.:meri pukaar:.:Shayri-E-Dard

sanya310

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sazaa hai yeh wafa ki
ya jurmaana hai ye pyaar ka
na dikhti kahin aankhen uski
na chehra mere dildaar ka

kya nahi hai ussey fikr meri
ya andaaza iss intezaar ka?
kaise dilaun yakeen ussey
iss ishq ke khumaar ka

rootha hai ya bewafaa
ya dil hai uska pathar ka
taras gaye naina mere
bechain hai dil deedar ka

un honton ki hansi ka
woh chehre par nikhaar ka
saath guzare lamhon ka
woh mausam e bahaar ka

chubhti hai doorie us se
jaise vaar koi talwaar ka
kya khata thi meri jo
mila dukh sansaar ka

dhoond ke laaye koi usey
de ata pata sarkaar ka
na khat aya na khabar aayi
na jawaab meri pukaar ka ...

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«Reply #1 on: August 03, 2007, 05:20:18 PM »

That is very nice.

Sanya..
I think here :

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dhoond ke laaye koi, mujhe
ata pata sarkaar ka
na khat aya na khabar aayi
na jawaab meri pukaar ka ...

You forgot typing something..
ie. ata pata de sarkaar ka


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Talat

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«Reply #2 on: August 03, 2007, 06:37:48 PM »

Beautiful Sanya !!! Usual Smile


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Rajbir

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«Reply #3 on: August 03, 2007, 09:41:56 PM »

Sani

Bahut khoob !

Very very nice lil sis :D


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sanya310

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«Reply #4 on: August 03, 2007, 10:24:37 PM »

Thanks a lot Ricky, oh and thanx again for correcting.. was a typing error! :D
thanku so much Talat and Bhaiya Usual Smile


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Aryaan

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«Reply #5 on: August 06, 2007, 10:52:06 PM »

Bohat khoob Sanya...


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sanya310

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«Reply #6 on: August 07, 2007, 12:04:08 AM »

thanks a lot aryaan Usual Smile


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Manav Mehra

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«Reply #7 on: August 07, 2007, 04:48:38 AM »

Quote from: "sanya310"

wow.. a beautiful piece sanya ji...kuch likha hai shayad aapko pasand aaye

chuban iss dard ki kaise main bayaan karu
pass jo tu nahi,chaaron pehar aahein bharu

kab talak yuhi mujhe tum sataoge mere humdum
aaapne hijar-o-gum ki kiske aage fariyad karu

har ghadi ek ajeeb sa shor sunai deta hai mujhe
dhadkano mein uthati maujoN ka kahan se main agaaz karu

yu tanha tanha kaise kaaTun main dard teri judai ka
aakhir insaan hu,aaise mein kab tak intezar ka zehar piyu...!!!


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sanya310

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«Reply #8 on: August 07, 2007, 10:21:08 AM »

thnx a lot manav.. boht hi khubsoorat farmaya hai apne bhi..

haathon mein haath liya,
lakeeron ko dekh kar mujhse kaha
humqalam ho gaye aap sabse
par aapka apna koi na ban saka
sachayi kitni hai in alfazon mein
phir khud ko khudse humqalam kar ke pocha
nikli awaz, dheere se koi farmaya
Shayad..shayad.


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Meena is back

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«Reply #9 on: August 08, 2007, 10:00:34 AM »

wah saniya!! manav ji...gud reply!!!

:D


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sanya310

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«Reply #10 on: August 08, 2007, 01:59:14 PM »

thnx a lot meena !! :D


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Pooja

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«Reply #11 on: August 08, 2007, 02:21:43 PM »

bahoot khoob sanya and Manav ji!!


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sanya310

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«Reply #12 on: August 08, 2007, 03:34:12 PM »

thnxa lot pooja.. Usual Smile


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Manav Mehra

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«Reply #13 on: August 09, 2007, 11:08:53 AM »

Thanks Meena and Pooja... app dono ne kuch nahi likha ??


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Manav Mehra

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«Reply #14 on: August 09, 2007, 11:11:28 AM »

Sanya app boohaat achha likhte ho

Quote from: "sanya310"

dard-e-judai mein teri khoye rehte hain
ashkon se palkein bheegoye baithe hain

sanjoye the khawab,wohi chubbe hain ajj
jinke dum par saansein piroye baithe hain

mere humkadam,mere jeevan saathi,
teri hi umeed se umeed loye* baithe hain

loye= roshni


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