' Meri Kami Houi Mehsus Unko...! '

by Amanush... on May 27, 2007, 07:51:48 AM
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Arson baad kami hamaari houi mehsus unko
Phir laut aaye hum kar na sake maayus unko

Jazbaa ko dabaaye rakhe kuch bataa na sake
Socha kahin acha na lage apna khuluus unko

Aah nikli jo jigar se un tak pahunch na paayi
Tanhai jaa ke sunaaegi dil ki khus phus unko

Aur kuch na tha to ruuh unpe sadqe kiye hai
Zara sa waqt de na sake so lage kanjus unko

Auron jaise who bhi nikli taajjub bahut houa  
Dil o jaan se jaana tha humne makhsus unko

Meri wujuud se utni hi hai nafrat jitni chahat
Kal Amanush to aaj lage bhale maanus unko

Mushkil nahin houa hoga mera pyar bhulaana
Par sadaa rahega yaad apne ye takhallus unko

Amanush...

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Shikha12
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«Reply #1 on: June 19, 2007, 02:47:06 PM »
Nice One... Full of Thoughts....

Keep It Up... Usual Smile
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Nirbhay
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«Reply #2 on: June 19, 2007, 03:07:52 PM »
Quote from: "Amanush..."
Arson baad kami hamaari houi mehsus unko
Phir laut aaye hum kar na sake maayus unko

Jazbaa ko dabaaye rakhe kuch bataa na sake
Socha kahin acha na lage apna khuluus unko

Aah nikli jo jigar se un tak pahunch na paayi
Tanhai jaa ke sunaaegi dil ki khus phus unko

Aur kuch na tha to ruuh unpe sadqe kiye hai
Zara sa waqt de na sake so lage kanjus unko

Auron jaise who bhi nikli taajjub bahut houa  
Dil o jaan se jaana tha humne makhsus unko

Meri wujuud se utni hi hai nafrat jitni chahat
Kal Amanush to aaj lage bhale maanus unko

Mushkil nahin houa hoga mera pyar bhulaana
Par sadaa rahega yaad apne ye takhallus unko

Amanush...

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Bohat Hi Khoob...

Welcome back, amanush!
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #3 on: June 20, 2007, 08:15:20 AM »
well Expressed. full of feelings.. keep writing

Divya
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Meena is back
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«Reply #4 on: July 18, 2007, 02:05:24 PM »
wah chachu!!! just wonderful!!!! first and second sher bohot hi pasand aye mujhe!!! keep writting!!

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Amanush...
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«Reply #5 on: August 25, 2007, 04:02:06 PM »
Quote from: "Shikha12"
Nice One... Full of Thoughts....

Keep It Up... Usual Smile


Thanks for appreciating, Shikha Ji...!

Regards

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Amanush...
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«Reply #6 on: August 25, 2007, 04:04:24 PM »
Quote from: "Nirbhay"
Quote from: "Amanush..."
Arson baad kami hamaari houi mehsus unko
Phir laut aaye hum kar na sake maayus unko

Jazbaa ko dabaaye rakhe kuch bataa na sake
Socha kahin acha na lage apna khuluus unko

Aah nikli jo jigar se un tak pahunch na paayi
Tanhai jaa ke sunaaegi dil ki khus phus unko

Aur kuch na tha to ruuh unpe sadqe kiye hai
Zara sa waqt de na sake so lage kanjus unko

Auron jaise who bhi nikli taajjub bahut houa  
Dil o jaan se jaana tha humne makhsus unko

Meri wujuud se utni hi hai nafrat jitni chahat
Kal Amanush to aaj lage bhale maanus unko

Mushkil nahin houa hoga mera pyar bhulaana
Par sadaa rahega yaad apne ye takhallus unko

Amanush...

Usual Smile



Bohat Hi Khoob...

Welcome back, amanush!


Thanks for liking the poem and for the nice welcome, Nirbhay Ji...!

Take care, ok...?

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Amanush...
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«Reply #7 on: August 25, 2007, 04:06:35 PM »
Quote from: "deepika_divya"
well Expressed. full of feelings.. keep writing

Divya


Shukriya, Divya Ji...!

Apna khayaal rakhiyegaa...!

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Amanush...
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«Reply #8 on: August 25, 2007, 04:08:52 PM »
Quote from: "Meena is back"
wah chachu!!! just wonderful!!!! first and second sher bohot hi pasand aye mujhe!!! keep writting!!

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Kaisi ho, Meena Betiya...?

Isse pasand karne ke liye bahut hi shukriyaa...!

Apna khayaal thik se rakh rahi ho na...?

Keep smiling

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angel4u
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«Reply #9 on: August 25, 2007, 04:41:31 PM »
Very beautifuly expressed Usual Smile
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Shashi...
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«Reply #10 on: March 20, 2008, 08:54:21 AM »
good yaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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mistufer
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«Reply #11 on: March 20, 2008, 10:09:57 AM »
Amanush ji

bahut pasand aayi aapki ghazal,har sher khub likha hai

nira
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Amanush...
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«Reply #12 on: March 25, 2008, 05:43:55 PM »
Kavita pasand karne ke liye aap sabhi ko tah e dil se shukriya...!

Amanush...

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syednaami
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«Reply #13 on: October 28, 2008, 04:24:51 PM »
Amanush miyan,
Wah, kya khoobsurat andaaz-e-shayirana hai.
Aap ko to aor bhi likhna chahiye.
Bahut pasand aya.
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Amanush...
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«Reply #14 on: November 17, 2008, 05:09:31 PM »
Quote from: syednaami on October 28, 2008, 04:24:51 PM
Amanush miyan,
Wah, kya khoobsurat andaaz-e-shayirana hai.
Aap ko to aor bhi likhna chahiye.
Bahut pasand aya.

Shayri ki tareef ke liye bahut shukriya, Syed Ji...!

Jald hi koyi naya kalaam post kareinge...!

Yun hi saath dete rahiyega aur apna khayaal rakhna

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