Meri teemar rahne do........mann

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Mujhe beemar rahne do.
Meri teemar rahne do.

Dawa mat do mujhe koi,
Mera aazaar rahne do.

Mujhe bas ek khushi de do,
Ye sab sansar rahne do.

Banaoge mujhe apna,
Suno ai yaar rahne do.

Mitao mat mere darr ko,
Tangi talwar rahne do.

Yahan toofan aana hai,
Unhe us paar rahne do.

Mann
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«Reply #1 on: June 26, 2012, 03:59:08 AM »
"yahaaN toofaan aanaa hai.
 unhe us paar rahne do."   waah waah bahut khoob  sher banaa hai mann ji is par dheron daad
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«Reply #2 on: June 26, 2012, 05:38:13 AM »
Bahut hi khoob ashaar hain Mannji.bahut bahut mubarak
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«Reply #3 on: June 26, 2012, 06:50:35 AM »
vaah jee vaah
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«Reply #4 on: June 26, 2012, 09:53:02 AM »
Quote from: mann.mann on June 26, 2012, 03:52:24 AM
Mujhe beemar rahne do.
Meri teemar rahne do.

Dawa mat do mujhe koi,
Mera aazaar rahne do.

Mujhe bas ek khushi de do,
Ye sab sansar rahne do.

Banaoge mujhe apna,
Suno ai yaar rahne do.

Mitao mat mere darr ko,
Tangi talwar rahne do.

Yahan toofan aana hai,
Unhe us paar rahne do.

Mann



Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Bahut Bahut Khoob Mann Ji..

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«Reply #5 on: June 26, 2012, 10:58:42 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: June 26, 2012, 03:48:19 PM »
waah very nice
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«Reply #7 on: June 26, 2012, 04:28:09 PM »
yahaan tufaan aana hai,
unhe us paar rahne do.

bahut khoob....ise kahate hai ........sher.
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«Reply #8 on: June 26, 2012, 04:34:55 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: June 26, 2012, 04:36:58 PM »
~~ wwaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaahhh ~~~

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«Reply #10 on: June 26, 2012, 04:39:52 PM »
kya baat hai mann ji......... bahut khubsurat kalaam do shero ne to dil hi loot liya...3rd aur last sher ne...........baht bahut mubarakbaad....... Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: June 26, 2012, 04:51:17 PM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #12 on: June 27, 2012, 03:21:01 AM »
bahut ahut shukriya janab sainiji... bas ek naakaam si koshish hai....
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«Reply #13 on: June 27, 2012, 03:33:17 AM »
Quote from: mann.mann on June 26, 2012, 03:52:24 AM
Mujhe beemar rahne do.
Meri teemar rahne do.

Dawa mat do mujhe koi,
Mera aazaar rahne do.

Mujhe bas ek khushi de do,
Ye sab sansar rahne do.

Banaoge mujhe apna,
Suno ai yaar rahne do.

Mitao mat mere darr ko,
Tangi talwar rahne do.

Yahan toofan aana hai,
Unhe us paar rahne do.

Mann


wah mann jee aapne bahut khoob likha hai  Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: June 27, 2012, 03:48:58 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya hasanji
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