Meri Khamoshi Ya Meri bebasi.....

by punam on July 21, 2008, 02:56:18 PM

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punam

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«Reply #15 on: July 24, 2008, 06:57:40 AM »

wah ji bahut khoob...aap ne bhi kuch kam nahi likha..

laga woh ho gaye the dur mujh se
dikha andhera hi andhera har jagah
kah nahi sakte hui haalat kya...

kis se bant.te dard apna
bebas ho kar rah gaye the
samajh men na aaya karen to karen kya...

phir bhi na jaane kyun dil se
bar bar uthhta yeh sawaal tha
dur hoke mujhse woh rah sakenge kya...

roke na ruk rahe the aansoo
laga barbaad hogayi mere dil ki duniya
aur is zindagi men ab rakha hai kya...


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punam

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Re: Meri Khamoshi Ya Meri bebasi.....

«Reply #16 on: July 25, 2008, 10:02:16 AM »

Quote from: Shihab on July 24, 2008, 07:25:55 AM

kya kehne aap dono ke
Har Shabd Jaise Sachai Aur Dard Main Dooba Hua Hai
Sidha Dil Main Utar Gaye
Great Job Both Of You Lagey Raho.

Sukriya shihab ji...aap ko isme dard aur sachai nazar aayi..
chalo humara likhna safal ho gaya samjho...


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syednaami

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Re: Meri Khamoshi Ya Meri bebasi.....

«Reply #17 on: July 25, 2008, 06:22:09 PM »

Quote from: Shihab on July 25, 2008, 07:07:09 AM

Itne Dard Bhare Alfaaz Kahan Se Laaye Hai
Lagta Hai Dil Main Kahin Raaz Chhupaye Hai.
......
Hum To Bus Dua Ke Siwa Kuch Nahi Kar Sakte Hai
Jald Puri Ho Aapki Jo Bhi Jaayaz Tamannae.n Hai

Wah,,, Shihab baba kya dard ko dard ki zubaan men bayaan kia hai...
Kaafi alag aur doob kar likha gaya hai...


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Pooja

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Re: Meri Khamoshi Ya Meri bebasi.....

«Reply #18 on: July 25, 2008, 06:24:32 PM »

good work Punam, Sami and Shihab!!


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punam

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Re: Meri Khamoshi Ya Meri bebasi.....

«Reply #19 on: July 26, 2008, 06:35:45 AM »

Quote from: Shihab on July 25, 2008, 07:07:09 AM

Itne Dard Bhare Alfaaz Kahan Se Laaye Hai
Lagta Hai Dil Main Kahin Raaz Chhupaye Hai.

Jarur Chaha Hoga Aapne Sache Dil Se Kisi Ko.
Tabhi To Dard Aur Aansu Inaam Main Paaye Hai.

Is Andaaz Se Sunaayi Aapne Haal.e.Zindagi Apni
Jise Padkar Humare Bhi Aansu Nikal Aaye Hai.

Hum To Bus Dua Ke Siwa Kuch Nahi Kar Sakte Hai
Jald Puri Ho Aapki Jo Bhi Jaayaz Tamannae.n Hai

Bahut khoob shihab ji...aap bhi kuch kam nahi dil ki baat aur dard bayan karne men...


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punam

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Re: Meri Khamoshi Ya Meri bebasi.....

«Reply #20 on: July 26, 2008, 06:37:00 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on July 25, 2008, 06:24:32 PM

good work Punam, Sami and Shihab!!

Sukriya pooja di...


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: Meri Khamoshi Ya Meri bebasi.....

«Reply #21 on: July 27, 2008, 07:51:59 PM »

Behtareen behtareen behtareen

Sab ne apne apne jazbaat ki behtareen aqqasi ki.


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syednaami

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Re: Meri Khamoshi Ya Meri bebasi.....

«Reply #22 on: July 30, 2008, 10:18:36 PM »

Quote from: Shihab on July 27, 2008, 07:29:15 AM

Bohat Boha Shukaria Bhai Jaan...
Par Mera Koi Kamaal Nahi Isme
Maine Jitna Aap Logn Ka Dard Mehsoos Kiya
Usko Lafzon Main Daalne Ki Koshish Ki Hai.
Khair Shukariya Bhai...hmhm

Shihab baba bahut deep likh rahe ho aajkal...

Kahne ko to dard hota hai bahut,,
Par sahne ko jo sahe wohi jaane,,
Haal-e-dil apna to hai hi kharaab,,
Par rafeeq na hota to kon maane..