Meri soch ......

by Just_Hate_Love on July 03, 2005, 01:52:31 PM
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Meri soch ne aisi ek tasveer banaayi,
Jaise ranjha ne apne liye ek heer banaayi,
Lehro ne aakar use baar baar mitaaya,
Lekin humne haar nahi maani koshish ki aur ek baar phir banaayi,
Hamnesha bhigaaye hamari palko ko aap,
Aisi khuda ne hamare liye takdeer banaayi ...
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: July 03, 2005, 01:58:26 PM »
Bohot Khoob JHL..........bohot khoob !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #2 on: July 03, 2005, 02:01:59 PM »
Bahut bahut sukriya aapka Talat ...
Thanks a lot for appreciation ...
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Meena
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«Reply #3 on: July 03, 2005, 02:45:25 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Meri soch ne aisi ek tasveer banaayi,
Jaise ranjha ne apne liye ek heer banaayi,
Lehro ne aakar use baar baar mitaaya,
Lekin humne haar nahi maani koshish ki aur ek baar phir banaayi,
Hamnesha bhigaaye hamari palko ko aap,
Aisi khuda ne hamare liye takdeer banaayi ...


gud gud!!!!  :D
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #4 on: July 03, 2005, 05:28:09 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Meri soch ne aisi ek tasveer banaayi,
Jaise ranjha ne apne liye ek heer banaayi,
Lehro ne aakar use baar baar mitaaya,
Lekin humne haar nahi maani koshish ki aur ek baar phir banaayi,
Hamnesha bhigaaye hamari palko ko aap,
Aisi khuda ne hamare liye takdeer banaayi ...



bahot  khoob dost.............jhl............................. .tongue3
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #5 on: July 03, 2005, 07:37:29 PM »
Jhl.............................................. ........... Nice Yaar.........................
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #6 on: July 03, 2005, 09:02:12 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Meri soch ne aisi ek tasveer banaayi,
Jaise ranjha ne apne liye ek heer banaayi,
Lehro ne aakar use baar baar mitaaya,
Lekin humne haar nahi maani koshish ki aur ek baar phir banaayi,
Hamnesha bhigaaye hamari palko ko aap,
Aisi khuda ne hamare liye takdeer banaayi ...


wah wah wah DAMN GOOD "JHL".......very nice!!!!
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«Reply #7 on: July 04, 2005, 05:46:48 PM »
Wah Jhl,kya khoob likha hai,very nice......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #8 on: July 05, 2005, 05:58:57 PM »
Thanks a lot Meena, Waheed bhai, Faree, Isha and Niddhi for appreciation of this post ...
Ye post mere liye bahut ehmiyat rakhti hai ...
Ye meri likhi gayi shayari mein se favourite hai ...
Thanks once again ...
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #9 on: July 07, 2005, 08:18:59 AM »
Muskuraana tha par muskuraa na sake,
Geet khushiyon ke hum gaa na sake,
Paraaye to kabhi apne bante nahi,
Hum apno ko bhi apna banaa na sake ...
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #10 on: July 15, 2005, 06:17:44 PM »
Badh gaya tha pyaas ka ehsaas dariyaa dekhkar,
Hum palat aaye magar paani ko pyaasa dekhkar,
Hum bhi hai shayad kisi bhatki hui kashti ke log,
Chikhne lagte hai khwaabo mein jajeera dekhkar ...
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Aryaan
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«Reply #11 on: July 15, 2005, 06:30:16 PM »
Ek se barh kar ek hai..... Bohat achey JHL..........
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #12 on: July 17, 2005, 06:21:59 PM »
Thanks a lot Aryan for appreciation ...
It is one my my favourite one ...
I too like it so much ...


Aaj ki raat bhi guzri hai meri kal ki tarah,
Haath aaye na sitaare tere aanchal ki tarah,
Raat jalti hui ek aisi chita hai jis par,
Teri yaadein hai sulagte hue sandal ki tarah ...
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #13 on: July 17, 2005, 07:00:21 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Thanks a lot Aryan for appreciation ...
It is one my my favourite one ...
I too like it so much ...


Aaj ki raat bhi guzri hai meri kal ki tarah,
Haath aaye na sitaare tere aanchal ki tarah,
Raat jalti hui ek aisi chita hai jis par,
Teri yaadein hai sulagte hue sandal ki tarah ...


wah wah very nice JHL........" teri yaadein hai sulagte  hue sandal ki tarh" GOOD!!!!!!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #14 on: July 18, 2005, 12:01:22 AM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Thanks a lot Aryan for appreciation ...
It is one my my favourite one ...
I too like it so much ...


Aaj ki raat bhi guzri hai meri kal ki tarah,
Haath aaye na sitaare tere aanchal ki tarah,
Raat jalti hui ek aisi chita hai jis par,
Teri yaadein hai sulagte hue sandal ki tarah ...

Very Nice JHL...
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