meri kalam...

by Naya_Daur on July 12, 2006, 05:39:28 AM
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Naya_Daur
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Karte hain Intezar,aor karte raheinge
pyaar mein tere yuhi tardpte rahein
hai zindagi kya iss intezar ke ilawa
khayalon ka sagar,aor uska bhi na koi kinara
kabhi dhoop,toh barsat ke baadal,
har pal mujhe bheegote raheinge,
til til tere intezar mein hum,
yuhi umar bhar jeete marte raheinge,
na rokna abb tum meri kalam
iss dard ke mehfil mein likhne ko
JEET ke har lafz tujhse har pal
milne ki fariyad karte raheinge....!!!
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #1 on: July 12, 2006, 05:46:44 AM »
wah kay abaat hai Jeet bahoot khoob....
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angel4u
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«Reply #2 on: July 12, 2006, 05:59:18 AM »
Very nice jeet ji..

Raatko Chand Jab Khile Dilko Nashad Karti Hoon Main,
Ek Bhuli Khushi Ke Liye Lakh GaM Yaad Karti Hoon Main,
Mujhse Nazrein Badalneke Baad Hogi Tujhe Bhi Kayi Ranjishein,
Jaa Aaj Tujhe Wafaki Har Zanzeer Se Aazaad Karti Hoon Main...
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #3 on: July 12, 2006, 06:09:50 AM »
sukriya pankhuri ji ,,, n angel ji...


dil se dil ki preet bhula sako toh bhula do
mere khayalon se apni yaad mita sako toh mita do
mohabbat meri tere paeron mein zaanzeer nahi
iss kache daage ko agar tord sako toh tord do...!!!
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #4 on: July 12, 2006, 06:16:27 AM »
Likhti hai meri Kalam dard-e-dil mera
Sawan ya basant yeh dekh na paye...
hota hai intezar iss dil ko har pal tera
Din hai ya raat yeh farak jaan na paye
har mehfil mein has letein hain yeh honth
aaina dekhte hi murjha se jayein
karu ka bayan aapni iss Shayri-e-dard mein
ke tujh bin JEET khud ko,kitna akela paaye...!!!
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #5 on: July 12, 2006, 06:21:40 AM »
taradp utha yaadon ka samundar,
askhon ki lehrien ankhon mein de kar
woh chale gaye alwida kehne ke baad
JEET ke dil mein intezar ki Shama jala kar...!!!
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Meena is back
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«Reply #6 on: July 12, 2006, 11:40:58 AM »
wah buring ji...too gud!
ange ji pne bhi acha jawab  likha  hai!!


shayari e dard me aaj ek aur gum ka afsana banaya gaya,
dil ki geheraiyo se, nam ankhon se ek sher sunaya gaya,
kureed diye chand lafzo ne humare bhare hue zakhmo ko,
aur chupe hue samundar ko ankhon se aaj bahaya gaya!
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: July 12, 2006, 02:14:27 PM »
Wah kaya baat hai Jeet, bahoot hi acha likha hai, nice angle...... Meena kurriye kithy gayab ho jaandein ho janab.... welcome back... bahoot hi acha likha hai..

milan ke dard mai, barsaat bhi bah gai
chali aise hawa, her yaand ki sihran, laher gai
wo wadein, wo baatein, wo tera muskurana
do boond ansoo aor ek ahh mai, simat kar rah gai
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ranjana
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«Reply #8 on: July 13, 2006, 02:33:16 AM »
bahut khub jeet ,pooja .meena and angle....sabne bahut khoob likha hai
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Meena is back
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«Reply #9 on: July 13, 2006, 11:07:12 AM »
pooja didi...shukriya ji shukriya, arre yaar thodi busy thi, abhi holidays hai so relaxing  :D  nice sher as well!

ranjana ji...thank u :D
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angel4u
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«Reply #10 on: July 14, 2006, 04:21:53 AM »
Thanks meena ji pooja ji and ranjana ji...

Jo Le Gaya Tha Chhin Ke Roshni Meri
Jalti Hai Uski Aankh Me Parchhaiya Meri

Wo Saahilonki Dhoop Thi Usse Gila Hi Kya
MaaluM Jo Na Kar Saki Gehraiyan Meri...

Roka Hai Ek Ajnabi Khushboo Ne Raasta
Hairan Si Ghadi Hai Salasaiyan Meri...

Uske Darwaze Na Khul Sake Mere Liye
Galiyon Me Chikhti Rahi Tanhaiyan Meri...

LaMho Me Bant Gayi Hai Mere JisM Ki Sadi
KaM Ho Gayi Hai Phail Ke Gehraiyan Meri...
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #11 on: July 14, 2006, 04:33:12 AM »
Wah aaaalllll are Marvalous.....sabne FAntastic likha hai... =D> ..and a Nice Topic Jeet

Kya karenge hum......
Jab Kalam bhi Dard se se hamare toot jayegi......

Phail jayegi iski Shayahien Ek Kore Kaagaz pe......
Aur wahi hamari Zindagi ka Dard binn Lafzon ke Bayan kar jayegi......

Kya karenge hum.....
Jab Kalam likhte likhte ro jayegi......

Na degi do aur Kadam bhi saath......
Bas woh bhi likhte likhte aakhiri Dam tod jayegi.......

Ya Ali Kalam ko meri mujhse Lambi Umr bakshana......
JO Dekh sake harr Shaks Jhuriyaan iski kuch iss Tarah se mujhpar Dard bana ke barsana...........!!!!!!!!!!
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #12 on: July 15, 2006, 05:52:34 AM »
Sukriya Pooja,Meena, ranjana ,Angel N gaurav....

tere hathon mein ajj aapni lakeer doondh raha hu
mil jaye tu mujhe ,aaisi aapni takdeer doondh raha hu
kis mord par aur kabh aayoge laut kar tum JEET se milne
kahin intezar hi na reh jaye,aaise aapne naseeb doondh raha hu...!!!
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #13 on: July 15, 2006, 06:35:54 AM »
dil hai aor dil ki manjil nahi
main hu, meri koi khawahish nahi
chal du kahin bhi, per main musafir bhi nahi
likhu kaya ajj main, main koi shayar bhi nahi!!!
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #14 on: July 15, 2006, 06:41:03 AM »
kalam meri uthi hai tujh par kuch likhne ko
kash-m-kash ho gayi dil aor deemag mein
nazar aati bin raste ki manzil ko kaise paun
tu hi bata JEET kaise nikle,iss khawab-0-khayal se ...!!!
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