Meri thakan....... !!!!

by Talat on June 16, 2006, 07:50:15 PM
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Tinkon ka ashiaana banane ki saza hai paayi
Na jaane kiski nazar ne bijliyaan hain giraayi

Umr guzri sada dil ki karchiyaan sametne me
Har baar dil ko joda, har baar hai chot khaayi

Har din guzra hai aansuon ka zehar peete peete
Zakhm kuch aur kuredne ko har raat hai meri aayi

Mohabbat naam kya bas afsaanon me hi reh gaya?
Humne to chahat ke badle chahat na kabhi paayi

Tamanna hai koi na ab aankhon main hain diye
Dil me hai uthi jab bhi, har aas humne bujhaai

Sadiyon sa lagta hai zindagi ka ye safar mujhko
Mere wujood me barson ki jaise thakan utar aayi !!!
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #1 on: June 16, 2006, 07:53:24 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Tinkon ka ashiaana banane ki saza hai paayi
Na jaane kiski nazar ne bijliyaan hain giraayi

Umr guzri sada dil ki karchiyaan sametne me
Har baar dil ko joda, har baar hai chot khaayi

Har din guzra hai aansuon ka zehar peete peete
Zakhm kuch aur kuredne ko har raat hai meri aayi

Mohabbat naam kya bas afsaanon me hi reh gaya?
Humne to chahat ke badle chahat na kabhi paayi

Tamanna hai koi na ab aankhon main hain diye
Dil me hai uthi jab bhi, har aas humne bujhaai

Sadiyon sa lagta hai zindagi ka ye safar mujhko
Mere wujood me barson ki jaise thakan utar aayi !!!


Marvalous Talat Jabeen......!!!!!!!
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phoenix
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«Reply #2 on: June 16, 2006, 07:56:22 PM »
too gud talat ji
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Aryaan
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«Reply #3 on: June 17, 2006, 01:21:08 AM »
Bohat hi khoob Talat...
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Shikha12
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«Reply #4 on: June 17, 2006, 04:07:24 AM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Tinkon ka ashiaana banane ki saza hai paayi
Na jaane kiski nazar ne bijliyaan hain giraayi

Umr guzri sada dil ki karchiyaan sametne me
Har baar dil ko joda, har baar hai chot khaayi

Har din guzra hai aansuon ka zehar peete peete
Zakhm kuch aur kuredne ko har raat hai meri aayi

Mohabbat naam kya bas afsaanon me hi reh gaya?
Humne to chahat ke badle chahat na kabhi paayi

Tamanna hai koi na ab aankhon main hain diye
Dil me hai uthi jab bhi, har aas humne bujhaai

Sadiyon sa lagta hai zindagi ka ye safar mujhko
Mere wujood me barson ki jaise thakan utar aayi !!!


Marvellous Work Talat...


Thaki thaki si lagti hai yeh zindagi mujhey...
Aakar kash koi mera haath thaam ley...
Le chaley mujh ko is thakaan sey door kahin,
Sanson ko ab meri kuch to aaraam dey....

Do kadam ab to chala nahin jata humsey..
E chand tu hi mere meet ko yeh paigaam dey...
Te'her gayi hai Tanhaii aakar raat ki tarah...
Zindagi mey meri bhi kuch subaah-shaam dey...[/b]
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: June 18, 2006, 01:57:54 PM »
Thanks a lot Gaurav, Phoenix, Aryaan and Shikha !!!

Bohot khoob Shikha and thanks for writing !
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #6 on: June 18, 2006, 02:24:57 PM »
bahut khoob talat
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Rajbir
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«Reply #7 on: June 18, 2006, 05:02:58 PM »
Talat, Shikha

Bahut khoob ! =D> =D> =D>

Baki ke maharathion ne kuch nahi likha  Puzzled !

Rajbir
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ranjana
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«Reply #8 on: June 18, 2006, 05:34:32 PM »
bahoot khub Talat and shikha............

aaj toh kuch aisa karo jatan
mit jaye mann aur tan ki thakan

kuch toh ho aaj baat kuch aise
jisse khil uthey mera maan

dil mein ha kuch bojh aisa
jiski hoti rehti hai har pal chubhan

aaj toh mere sare gum bisara do
aisa aaj koi mantar chala do
bas khushi se jhumata rahe yeh tan badan

aaj toh karo kuch aisa jatan
mit jaaye mann aur tan ki thakan
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Rajbir
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«Reply #9 on: June 18, 2006, 05:53:56 PM »
Ranju

Wah ! Bahut achche =D>
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ranjana
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«Reply #10 on: June 18, 2006, 06:26:47 PM »
shukriya RAJBIR........... Usual Smile aapko pasand aaya aacha laga
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redwhitegang
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«Reply #11 on: June 18, 2006, 07:42:38 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Tinkon ka ashiaana banane ki saza hai paayi
Na jaane kiski nazar ne bijliyaan hain giraayi

Umr guzri sada dil ki karchiyaan sametne me
Har baar dil ko joda, har baar hai chot khaayi

Har din guzra hai aansuon ka zehar peete peete
Zakhm kuch aur kuredne ko har raat hai meri aayi

Mohabbat naam kya bas afsaanon me hi reh gaya?
Humne to chahat ke badle chahat na kabhi paayi

Tamanna hai koi na ab aankhon main hain diye
Dil me hai uthi jab bhi, har aas humne bujhaai

Sadiyon sa lagta hai zindagi ka ye safar mujhko
Mere wujood me barson ki jaise thakan utar aayi !!!


bohot khub talat ji! Usual Smile

Ham tinkon se aasian sajane wale
Duniya mein aaye hein dard pane ke liye
Teri duniya mein khud ko jalakar rousan karte hein
Badle me paatein hein ek bund pani aag bujhne ke liye
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #12 on: June 18, 2006, 08:20:22 PM »
Gud Job Ranju and Shahid bhai Usual Smile

Aaj teri Thakaan me jalte mere Tishnagi par jara Gaur farmana......
Khawaab the jo humne saath dekhe aaj unhe jara apne paav tale raundh jaana......

Dekh ke lakeer tere Jabeen ki humne bhari mehfil kuch farma dia......
Kar jaana woh adhoori baatein poori apni Zindagi ke kuch Jawaab mujhe de jaana......

Rakhenge kuch yaad baatein tumhari......
Bas tum meri Dillagi ka Jurmaanah mujhe soap jaana......

Aaj teri thakaan me jalte mere Tishnagi par jara Gaur farmana......!!!!!!!!



Tishnagi=Desires......Jabeen=Forehead........Jurmaanah=Fine
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Rajbir
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«Reply #13 on: June 18, 2006, 08:30:39 PM »
Shahid, Gaurav

Very good !

Gaurav--->Shabash !

Rajbir
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ranjana
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«Reply #14 on: June 19, 2006, 02:58:08 AM »
bahut khub Gaurav and Shahid ........very nice....... Usual Smile
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