Meri Tanhaai mai

by Pooja on December 16, 2008, 05:05:49 PM
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«Reply #15 on: December 18, 2008, 11:24:00 AM »
Shukriya Pooja Didi,.
And Cara JI,.

And Nice One Again,.
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«Reply #16 on: December 19, 2008, 03:55:43 AM »
Jo Nazar Se Guzar Jaaya Karte Hai,
Woh Sitaare Aksar Toot Jaaya Karte Hai...


Gardish-e-Halaat Ke Daur Se Chal Hi Raha The,
Ke Raah Mein Aur Gham Mile,Aise Mein,
Hum Aksar Gham Ke Samundar Mein Doob Jaaya Karte Hai....


Kuch Log Dard Ko Bayaan Nahi Karte,
Bas, Chup-Chap Bikhar Jaaya Karte Hai....


Tanhai Ka Dard, Naseeb Mein Dono Ke Likha Tha,
Par Apne Dard Ki Inteha Dekho,
Haath Mein Phool Bhi Tham Jaaye To Chub Jaaya Karte Hai....


Saath-Saath Reh Kar Bhi Jo Saath Na Reh Paaya,
Uss Rishte Se Kya Haasil???
Waqt Ki Aandhi Mein Kabhi-Kabhi Dil Mein Base,
Jazbaat Bhi Mar Jaaya Karte Hai....


"KHWAISH" GAIRO SE AUR KUCH NAHI,
TO PAL DO PAL KA SAATH TO MILA!!!
'POOJA' KABHI-KABHI APNE HI
APNE GHAR KO LOOT JAAYA KARTE HAI......
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«Reply #17 on: December 19, 2008, 04:05:58 AM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahoot khoob khwaish ji..
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«Reply #18 on: December 19, 2008, 04:22:36 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on December 19, 2008, 03:55:43 AM
Jo Nazar Se Guzar Jaaya Karte Hai,
Woh Sitaare Aksar Toot Jaaya Karte Jaaya Karte Hai...


Gardish-e-Halaat Ke Daur Se Chal Hi Raha The,
Ke Raah Mein Aur Gham Mile,Aise Mein,
Hum Aksar Gham Ke Samundar Mein Doob Jaaya Karte Hai....


Kuch Log Dard Ko Bayaan Nahi Karte,
Bas, Chup-Chap Bikhar Jaaya Karte Hai....


Tanhai Ka Dard, Naseeb Mein Dono Ke Likha Tha,
Par Apne Dard Ki Inteha Dekho,
Haath Mein Phool Bhi Tham Jaaye To Chub Jaaya Karte Hai....


Saath-Saath Reh Kar Bhi Jo Saath Na Reh Paaya,
Uss Rishte Se Kya Haasil???
Waqt Ki Aandhi Mein Kabhi-Kabhi Dil Mein Base,
Jazbaat Bhi Mar Jaaya Karte Hai....


"KHWAISH" GAIRO SE AUR KUCH NAHI,
TO PAL DO PAL KA SAATH TO MILA!!!
'POOJA' KABHI-KABHI APNE HI
APNE GHAR KO LOOT JAAYA KARTE HAI......

Bahut hi achchi rachna hai Khwaish Ji
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«Reply #19 on: December 19, 2008, 04:33:20 AM »
bahoot khoob nikharta jaa raha hein aapka thread pooja ji,fir se padha,fir se accha laga.
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«Reply #20 on: December 19, 2008, 04:38:10 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on December 19, 2008, 03:55:43 AM
Jo Nazar Se Guzar Jaaya Karte Hai,
Woh Sitaare Aksar Toot Jaaya Karte Jaaya Karte Hai...


Gardish-e-Halaat Ke Daur Se Chal Hi Raha The,
Ke Raah Mein Aur Gham Mile,Aise Mein,
Hum Aksar Gham Ke Samundar Mein Doob Jaaya Karte Hai....


Kuch Log Dard Ko Bayaan Nahi Karte,
Bas, Chup-Chap Bikhar Jaaya Karte Hai....


