Meri thakan....... !!!! -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

redwhitegang

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«Reply #15 on: June 19, 2006, 04:15:47 AM »

Bohot khub gaurav! Usual Smile

Shukriya Rajbir ji! aur Ranjana ji :D


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Shikha12

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Meri thakan....... !!!!

«Reply #16 on: June 19, 2006, 07:02:52 AM »

Thak key choor-choor hai hum apni zindagi sey,
Dekho Kitney majboor hai hum apni zindagi sey...
Roz bulawa bhejtey hai maut ko aaney kaa....
Kehti hai darr lagta hai mujhey teri zindagi sey....
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Aryaan

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Meri thakan....... !!!!

«Reply #17 on: June 20, 2006, 01:24:41 AM »

Bohat khoob Shikha, Ranjana, BS & RWG...


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Shikha12

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Meri thakan....... !!!!

«Reply #18 on: June 20, 2006, 04:35:15 AM »

Thanks Aryan ji......

Kuch sukoon dey mujko apney aagosh mey,
Kuch to aaram dey tu meri sanson ko bhi....
Merey dhadktey dil pey apna haath rakh dey,
Tanha Chaltey Thak gayi ab meri zindagi.....

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redwhitegang

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Meri thakan....... !!!!

«Reply #19 on: June 20, 2006, 01:59:26 PM »

masa allah !!!!!!!!!!!! kya baat hein shikha ji!!!! bohot khub Usual Smile


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ranjana

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Meri thakan....... !!!!

«Reply #20 on: June 20, 2006, 03:11:28 PM »

thaka thaka sa jeevan mujhko ek putala sa dikhta hai
jaise koi reit ka teela pighla-pighla sa lagata hai
kadi dhup sa jal raha hai yeh jeevan mera
saya bhi ab yahan apna ajnabi sa lagta hai
yahi jhulajh ke marna hoga ,aisa mujhko lagta hai


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Shikha12

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Meri thakan....... !!!!

«Reply #21 on: June 21, 2006, 11:35:09 AM »

Shukriya RWG..... Nice one Ranjana.....

Thodi si panaah dey, aur thoda hosla dey...
zindagi mujhko bhi kuch jeeney ki ada dey....

Kuch to thakan kum kardey ab meri
Mujhko bhi tu apney seeney sey laga ley...

Du'r hai manzil meri, raasta hai lamba bahut,
Sath chalney ko koi mera rehnuma dey...

Thak gaye hai yun chupchap chaltey chaltey,
Kuch kehney ka hosla aur hasney ki dua dey....

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Bharat

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«Reply #22 on: June 26, 2006, 01:44:27 AM »

Quote from: "Talat"

Tinkon ka ashiaana banane ki saza hai paayi
Na jaane kiski nazar ne bijliyaan hain giraayi

Umr guzri sada dil ki karchiyaan sametne me
Har baar dil ko joda, har baar hai chot khaayi

Har din guzra hai aansuon ka zehar peete peete
Zakhm kuch aur kuredne ko har raat hai meri aayi

Mohabbat naam kya bas afsaanon me hi reh gaya?
Humne to chahat ke badle chahat na kabhi paayi

Tamanna hai koi na ab aankhon main hain diye
Dil me hai uthi jab bhi, har aas humne bujhaai

Sadiyon sa lagta hai zindagi ka ye safar mujhko
Mere wujood me barson ki jaise thakan utar aayi !!!

Hi Talat,
Wonderful..........Bohot hi khoob.......

Shikha, Ranjana, Redwhitegang & Gaurav
To all....Very nicely written !!!


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tabassum shakeel

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Meri thakan....... !!!!

«Reply #23 on: June 26, 2006, 06:04:42 AM »

veri nice talat

tinko ka aashiyana banane ki saza paai hai
saari bijali mere ghar ki aur khinchi chali aai hai
hamne tumne jo banaya tha bade shoq se ghar
aaj kyon iski dushman bani khudaai hai
tinka tinka tha sameta tha jab banaya ye ghar
ek aandhi ne faqat pal me hi mita dala
aur ham tum hain phir bina chhat ke
dil me vo pyaar aaj bhi to hai
ek naya ghar phir ham banaenge
jab talak dil me pyar baaqi hai
laakh andhi chale ya bijali gire
ghar naya ham banae jaenge
ya khuda tera raham ham par hai
teri bijali jo giri ghar pe giri
ghar naya aur bhi ban jaaega
par meri tujhse iltija ye hai
tu kisi pyaar bhare dil pe kabhi
koi bijali nahi gira dena.........

har ek dil ek aashiyana hai
pyar bas khush vahin pe rahta hai
ispe lillah tu karam karna
ise khush khush vahin rahne dena............


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Talat

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Meri thakan....... !!!!

«Reply #24 on: June 28, 2006, 04:47:59 PM »

Thanks a lot friends !!

Very nice work...Ranjana, Shikha, Shaihd, Gaurav, Bharat and Tabassum !!


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tabassum shakeel

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Meri thakan....... !!!!

«Reply #25 on: June 28, 2006, 05:17:30 PM »

thanx talat


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Bharat

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Meri thakan....... !!!!

«Reply #26 on: June 29, 2006, 02:07:40 AM »

Quote from: "Talat"

Thanks a lot friends !!

Very nice work...Ranjana, Shikha, Shaihd, Gaurav, Bharat and Tabassum !!

Thanks Talat !!!


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ranjana

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Meri thakan....... !!!!

«Reply #27 on: June 29, 2006, 02:10:09 AM »

shukriya Talat........... Usual Smile


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Tosha

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«Reply #28 on: June 30, 2006, 09:32:18 AM »

Quote from: "Talat"

wow .. good ya!!


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Talat

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Meri thakan....... !!!!

«Reply #29 on: June 30, 2006, 02:08:20 PM »

Thanks a lot Tosha Usual Smile


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