Meri Sabse Acchi ...Poetry Shayad (Tanhayee ki mehfil )

by clicksahil on May 16, 2005, 06:11:23 AM
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yun bhi kabhi gamon ka pyala chalak pade
ras ban ke phool phool se khushbu tapak pade
kitna he main chupaun ghazal ke libas mein
tera wajood kahi na kahi se jhalak pade
iss roshni ko qaid kare bhi to koi kya,
jis roshni ke deep bahot dur tak pade
main chup khada raha jo khyalon ki gunj mein
meri taraf sadaaon ke patthar lapak pade
kis ped se tha rishta ab zikr kya karein
andhi chali to phool gire phal tapak pade
Samait lei humne umeed ki jhoothi yaadein
Jaante hai takdeer ke haatho majboor hai!
Gham sirf is baat ka hai ki
Kaash is dil ko samjhana humare bas mei hota!
Uljhaa hai dil uljhe hue sawaloon mei
Ki bankar reh gayee har shaam e zindagi
Tanhayee ki mehfil!
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«Reply #1 on: May 16, 2005, 06:13:06 AM »
Quote from: "clicksahil"
yun bhi kabhi gamon ka pyala chalak pade
ras ban ke phool phool se khushbu tapak pade
kitna he main chupaun ghazal ke libas mein
tera wajood kahi na kahi se jhalak pade
iss roshni ko qaid kare bhi to koi kya,
jis roshni ke deep bahot dur tak pade
main chup khada raha jo khyalon ki gunj mein
meri taraf sadaaon ke patthar lapak pade
kis ped se tha rishta ab zikr kya karein
andhi chali to phool gire phal tapak pade
Samait lei humne umeed ki jhoothi yaadein
Jaante hai takdeer ke haatho majboor hai!
Gham sirf is baat ka hai ki
Kaash is dil ko samjhana humare bas mei hota!
Uljhaa hai dil uljhe hue sawaloon mei
Ki bankar reh gayee har shaam e zindagi
Tanhayee ki mehfil!
wah sahil,bohat acche se tanhaiyon ka aalam pesh kiya hai appne,likhte rahiyega.
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«Reply #2 on: May 16, 2005, 06:36:10 AM »
thnx nidhi

ab naza ka alam hai tum apni muhabbat wapas lo
jab kashti doobne lagti hai to bhoj utara karte hain

kabhi to aisi bhi rut bhej mosmon ke khuda
ke mere ghar ka pata bhool jaye tanhayi

Kitna chaha hai tujhe, soch kabhi gor to kar
ham to apne bhi kabhi itne talabgar na the
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«Reply #3 on: May 16, 2005, 06:42:21 AM »
Kuch din to baso meri ankhon mein
fir khwaab agar ho jao to kya,
koi rang to do mere chehre ko
fir zakhm agar mehkao to kya,
ik aaina tha so toot gaya
ab khud se agar sharmao to kya,
main tanha tha main tanha hoon
tum aao to kya, na aao to kya,
jab hum hi na mehke fir sahib
tum *baad-e-saba kehlao to kya,
jab dekhne wala koi nahin
jal jaao to kya, bujh jaao to kya.

*baad-e-saba  = khusboo ka jhonka
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«Reply #4 on: May 16, 2005, 06:44:06 AM »
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Kuch dino to baso meri ankhon
fir khwaab agar ho jao to kya,
koi rang to do mere chehre ko
fir zakhm agar mehkao to kya,
ik aina tha so toot gaya
ab khud se agar sharmao to kya,
main tanha tha main tanha hoon
tum aao to kya na aoo to kya,
jab hum hi na mehke fir sahib
tu *baad-e-saba kehlao to kya,
jab dekhne wala koi nahin
jal jaao to kya, bujh jaao to kya.

*baad-e-saba  = khusboo ka jhonka
wah sahil..........bohat khoob tajinder.
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«Reply #5 on: May 16, 2005, 06:46:52 AM »
waah tajinder ... bahot khooob

Khaak bhi udaai hai iski gali ki
Mili hai saza ye haan dosti ki
Andhera maut ka hai mere saamne
Talash mein nikla tha zindagi ki
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«Reply #6 on: May 17, 2005, 08:21:03 AM »
tumhari tuh har poetry achi hoti hai Shail
ye bhi bahut hi khoob

uske lafzo main mujhe ek kasish nazar aati hai
sunke awaaj uski meri kismat sawar si jati hai

kya hai aisa usme vo dikhai nahi deta mujhe
par usko dekhne ko ek pal ke liye ankhen taras jati hai

nahi samaj pate hum kabhi bhi uska mijaj
kabhi hasata hai humko tuh kabhi sunke baatein uski aankhen baras jati hai
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«Reply #7 on: May 17, 2005, 08:30:34 AM »
excellent  work.........shahil...............sandhaya....... ..
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«Reply #8 on: May 17, 2005, 09:04:42 AM »
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excellent  work.........shahil...............sandhaya....... ..
sukhriya waheed Ji..............
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