Tanhai Ka Dard, Naseeb Mein Dono Ke Likha Tha,
Par Apne Dard Ki Inteha Dekho,
Haath Mein Phool Bhi Tham Jaaye To Chub Jaaya Karte Hai....


Saath-Saath Reh Kar Bhi Jo Saath Na Reh Paaya,
Uss Rishte Se Kya Haasil???
Waqt Ki Aandhi Mein Kabhi-Kabhi Dil Mein Base,
Jazbaat Bhi Mar Jaaya Karte Hai....


"KHWAISH" GAIRO SE AUR KUCH NAHI,
TO PAL DO PAL KA SAATH TO MILA!!!
'POOJA' KABHI-KABHI APNE HI
APNE GHAR KO LOOT JAAYA KARTE HAI......

 Applause Applause Applause

zabardast rachna.aapka kamaal hein ,khwaish bhai.
''haath mein phool bhee thaan jaaye to chubh jaaya kartey hein''-vaakai,bahut khoob.
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«Reply #21 on: December 19, 2008, 12:32:45 PM »
Bohat Achcha LOikha Hai Khwaish Ji,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.
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«Reply #22 on: December 21, 2008, 04:52:30 AM »
Quote from: Prateek Mardia on December 19, 2008, 04:33:20 AM
bahoot khoob nikharta jaa raha hein aapka thread pooja ji,fir se padha,fir se accha laga.

shukaria Prateek ji, apki taraf se bhi kuch padne ko mil jaaye to hume bhi acha lagega
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«Reply #23 on: December 21, 2008, 10:22:04 AM »
Apni Tanhaaiyon Mein Mashroof The Hum,.
Aaj Muddat Bad Kisi Ne Pukaara Hai,.

Ek Pal Ke Liye To Sochne Lage,
Kya Ye Naam Hamaara Hai,.

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«Reply #24 on: December 21, 2008, 04:57:55 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on December 19, 2008, 03:55:43 AM
Jo Nazar Se Guzar Jaaya Karte Hai,
Woh Sitaare Aksar Toot Jaaya Karte Hai...


Gardish-e-Halaat Ke Daur Se Chal Hi Raha The,
Ke Raah Mein Aur Gham Mile,Aise Mein,
Hum Aksar Gham Ke Samundar Mein Doob Jaaya Karte Hai....


Kuch Log Dard Ko Bayaan Nahi Karte,
Bas, Chup-Chap Bikhar Jaaya Karte Hai....


Tanhai Ka Dard, Naseeb Mein Dono Ke Likha Tha,
Par Apne Dard Ki Inteha Dekho,
Haath Mein Phool Bhi Tham Jaaye To Chub Jaaya Karte Hai....


Saath-Saath Reh Kar Bhi Jo Saath Na Reh Paaya,
Uss Rishte Se Kya Haasil???
Waqt Ki Aandhi Mein Kabhi-Kabhi Dil Mein Base,
Jazbaat Bhi Mar Jaaya Karte Hai....


"KHWAISH" GAIRO SE AUR KUCH NAHI,
TO PAL DO PAL KA SAATH TO MILA!!!
'POOJA' KABHI-KABHI APNE HI
APNE GHAR KO LOOT JAAYA KARTE HAI......


bahut badiya Khwaish

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #25 on: December 21, 2008, 04:58:56 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 21, 2008, 10:22:04 AM
Apni Tanhaaiyon Mein Mashroof The Hum,.
Aaj Muddat Bad Kisi Ne Pukaara Hai,.

Ek Pal Ke Liye To Sochne Lage,
Kya Ye Naam Hamaara Hai,.

__________________-Jaanasheen-


hai kya baat hai Jahanasheen

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #26 on: December 21, 2008, 06:12:55 PM »
Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 21, 2008, 10:22:04 AM
Apni Tanhaaiyon Mein Mashroof The Hum,.
Aaj Muddat Bad Kisi Ne Pukaara Hai,.

