Meri Khamoshi Ya Meri bebasi.....:Shayri-E-Dard

punam

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Punhach gaye itni dur ki waapas aa na sake
chaahte the aisa ho naa par kuch kar na sake...

zindagi ke is khel men hum ek kathhputli bane
khincha jis tarah qismat ne bas hum chalte bane...

kisi se bhi dil khol ke kuch kah na sake
dil hi dil me jalte rahe dard dikha na sake...

socha tha jo woh unhen manzoor na tha
Ho gayi bhool badi par maafi maang na sake...

hum gham chhupaane ki koshish men khamosh rahe
unki nazar men hum wafa ka aanchal na aodh sake...


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ANKIT RAO

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Re: Meri Khamoshi Ya Meri bebasi.....

«Reply #1 on: July 21, 2008, 03:19:46 PM »

BAHUT KHOOB PUNAM JI.
I LIKED THE THIS LINE VERY MUCH

DIL HI DIL MEIN JALTE RAHE DARD DIKHA NA SAKE.


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kiiller_1

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Re: Meri Khamoshi Ya Meri bebasi.....

«Reply #2 on: July 21, 2008, 03:22:58 PM »

Quote from: punam on July 21, 2008, 02:56:18 PM

zindagi ke is khel men hum ek kathhputli bane
khincha jis tarah qismat ne bas hum chalte bane...

kisi se bhi dil khol ke kuch kah na sake
dil hi dil me jalte rahe dard dikha na sake...

hum gham chhupaane ki koshish men khamosh rahe
unki nazar men hum wafa ka aanchal na aodh sake...

good one
1st line ke liye agar muje
aap ko point dene hote toh
10 meise 10 deta Clapping Smiley

gr8 keep it up Applause


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baadal102

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Re: Meri Khamoshi Ya Meri bebasi.....

«Reply #3 on: July 21, 2008, 04:07:24 PM »

bhoot aacha likha hai punam
thanx

Baadal


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punam

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Re: Meri Khamoshi Ya Meri bebasi.....

«Reply #4 on: July 21, 2008, 04:32:26 PM »

Quote from: ANKIT RAO on July 21, 2008, 03:19:46 PM

BAHUT KHOOB PUNAM JI.
I LIKED THE THIS LINE VERY MUCH

DIL HI DIL MEIN JALTE RAHE DARD DIKHA NA SAKE.

Thanx Ankit ji...


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punam

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Re: Meri Khamoshi Ya Meri bebasi.....

«Reply #5 on: July 21, 2008, 04:34:52 PM »

Quote from: kiiller_1 on July 21, 2008, 03:22:58 PM

good one
1st line ke liye agar muje
aap ko point dene hote toh
10 meise 10 deta Clapping Smiley

gr8 keep it up Applause

sukriya Kiiller ji... aap yehan aaye padhe aap ko acha laga yeh hi bahut hai..
thanx once again...


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punam

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Re: Meri Khamoshi Ya Meri bebasi.....

«Reply #6 on: July 21, 2008, 04:36:43 PM »

Quote from: baadal102 on July 21, 2008, 04:07:24 PM

bhoot aacha likha hai punam
thanx
Baadal

Thanx Baadal ji..bahut dino k baad aap nazar aaye...aaj kal dikhte hi nahi..?


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: Meri Khamoshi Ya Meri bebasi.....

«Reply #7 on: July 21, 2008, 06:07:35 PM »

Quote from: punam on July 21, 2008, 02:56:18 PM

zindagi ke is khel men hum ek kathhputli bane
khincha jis tarah qismat ne bas hum chalte bane...

kisi se bhi dil khol ke kuch kah na sake
dil hi dil me jalte rahe dard dikha na sake...

Bohot umda baat kahi punam ji khas kar ye do sher bohot pasand aaye, kuchh arz karne ki jur'at karta hun shayad kisi qaabil ho?.

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Aryaan

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Re: Meri Khamoshi Ya Meri bebasi.....

«Reply #8 on: July 22, 2008, 01:07:13 AM »

Bohat khoob Punam...


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punam

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Re: Meri Khamoshi Ya Meri bebasi.....

«Reply #9 on: July 22, 2008, 03:41:15 AM »

Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on July 21, 2008, 06:07:35 PM

Bohot umda baat kahi punam ji khas kar ye do sher bohot pasand aaye, kuchh arz karne ki jur'at karta hun shayad kisi qaabil ho?.

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Sukriya Atiq Bhaiya...bahut khoob likha aap ne...bahut acha laga..

Quote from: Aryaan on July 22, 2008, 01:07:13 AM

Bohat khoob Punam...

Thanx Aryaan ji....


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NETRAPAL

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Re: Meri Khamoshi Ya Meri bebasi.....

«Reply #10 on: July 22, 2008, 04:06:50 AM »

Quote from: punam on July 21, 2008, 02:56:18 PM

bahoot acha likha hai poonam ji likhte rahiye aise hee

netra....


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Re: Meri Khamoshi Ya Meri bebasi.....

«Reply #11 on: July 22, 2008, 04:18:58 AM »

itani udaasi?...........


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: Meri Khamoshi Ya Meri bebasi.....

«Reply #12 on: July 22, 2008, 05:09:10 AM »

nice creation punam ji


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punam

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Re: Meri Khamoshi Ya Meri bebasi.....

«Reply #13 on: July 22, 2008, 06:45:28 AM »

Quote from: NETRAPAL on July 22, 2008, 04:06:50 AM

bahoot acha likha hai poonam ji likhte rahiye aise hee

netra....

sukriya Netra ji....

Quote from: bekarar on July 22, 2008, 04:18:58 AM

itani udaasi?...........

Thanx bhaiya hmmm kabhi kabhi insaan udaas bhi ho jata hai na...

Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on July 22, 2008, 05:09:10 AM

nice creation punam ji

thanx kaushikbhawna ji....

Quote from: Shihab on July 22, 2008, 05:45:00 AM

WOW PUNAM JI BOHAT KHOOB JI....
ZINDAGI KI HAQIQAT KO SHABDO MAIN
DHALNA KOI AAPSE SIKHE JI BOHAT KHOOB...Keep It Up

hmm sujkriya shihab ji...aap jaise dost sath jab hote hain tab gham kis baat ki...


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syednaami

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Re: Meri Khamoshi Ya Meri bebasi.....

«Reply #14 on: July 23, 2008, 11:39:54 PM »

Door jaa kar bhi unse juda ho na sake,,
Munh mod kar liya par yaad woh aate rahe..

Dard to badhta gaya par khamosh rahe,,
Qismat pe chhod kar haal bas rote rahe..

Kabhi aasman par khushi se udte gaye,,
Kabhi gham ke sailab men bahte rahe..

Itni bebasi thi ki unko samjha na sake,,
Khamoshi ka daaman zor se thaame rahe..

Yeh dukh tha ya khud hi pathar dil bane,,
Unki sada aayi thi par hum khamosh rahe..

|Syed Naami|

Wah Punam Saahiba,,, kya dard hai kya andaaz-e-bayaan hai...


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