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Mere ekhlaaq ki mujhse keemat mange
Yeh kharidaar dunya meri seerat mange
Meri pooja meri bandagee rahe kayem
Dil poojari mera aisi koi murat mange
Kitne khush the jab rahi sath muflisi apni
Meri daulat ab pehle si halet mange
Sang_e_marmar se bana Taj humse kehta hai
Koi insaa.N bhi fanaa hoker shorat mange
Itna ukta gaya zamane ki humdardi se
Zakhm_e_Ghayel mohabbat nahi nafrat mange
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«Reply #1 on: September 03, 2010, 02:28:26 PM » |
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Bahut bahut Khoob Sajid bhai..
Ek Alag Hi Andaaz Hai Aapka.. 
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«Reply #2 on: September 03, 2010, 02:42:27 PM » |
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sajid ji bht hi pyara likha hai aapne... 
kuch aapke jawab me likhn eki nakaam si koshish ki hai humne..
umeed hai aapko pasand aayegi...
Tujhse kuch pal sukun ki apni zindagi maange
Ee khuda ye adna insaan tujhse teri bandagee maange
Bht dekh liye maine yahan ishq mahobbat ka afsaane
Ab ye tujhse bas thodisi gairon k liye khushi mange
Zaalimon ne kahin ka nahin chhoda hai mere watan ko
Tujhse ye ab unke liye thodi si sadbuddhhi maange
Kar de ataa tu mujhe bas ab itni ruuh ki paakizgi
Behta paani bhi mujhe dekhe to mujhse meri saadgi mange…
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«Reply #3 on: September 03, 2010, 05:52:13 PM » |
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Ghayal Saheb Aadaab!
Aapki nayi kalaam dekhkar achcah laga.... 
kafi pur zor koshish kii hai aapne is kalaam meiN..
Sabhi ashaar achche hai......
Khususan 3rd One is best and maqta is also nice one...
Aise hi likhate rahiye...
Khush rahiye......
Khuda Hafez.....
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«Reply #4 on: September 04, 2010, 05:39:00 AM » |
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Mere ekhlaaq ki mujhse keemat mange
Yeh kharidaar dunya meri seerat mange
Meri pooja meri bandagee rahe kayem
Dil poojari mera aisi koi murat mange
Kitne khush the jab rahi sath muflisi apni
Meri daulat ab pehle si halet mange
Sang_e_marmar se bana Taj humse kehta hai
Koi insaa.N bhi fanaa hoker shorat mange
Itna ukta gaya zamane ki humdardi se
Zakhm_e_Ghayel mohabbat nahi nafrat mange
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«Reply #5 on: September 04, 2010, 05:40:52 AM » |
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«Reply #6 on: September 04, 2010, 03:15:59 PM » |
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sajid sahab aadab ,,
apki is munfarid takhleeq pe dili dad .. bahoth khoob kahete ho .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..takhir ke liye mazrat masrofiyat ziyada hain .. waqath ne baandh rakha hai ..
dua go
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«Reply #7 on: September 05, 2010, 10:15:27 PM » |
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sajid bhai ,beshak yeh ek munfarid takhleeq hai,daad...takheer ke liye mei bhi sharminda hon,aapki iss paishkash pe phir se hazaarao daad..dua ki darkhwast...
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«Reply #8 on: November 13, 2010, 10:49:46 AM » |
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«Reply #9 on: November 13, 2010, 11:37:31 AM » |
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Mere ekhlaaq ki mujhse keemat mange
Yeh kharidaar dunya meri seerat mange
Meri pooja meri bandagee rahe kayem
Dil poojari mera aisi koi murat mange
Kitne khush the jab rahi sath muflisi apni
Meri daulat ab pehle si halet mange
Sang_e_marmar se bana Taj humse kehta hai
Koi insaa.N bhi fanaa hoker shorat mange
Itna ukta gaya zamane ki humdardi se
Zakhm_e_Ghayel mohabbat nahi nafrat mange
Sajid Ghayel
aakhir sher to ghazab dha gaya bhai....dheron daad
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«Reply #10 on: November 13, 2010, 11:38:53 AM » |
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waise ek ghazal yaad aa gai
aaina mujhse meri pahli si surat mange....
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«Reply #11 on: November 13, 2010, 11:41:48 AM » |
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bahoot khoob sajid bhai...
aakhir sher to ghazab dha gaya bhai....dheron daad
Dil to ho raha hai poore Yoindia me meethaiee batwaoo aaj mere is pyaare dost ne bohat din baad mere thread par haziri di hai.....dil khush kar diya. |
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