Ek Pal Ke Liye To Sochne Lage,
Kya Ye Naam Hamaara Hai,.

__________________-Jaanasheen-
Wah!Jaanasheen Bhai Bahut Khoob Likha Hai
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«Reply #27 on: December 21, 2008, 09:53:02 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on December 19, 2008, 03:55:43 AM
Jo Nazar Se Guzar Jaaya Karte Hai,
Woh Sitaare Aksar Toot Jaaya Karte Hai...

Gardish-e-Halaat Ke Daur Se Chal Hi Raha The,
Ke Raah Mein Aur Gham Mile,Aise Mein,
Hum Aksar Gham Ke Samundar Mein Doob Jaaya Karte Hai....

Kuch Log Dard Ko Bayaan Nahi Karte,
Bas, Chup-Chap Bikhar Jaaya Karte Hai....

Tanhai Ka Dard, Naseeb Mein Dono Ke Likha Tha,
Par Apne Dard Ki Inteha Dekho,
Haath Mein Phool Bhi Tham Jaaye To Chub Jaaya Karte Hai....

Saath-Saath Reh Kar Bhi Jo Saath Na Reh Paaya,
Uss Rishte Se Kya Haasil???
Waqt Ki Aandhi Mein Kabhi-Kabhi Dil Mein Base,
Jazbaat Bhi Mar Jaaya Karte Hai....

"KHWAISH" GAIRO SE AUR KUCH NAHI,
TO PAL DO PAL KA SAATH TO MILA!!!
'POOJA' KABHI-KABHI APNE HI
APNE GHAR KO LOOT JAAYA KARTE HAI......

khwaish ji, kai baar apki kavita pari aor deemag band... kuch samjh nahi ayya ki kaya likhu... ajj phir se koshish ki hai, aor jo bhi man main ayya likhne ja rahi hu

najar main aa kar bichar jaana
kaya kahe armaano ka bikhar jaana

rooh-e-muhobat ka mil kar bichar jaana
bichar kar gardish-e-jamane main thokare khana

khamoshi main bhi apni cheekho ko sune jaana
kaise samjhaye, dil-e-halaat ka tadap kar rah jaana

kanto ko bhi phoolo sa pyar dete jaana
saalo ki mehnat per, sar-e-amm paani ka phir jaana

her andhi-tufaan se apno ko wo mar mar kar bachana
apno ka he sar-e-amm, is tarah chor jaana

Pooja ka apne he sabar main doob kar loot jaana
kabhi kabhi such main, mushkil hota hai is kadar jiye jaana

najar main aa kar bichar jaana
kaya kahe armaano ka bikhar jaana...
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«Reply #28 on: December 22, 2008, 06:23:32 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on December 21, 2008, 09:53:02 PM
khwaish ji, kai baar apki kavita pari aor deemag band... kuch samjh nahi ayya ki kaya likhu... ajj phir se koshish ki hai, aor jo bhi man main ayya likhne ja rahi hu

najar main aa kar bichar jaana
kaya kahe armaano ka bikhar jaana

rooh-e-muhobat ka mil kar bichar jaana
bichar kar gardish-e-jamane main thokare khana

khamoshi main bhi apni cheekho ko sune jaana
kaise samjhaye, dil-e-halaat ka tadap kar rah jaana

kanto ko bhi phoolo sa pyar dete jaana
saalo ki mehnat per, sar-e-amm paani ka phir jaana

her andhi-tufaan se apno ko wo mar mar kar bachana
apno ka he sar-e-amm, is tarah chor jaana

Pooja ka apne he sabar main doob kar loot jaana
kabhi kabhi such main, mushkil hota hai is kadar jiye jaana

najar main aa kar bichar jaana
kaya kahe armaano ka bikhar jaana...


bahut acchaa likha hai aap neh JI.


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«Reply #29 on: December 22, 2008, 12:46:35 PM »
Shukriya jasbir Bhiya,.
and rajesh Bhaiya,.

And Nice One,.
Pooja Didi,.
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