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ajeeb see hawa chali aaj ki shaam
main aaj tumhare hijr mein bahot udaas tha
ab saari umar ek ghum kaafi hai rone ke liye
meri mayyat mein bhi woh mere paas na tha.................
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«Reply #1 on: July 03, 2005, 05:42:53 PM » |
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Bohot achcha hai Waheed .................  !!!!!!!!!! |
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«Reply #2 on: July 03, 2005, 05:45:45 PM » |
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Bohot achcha hai Waheed ................. !!!!!!!!!! thanxxxxxxx alot Talat :oops: :opps: |
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«Reply #3 on: July 03, 2005, 05:48:50 PM » |
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ajeeb see hawa chali aaj ki shaam
main aaj tumhare hijr mein bahot udaas tha
ab saari umar ek ghum kaafi hai rone ke liye
meri mayyat mein bhi woh mere paas na tha................. very touchy waheed... bohot ache!! |
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«Reply #4 on: July 03, 2005, 05:51:55 PM » |
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bahut acha likha hai aapne Waheed...........................
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #5 on: July 03, 2005, 06:05:27 PM » |
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ajeeb see hawa chali aaj ki shaam
main aaj tumhare hijr mein bahot udaas tha
ab saari umar ek ghum kaafi hai rone ke liye
meri mayyat mein bhi woh mere paas na tha................. very touchy waheed... bohot ache!! Thanxxxxxx alot meena.............. :oops: |
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«Reply #6 on: July 03, 2005, 06:08:18 PM » |
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bahut acha likha hai aapne Waheed........................... thanxxxxxxxxxx alot nikki.................... :oops: |
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«Reply #7 on: July 03, 2005, 06:08:51 PM » |
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hey all...I am new..and aap sab log toh yaha bahut aacha likhtee hai!!
And waheed ji bahut aacha likha aapna...and especially these lines are very touchy
ab saari umar ek ghum kaafi hai rone ke liye
meri mayyat mein bhi woh mere paas na tha
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«Reply #8 on: July 03, 2005, 06:40:50 PM » |
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hey all...I am new..and aap sab log toh yaha bahut aacha likhtee hai!!
And waheed ji bahut aacha likha aapna...and especially these lines are very touchy
ab saari umar ek ghum kaafi hai rone ke liye
meri mayyat mein bhi woh mere paas na tha thanxxxxxxx alot............ torn_apart............. ur welcome to "Yoindia" |
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«Reply #9 on: July 03, 2005, 06:43:15 PM » |
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bohot hi achhe waheed mamu...and torn_apart ..welcome to Yoindia! ...
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«Reply #10 on: July 03, 2005, 06:51:39 PM » |
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ajeeb see hawa chali aaj ki shaam
main aaj tumhare hijr mein bahot udaas tha
ab saari umar ek ghum kaafi hai rone ke liye
meri mayyat mein bhi woh mere paas na tha................. It's very nice waheed |
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bohot hi achhe waheed mamu...and torn_apart! ... thanxxxxxxx alot sanya mamani............ rohit bhai................. sanya ji theek se padha karo.......... :wink: |
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«Reply #12 on: July 03, 2005, 07:28:29 PM » |
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Meri Mayat Mein Bhi woh Pass Na Tha
Kia Aaj Bhi us K Liye Mein Khas na Tha
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«Reply #13 on: July 03, 2005, 09:06:39 PM » |
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"ab saari umar ek ghum kaafi hai rone ke liye
meri mayyat mein bhi woh mere paas na tha"........these lines just touched the heart.........very nice waheed!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #14 on: July 04, 2005, 08:42:10 AM » |
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"ab saari umar ek ghum kaafi hai rone ke liye
meri mayyat mein bhi woh mere paas na tha"........these lines just touched the heart.........very nice waheed!!!!!!!!! thanxxxxxxxxxx alot............. isha..............rohit...............aap logon bahot bahot shukriya.......... |
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