~~ Meri mohabbat ~~

by AMAR SINGH143 on September 13, 2010, 07:16:29 AM
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Chaand sa mukhada mere mehboob ka dekho. . .
Hai ek karishma Unki muskaan toh dekho. . .
Dil tadap raha hai,unki ek jhalak ke liye. .. .
Is tadap may chupi jazbaat toh dekho. . .
Karta hu intezaar har ek pal APKA.
Is intezaar may doobi mere aankho ki tadap toh dekho. . .
 Apki yaad may hum kaat rahe hai  zindagai . . .
  Ye zindagi ab apke naam hai dekho. . .
Hum karte hai apse  sacha pyaar . . .
Yakeen nahi toh mere dil may jhaank ke dekho. . .
 Apka rahega intezaar mere marne ke baad bhi . . .
Aap mere marne ke baad ek dafa meri kabar par aake toh dekho . . .

Chaand sa mukhada mere mehboob ka dekho. . .
Hai ek karishma Unki muskaan toh dekho. . .
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«Reply #1 on: September 13, 2010, 08:11:31 PM »
waah jiwahhh
kya baat hai amar ji..... Applause Applause
gud 1 this time...
bas jab aap post karen na to thode style se kijiye padhne me aur maza aayega...jaise....

Chaand sa mukhada mere mehboob ka dekho. . .
Hai ek karishma Unki muskaan toh dekho. . .

Dil tadap raha hai,unki ek jhalak ke liye. .. .
Is tadap may chupi jazbaat toh dekho. . .

Karta hu intezaar har ek pal APKA.
Is intezaar may doobi mere aankho ki tadap toh dekho. . .

Apki yaad may hum kaat rahe hai  zindagai . . .
Ye zindagi ab apke naam hai dekho. . .

Hum karte hai apse  sacha pyaar . . .
Yakeen nahi toh mere dil may jhaank ke dekho. . .

Apka rahega intezaar mere marne ke baad bhi . . .
Aap mere marne ke baad ek dafa meri kabar par aake toh dekho . . .

Chaand sa mukhada mere mehboob ka dekho. . .
Hai ek karishma Unki muskaan toh dekho. . .
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hope aapko bura nahin laga hoga meri baat ka....agar laga to sorry nahin kahungi..kyunki jo laga wo kaha ..its for ur benefit samjhe...
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«Reply #2 on: September 13, 2010, 10:43:55 PM »
Very Beautiful.............

Full of love!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Gud one
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AMAR SINGH143
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«Reply #3 on: September 14, 2010, 11:04:14 AM »
THANXX  NEEL JI
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«Reply #4 on: September 14, 2010, 11:06:43 AM »
waah jiwahhh
kya baat hai amar ji..... Applause Applause
gud 1 this time...
bas jab aap post karen na to thode style se kijiye padhne me aur maza aayega...jaise....

Chaand sa mukhada mere mehboob ka dekho. . .
Hai ek karishma Unki muskaan toh dekho. . .

Dil tadap raha hai,unki ek jhalak ke liye. .. .
Is tadap may chupi jazbaat toh dekho. . .

Karta hu intezaar har ek pal APKA.
Is intezaar may doobi mere aankho ki tadap toh dekho. . .

Apki yaad may hum kaat rahe hai  zindagai . . .
Ye zindagi ab apke naam hai dekho. . .

Hum karte hai apse  sacha pyaar . . .
Yakeen nahi toh mere dil may jhaank ke dekho. . .

Apka rahega intezaar mere marne ke baad bhi . . .
Aap mere marne ke baad ek dafa meri kabar par aake toh dekho . . .

Chaand sa mukhada mere mehboob ka dekho. . .
Hai ek karishma Unki muskaan toh dekho. . .
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hope aapko bura nahin laga hoga meri baat ka....agar laga to sorry nahin kahungi..kyunki jo laga wo kaha ..its for ur benefit samjhe...


kya anu jiii dadagiri nahi chalegiii
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«Reply #5 on: September 14, 2010, 11:07:04 AM »
wowwee post yara bahut khoob likha he~
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«Reply #6 on: September 14, 2010, 11:10:03 AM »
 helloKASAK JI ...BAHOT BAHOT SHUKRIYA ..MAI AAGE SE DHYAAN RAKHUNGA .....THANXX  4 UR SUPPORT ..N Y SHOULD I BE ANGRYY  hmm??Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: September 14, 2010, 11:12:18 AM »
dekho abhi ji amar ko bura nahin laga tum bekaar me bich me kudd pade......
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«Reply #8 on: September 14, 2010, 11:14:53 AM »
oyeee achha ladka he usne kuchh nahi akah iska matlab ye nahi ki dagiri dikhao~
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«Reply #9 on: September 14, 2010, 11:19:15 AM »
hehe... Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: September 14, 2010, 11:24:14 AM »
ABHI JI AAJ MOOD MAY HAI !!  Giggle ..Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: September 14, 2010, 11:25:44 AM »
oyeeeee are yaar me to hamesha mood me hota huuu...
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«Reply #12 on: September 14, 2010, 11:31:31 AM »
oyeeee pehle to thik se bolo

dadagiri nahin
dadigiri ya taaiii giri...samjha kya
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«Reply #13 on: September 14, 2010, 11:32:55 AM »
yup sahi he bhiduuu ..apun samajh gay bhaiiii oh sorry DiDi
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«Reply #14 on: September 14, 2010, 11:39:14 AM »
mast mohabbat bhari baatein ho rahi hai yahaan par...wah wah ji...

Amar your poem is nice..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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