badhega.

amit ji aap jitna umda hum nahi likh paayenge
lakin koshish ki hai, umeed hai pasand aayegi.


Jo khilaye the phool mil ke,
Un phoolo ki khusboo le le,

Taaza aaj wo nahi hai lakin,
Un sukhi pattio ko nazar apni ker le,

Adhuri chor gaye the jo kahani,
Aaj use tu khud hi khatam ker le,

Bahut kuch naya hoga jiwan main tare,
Kuch purani yaado ko bhi tu yaad ker le,

Be-waffa hum sahi tari nazar main,
Lakin waado ko apne yaad tu bhi ker le,

Lakin waado ko apne yaad tu bhi ker le.....






Baadal
Logged
Pooja
Guest
«Reply #19 on: January 18, 2009, 09:21:18 PM »
bahoot khoob baadal ji
Logged
Pages: 1 [2]  All
Print
Jump to:  


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 08, 2024, 06:59:36 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]

[November 08, 2024, 09:59:08 AM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]

[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:55:06 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 06:58:58 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.102 seconds with 23 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8505 Real Poets and poetry admirer